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Posted: 12 years ago
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waiting for ur next update ...continue soon dear
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@preethi: whn r u gonna update???? 😭

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hey preeti update soon ...egarly waiting 4 ur next update dear ...
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Hey preeti!!
Love this FF!!!
Plz continue soon!!
Can't wait 4 ur next update!!
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Congrats on the second thread
Loved how virat and maanvi are always disagreeing with each other, I hope maanvi is alright from the pain in her stomach.
Thanks for the pm
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Chapter 20: Sleepless night

A bit later on in the day Maanvi found herself feeling nauseous and sick. Jeevika had given her the appropriate medicine but her health hadn't seemed to improve.

'Maanvi? Are you okay?' Prem asked her, concerned.

'Yeah' I'm fine...just a bit tired,' Maanvi replied unconvincingly.

'Come on, I'll take you up to your room, you're not well. You need to rest,' Prem told her.

'Prem I'm fine-' Maanvi interrupted.

'Shh' come on,' Prem insisted.

Maanvi gave in, sighing, 'Fine.'

'That's ma gurl!' Prem replied enthusiastically.

Maanvi and Prem, hand in hand took their first couple of steps toward the room but Maanvi's body gave in. Her head throbbed, her eyes stung, her body ached and she was unbalanced.

'You're definitely not okay Miss,' Prem emphasised as he lifted her up.

'Prem, put me down!' Maanvi insisted knowing he wasn't going to listen.

'Nope and don't you try to argue with me,' Prem smiled his cheeky grin and winked.

Maanvi sighed, again. Nobody listened to her anymore. Just then Virat came to the living room where he saw Maanvi in Prem's arms. Burnnn' ouch' that hurt. He rushed over to them.

'Erm' is Maanvi okay? Can I help?' Virat asked.

'What? Help in carrying me because both of you think I apparently can't walk?' Maanvi asked frustrated recalling how Virat had lifted her earlier in the day.

'That's because you can't,' Virat and Prem replied in unison.

'WHAT?! Prem-put. Me. Down. Right now!' Maanvi ordered.

'Prem don't put her down,' Virat suggested.

'Oh I won't,' Prem confirmed, 'Kahoon tho ayse hi uthaa kar mandap mein le jaa kar phere le loon? (If you insist I can take you to the mandap like this and marry you)?' Prem winked as he asked.

Maanvi's relaxed face tensed and the smile on Virat's face vanished. There was an awkward silence' a really bad awkward silence because all three of them knew what each other were thinking. Marriage-the word that had shattered Maanvi's life, the word that had become a part of history had made its way into her presence.

'Um, Prem? Can you put me down now? I-I'm fine,' Maanvi asked.

'Yeah sure,' Prem didn't want to argue' it wouldn't make the awkward situation any better.

The dizziness hadn't disappeared as Maanvi stepped on to the floor. She lost balance and Virat caught her. The mini eye lock they had was enough to make Maanvi feel even more awkward. Maanvi let go of Virat and went up to her room' her room as in the room separate to Virat's.

Afternoon passed by and so did night. Virat waited for Maanvi to come back to his room to sleep-she didn't. Each minute passing by on the clock felt like an hour. Virat didn't really feel like going to Maanvi's room and asking her to come to his' he just wanted her to come without invitation, but she didn't. Virat decided to go to sleep and believed that Maanvi would come a little later. Hours passed and it came to 12am' she still wasn't beside him and he couldn't get to sleep.

On the other side of the house, in Maanvi's room, a restless Maanvi was lying in bed unable to get to sleep either. She really didn't have the courage to go into Virat's room today' after the topic of 'marriage' being brought up. Maanvi wondered why it had affected her so much, it wasn't that a big deal? Whatever it was, at the moment there was only one thing that Maanvi knew and that was the she couldn't get to sleep. The clock somehow managed to drag ever minute and tick-tock its way to 1am but sleep didn't come. Maanvi didn't want to but she had to admit that a night without a comfort of' his arms meant no sleep. She hated confessing that she needed him now'. to sleep of course.

Virat sighed. It was too hard. He couldn't get to sleep without her. He felt angry with her for not coming but then calmed himself down. She was probably asleep by now and he was probably the idiot who was awake in the expectation that she would come. Nope. It was way too hard. Virat got out of bed and out his door making his way to Maanvi's room.

