IPKKND FF: Winning You Back (Ch.16,pg.106) UPD:2/16 - Page 22

love it poor khushi hate arnav to lead khushi in to this situation anyways hope arnav comes out and saves her and plzzz update soon

what a pleasure to read your work. the language was crisp and beautiful, perfecly conveying the emotions of the characters. love your characters, they seemed like normal human beings, with strenghts and weaknesses, unlike the caricatures they have been reduced to in the series. liking this payal, akash n nk.

Characterization of Arnav in this FF is true to what he was portrayed initially in the show, a very cynical person who cannot trust anyone. So many evidences thrown on his face, still he doesnt believe what he wants to, in this story which makes it even more logical. I hope Arnav's redemption is as painful and difficult as the life had been to Khushi.

oh wow!!!

read all parts in one go and l love it
do pm me when you will update next

Wow. Short but top point and perfect. Next one please.

Wow what a fantastic story, i cant believe arnav cannot see the truth even when payal told him. Atleast now he has seen the truth, hope khushi does not hurt herself. Loving payal and akash's relationship they are so adorable x

very well written and interesting