#4 Guzarish [My version D3] Parts 19-22 - Page 43

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Posted: 12 years ago
sorry for the short comment again...

i loved the update...

pehle ek cheez if am not wrong woh gautam hai na ki gaurav... haina??

haan so coming back...

it was nicely portrayed...

u know especially the hurt in kria that despite everything it failed...

they both were hurt...

very well brought about...
Edited by kriyansh24 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hope u have made ur resses!!!


Me very exicted to res..

My net will ditch me anytime soon..itne der chala baddi baat hai...
So here goes my res!!!

Unres!11


k I'm damn happy today...My happiness knew know bounds..
I must say a great start for 2day...
I just hope each day the coming year bring each an every person loads of happiness!!..I dont know y i felt saying that now..we still have 19 days to new yerar but sometimes feelings are expressed as it flows..

Now me jumping to the update..

I love it and love it a lot...
These are the special moments..
Love happens but the bliss of love between Kr was sen here..
Yup we didn't have a Kr part but how she expressed her feel to her mom and Smritti very well understood it its par I must say a beautiful bond of God between a mother and daughter..

The truth told by Smritti to Kria you excelled it here..It was neither too dramatic nor plain..the perfect reactions on a specified time..

Swaron convo I just love how Sharon expressed her feel..No matter how strong or bold a girl is the simple emotions of love,friendship affect her and the state of mind beautifully portrayed...

And Swayams reaction I must say One must really be very luck to have such an understaing partner in life..
The typical Swayam and the understanding nature..

Her stating at the door steps after his departure gal u do see lot of hindi movies but yup I love that too..


In short a candid marvelous Update...


happy KR anniversary Once again dear


Hope u get one more such beautiful set of likes followed by a double dhamaka update for Christmas...


Love ❤️



Edited by asmaju - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yup. And part edited. Doing note now...
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Posted: 12 years ago
-Res-


Finally Unres.

Ok..

So I love the Smriti and Kria ki bonding.

I am a little disappointed with SwaRon part.
Just kidding. 🤣
It's just that kuch hua kyun nahi? 😈
I wanted something to happen! :D

Anyways, I loved the update in all.

Specifically the SwaRon part.
They seem to steal my eyes in this Fic of yours! :D
Edited by Aquilia_Aditi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Everything edited. Pms being sent!
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Posted: 12 years ago
And I edited the note part with a link 😛

Gonna reply to your comment Asma :D
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: asmaju

Hope u have made ur resses!!!


Me very exicted to res..

My net will ditch me anytime soon..itne der chala baddi baat hai...let's be happy over that too :D
So here goes my res!!!

Unres!11


k I'm damn happy today...My happiness knew know bounds..
I must say a great start for 2day...
I just hope each day the coming year bring each an every person loads of happiness!!..I dont know y i felt saying that now..we still have 19 days to new yerar but sometimes feelings are expressed as it flows.. hehe... seems like the love is pouring out 🤗

Now me jumping to the update..

I love it and love it a lot...
These are the special moments..
Love happens but the bliss of love between Kr was sen here.. yes.. everyone love.. but not everyone stays happy in it..
Yup we didn't have a Kr part but how she expressed her feel to her mom and Smritti very well understood it its par I must say a beautiful bond of God between a mother and daughter..for a short time, I want it to stay that way... but since many want Kriya to be back by new year.. I will have to do some changes.. hopefully it flows just as well 🤔 And mother-daughter: true said. The beauty it is.

The truth told by Smritti to Kria you excelled it here..It was neither too dramatic nor plain..the perfect reactions on a specified time.. I didn't want it to be WAY too dramatic 😆

Swaron convo I just love how Sharon expressed her feel..No matter how strong or bold a girl is the simple emotions of love,friendship affect her and the state of mind beautifully portrayed...A girl always gets soft...

And Swayams reaction I must say One must really be very luck to have such an understaing partner in life..
The typical Swayam and the understanding nature.. One can only dream

Her stating at the door steps after his departure gal u do see lot of hindi movies but yup I love that too.. hehe kuch toh filmy ho 😛


In short a candid marvelous Update...


happy KR anniversary Once again dear To you as well 🤗


Hope u get one more such beautiful set of likes followed by a double dhamaka update for Christmas... I hope so 😳


Love ❤️ LY2



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Posted: 12 years ago
Awsome update. . .
Kriya ko pata chal gaya ki sharon uski sis hai. . .
Wow. . . .
And
swaron part was awsome. . . .
Abb bus kaise bhi kerke,
humare kriyaansh ko milwa do. . . .
M realy waiting 4 them to unite. . . . . . .
Nxt part jaldi update krna. . . . .
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yup Love pours out when one truely feels it!!

KR hai tho bus ho gaya!!1


And The replies🤗

Yupp well said something to dream off...

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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG... 20th dec ki start khushi k update k saath..kya baat kya baat... 😆 ... 1stly... Happy Kriyaansh Anniversary... 😃 ... Me super happy today... Infact i got surprised to see ur PM..n dat too itni jaldi... 😆 .. Ok nw cmng to d update... As alwaz awesomeee... Finally... Kria knws the truth dat sharon id ger sister n all... Now cmng to swaron part... Okay nw dat ws...a big wala shock for me... :O ... I mean sach mei... Did really sharon said all that to swayam... Dat... She feels for him bt needs time... :O ... Woahh... I'm stunned... Nywaz... Update ws amazing... Ab to taani ki bhi entry hogyi hai...so now i'm looking forward for Kria's entry... 😉

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