Maanvi was doing the same' she crept out of her room, ashamed from the inside that she couldn't go to sleep without him, and made her way to Virat's room. Maanvi looked back making sure nobody was behind her. Not far away from Maanvi, Virat did the same thing. Both of them were walking forwards looking backwards and that was when they bumped into each other. Maanvi's foot slid against the marble floor and she fell back with Virat's hand under her head and around her waist. Their lips brushed past each other as they fell.

It was awkward for Maanvi' you know' just casually lying on the floor with Virat on top of her' with his lips so close. Virat and Maanvi got up.

'Where were you going?' Virat was first to ask.

'I' um ' I' hang on a second, where were you going?' Maanvi asked avoiding telling him her destination.

'I asked you first,' Virat argued.

'I asked you second,' Maanvi tutted.

'Well in that case you reply first and I'll reply second,' Virat said proudly as if he had made the best discovery in the word.

'I reckon we should do it the other way around. I went second last time, so I think my question should be put into consideration first this time,' Maanvi encouraged sarcastically.

'There's no harm if you're answer is considered first this time either, right?' Virat pondered.

'It's my choice!' Maanvi insisted.

'Who says?!"

'Me!'

' yep, they were nose to nose again. They both sighed and said at the same time 'I was coming to you.' Virat and Maanvi couldn't help but smile.

'Chale? (Should we go)?' Virat asked.

'Where?!'

'To sleep Maanvi, where else?!' Virat asked.

'Oh' right. Yeah. We should, it's past 1,' she pointed out.

'I know,' Virat replied.

So they both eventually made their way to Virat's room and cuddled in bed, but sleep still did not come. Virat gave up. He wasn't going to make things drag on so long this time. He needed to hug her' that was how he could sleep. So he pulled her towards him and hugged her.

'Virat-?' Maanvi started.

'I know you couldn't get to sleep either so shut up and close your eyes. It's easier this way,' Virat insisted.

She couldn't be bothered arguing because if she did she would be lying. She needed his arms to sleep' and it wasn't her fault. It was him who had gotten her into the habit of hugging him in the first place' and after all the thoughts had gone from their minds, VirMan fell asleep.

Virat woke up in 3 hours and he managed to wake Maanvi up as well by shifting in her arms.

'Virat? What's the problem? We've only had three hours of sleep' why are you awake?' Maanvi asked, irritated and weary.

'It's not my fault if I wake up,' Virat stated firmly leaving Maanvi even more irritated. 'You can sleep, I'm getting up because there's no point of lying in bed if I'm not tired anymore.'

'Virat! It's 4am!' Maanvi whispered loudly to him.

'Thank you for telling me the time, but there's a clock right next to me honey!' Virat rubbed in her face sarcastically as he stepped out of bed.

And that was where Maanvi saw the problem' if he got out of bed the sleep she needed would disappear' she needed to sleep and the only way for that was to be in his arms' she felt really stupid thinking of it, but it was true.

'Virat! Virat please' I need to sleep!' Maanvi said.

'Then sleep, no one's stopping you!' Virat exclaimed with sarcasm.

'Stop being stupid. I can't sleep without you. Get back in bed,' Maanvi pulled him back down and cuddled herself in his arms helplessly because there was no other option.

Virat tried to make her let go of him but after a little while he relaxed his body and let her go back to sleep' she needed those few more hours' her sleep was very precious to her. Maanvi fell asleep making Virat feeling tired too' so after 15 minutes of argument where Maanvi won, again, Virat and Maanvi found themselves lying in bed, eyes closed and asleep.

After three more hours, Maanvi woke up and started getting ready for breakfast.

'Maanvi' thora der aur so jao (sleep a little longer),' Virat request of her pulling her closer.

'You know Mogambo's strict breakfast at 8am rule. I'm waking up' and if you want food you better too,' Maanvi told him.

Virat sighed, 'Maanvi, can you just ditch food for the sake of my sleep? Just for today?'

'No way Virat!'

'Maanvi pleaseee! Go to sleeeppp!' Virat asked and then a thought struck his mind, 'I feel back asleep for you at 4am so it's your turn to repay the favour!'

'VIRAT! That was 4AM!' Maanvi reminded him.

'Yeah well Maanvi' this is 7AM! And now you're obliged to go back to sleep,' Virat pulled her back on the bed and Maanvi gave in because she didn't really have an excuse. So they both fell asleep, again.

Maanvi's eyes suddenly opened. It felt like she had only been asleep for 2 minutes but when she checked the clock she seriously felt like bashing Virat up, and that's exactly what she did. She grabbed her pillow and whacked Virat as hard as she could... quite a few times.

'Virat! You idot! Tumne merri breakfast miss karaadi! Gadhe, gadhe, gadhe! (Virat! You idiot! You made me miss breakfast) !' Maanvi screamed at him.

