Raizada and Sons - Thread 4 - Page 80

So the enigma that is Suraj is finally being stripped and revealed. You have done a fab job with how you have managed to build this whole mystery around him. For me this story is as much as Suraj's as it is Arnav and Kushi's. For a virtual character that is not inspired by the show, that's a damn good job.

For some reason, I have a strong affinity for Suraj. yes his stalkerish tendencies are off putting, but there is just so much more to him. or its may be I dig men who have been spurned by those who love, yet never give up loving them.

The slow transformation of arnav's character is also subtly described. The story is mostly told from K's perspective, but the changes in Arnav are slowly noticeable.

You really are writing this story superbly. Actually you can market this story to a PH and this can be remade in to a teleserial. This would be a damn good book to be made into a serial. I would love to see this on television or big screen. And you should start trying your luck as a creative writer. You really have a very good ability to weave stories. Will be eagerly awaiting the next update.

I hate when people have to put on mask for society sake and behave decently like here Arnav and Khushi had to put on a smile and wish Viren...I really wanted to kill tat scumbag for all the vile things he did...This suraj is truly a mystery!! hmmm...nice update,..some answers, some leads, too many questions...skeleton search :-) ok I will wait patiently for you to unearthen them :-)

the chapter threw more light on suraj.
i was surprised to know that viren and suraj go way back.
i wish arnav would unearth all the truth soon.

interesting story of Suraj...I still feel he is illegimate son of tayaji and hence he is using Viren in his game.. guess thats the reason KBV refused his alliance to Kushi

it was such a brilliant update..Loved how Khushi found Suraj a mysterious person...A really very interesting story :)

amaxng update dear...
lovd the maturity n thoughtfulness of arhi...

Its really pleasant to see Arnav and Khushi work as a team - now that both are focusing on Suraj am sure there is lot of mystery unfolding thats going to take place... 😊

Suraj is leaving no stones unturned for Khushi... has he finally concluded that Khushi is already Arnav's and that there's no use of trying to get her? Or is he still on the pursuit of getting her? By hook, or by crook!