'Maanvi! Ouch Maanvi! Ouch! Stop! Stop!' Virat screamed back but Maanvi didn't stop.

'It's 8.01! You made my miss my breakfast, duffer!' Maanvi angrily tutted.

Virat somehow eventually managed to calm her down and they both crept down to the breakfast table where everyone was and they were just about to sit down when'

'Virat! Maanvi!' Dada ji called their names firmly. Oh great, he'd spotted them. Maanvi was seriously about to strangle Virat.

'You weren't here in time, you can't have breakfast!' Dada ji reminded them.

Maanvi sighed and growled at the same time as she said, 'Dada ji please' We're only a few minutes late ' please I'm really hungry.'

'If you break this house's rules then there will be a punishment. No breakfast for you two.'

That was when Maanvi lost it, 'Virat! Tum gadhe ho! I HATE you! You made me miss my breakfast... MY BREAKFAST! I'm so damn hungry! I HATE YOU!'

'Maanvi, it's not that hard' we'll just eat somewhere outside okay,' Virat told her.

'YOU go and eat outside! I want to eat what Jeevika Di's made!' Maanvi insisted.

Maanvi turned around going back to the breakfast table but Virat pulled her back. 'You come right back here missy,' Virat said, 'You're coming outside to have breakfast with me!'

'No I am not!' Maanvi said sternly as she raised her eyes brows. She turned around trying to puppy dog face at Jeevika' it didn't work' Jeevika laughed inside herself. Then she thought of Prem. 'Prem?' Maanvi asked, 'I'm really hungry'. Please?? Can I share your food?' Before Prem could respond Virat interrupted.

'Excuse me?' he asked, 'You mean to say that I go and eat outside and you'll sit here sharing a plate with Prem?'

'Well this was you're fault in the first place! You made me go back to sleep!'

'Maanvi'. You're coming with me and that's final!' Virat said.

Priya hated seeing VirMan together and she would definitely not let them go outside the house by themselves. She was going to come with them, no matter what.

'Can I come too?' Priya asked.

'Ha jao, jao! Breakfast khaalo apni girlfriend ke saath' mein Priya breakfast khaa loongi, (Yes! Good idea! Go and have breakfast with your girlfriend' I'll eat her share).'

'No Maanvi! You're coming with me' Priya can come to but you ARE coming,' Virat was strong on his words.

'No I am NOT!' Maanvi was strong on her words too.

'Fine then! Agar tum nahi aayi tho' tho' mein' (Fine then! If you don't come then I'll... I'll...)' Virat began but couldn't think of what to say next.

'Tho? Tho kya? Ha? Kya? (What Virat? Then what?)' Maanvi asked.

'Tho... tho mein ...tho mein bache ka naam Omelette rakh doonga! (Then... Then I'll call the kid Omelette!) Virat improvised confused about what he'd just said.

The entire family burst out laughing but Maanvi was serious, 'You WILL NOT call MY kid Omelette! I won't let you!'

'You'll have no control over what I'll do! You'll be unconscious Maanvi!' Virat said cheekily.

Maanvi was fine until Virat said those few words because unknowingly, his words had make her think about it again ...will you be unconscious? Maanvi asked herself...or will you be...? ...and she left her thought incomplete.

Edited by Preeti_Shadia - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superb Update..šŸ‘šŸ¼! Loved VirMan and their nokjhoks...they couldnt sleep without eachother that was aww...and the way they spk with total authoruty over eachother...thts amazng...it was hilarious where Maanvi asked Prems breakfast and Virat was like no way...n then he would name the kid as Omelete..šŸ˜†
But towards the end it was very sad as Virat said exactly right she would b unconcious in otherwords gone...really felt bad fo maanvi..hope Virat knows the real Maanvi..i guess it high time...Thnks for Updating...Happy New year,,!
Yay read it before ur PM! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Omg preeti I applaud you for this update
It was awesome loved it to the core specially
How virat couldn't sleep with manvi and
Manvi couldn't sleep without virat and they
Both knew it Lol love the 4am part omg o couldn't
Stop laughing at the breakfast table scene that was
Just to funny awesome update loved it continue soon
And do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow!! Thank u 4 the update!!
Amazing update!!
Loved how virman couldn't sleep without each other, it was so cute!!
Plz continue soon, can't wait 4 the next update!!
Thanks 4 the pm!!
Edited by Krazzy4u786 - 12 years ago
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Superb Preethi...loved it...thnx for PM

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