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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Rasgulla_sp

Res

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Whattay chapter sv!

The first part is basically a flashback of some years gone by in which two lovers in Lucknow were not able to have their forever together.

I have no issues with that.

But... but...

Why is the start of a chapter in which we come to know that Khushi feels for Arnav the above flashback?

Here, we have her thinking how he affects her, how the tiniest of his actions or a lack thereof affect her, she is even thinking of love and Arnav together and is wondering about a loveless marriage with him. We needed her perspective and that brought the families' views into the picture too.

Very very interesting update.

Pls update soon

PS: Next time wait for me (if possible) to scrap back. How will I ever make it to your 1st pg then? Bataa mujhe bata

Your doubt must be cleared by the note.

Will wait fr you and then update the next time. Complaint taken and noted.

Will also try to update as fast as I can, not returning home till the 31st.

Glad you like the update 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Now I am confused . 6month back after marriage? I have to read again . Anyway thanks.
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Read chapter again. Now understood. Thanks dear
Edited by riafna - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ooh well i can't wait for the story to unfold ;D
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Posted: 12 years ago
The heart wants what the heart wants, beyond all reason. Why do we feel things for people who do not deserve those precious parts of ourselves? We give them our time, our emotions and sometimes all they have to do is look at us...

I feel for Khushi and I guess Arnav is just being his brooding, scarred self...At this point I am not sure of what he wants.

Brilliant post - I really want to see where you take this in terms of plot! You are a very talented writer!
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Posted: 12 years ago

thanks for clarifying it 😃

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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice part luv the way u beautifully written the couple lyf who are away fr each other before the khushi POV ... I thought its 14 yr bck arshi luv stry hot dance ... Khushi knw her feelings 2wards him more than liking nd attraction nd knw its luv... Luv dis khushi mature, independent nd strong for ur note... We willl w8 for time ven things get to b unfolded nd if u give all ans now so ff is going in a brusted container now w8 for arshi union nd thankz for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Res...!! I'll read by Saturday..(:
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sj_arhi

Your doubt must be cleared by the note.

Will wait fr you and then update the next time. Complaint taken and noted.

Will also try to update as fast as I can, not returning home till the 31st.

Glad you like the update 😊



I never had a doubt. I only had a question (which you are not supposed to answer) that the flashback gives me a sense of foreboding because you have then spoken about Khushi and her feelings for Arnav. Why such a sad flashback when she is thinking kinda of a new life with him?

I can live till 31st 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 1:

Thank you for dedicating the chapter to my sister. I am sure she must have been very happy :-)

Coming to the update, firstly sorry for the late response. Blogging is taking a toll on me *pulls hair in frustration*

So the Guptas and the Raizadas are equals and are allies and they want their relationship to strengthen only if Arnav would agree. I can't comment on Khushi at the moment as to what she wants because she is not introduced yet.

This property/asset thingy was quite mysterious. It bothers him and he is dodging it. Now he has decided about it. Now what the decision is, time will only tell :-)

I liked the anology between Arnav and his car :-)

P.S. I am going to PM you something about Mamaji okay?
Edited by lazyleaves - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 2:

Dhat tere ki! *slaps her forehead* The decision for property is connected to his marriage.

So they need a plot. In fact they have thd plot inherited from Nana Raizada but Arnav can have a claim over it only if he is married.

And who better to fit the bill than Khushi.

I would like to point out that I loved the part where she tells him on his face that she knows that he is trying to manipulate her by intimidating her. Never have I read this anywhere *thumbs up*

I loved their conversation. Eet ka jawaab paththar se. I am sure when they are together we will have many more such moments, won't we? ;-)

Another thing that I liked is his POV which is again a rarity in FFs *thumbs up*

He is drawn to her although he would never say it but what about Khushi?

Mr. Raizada you are forgetting a very important thing that Khushi wants a marriage wherein her husbands loves her then whats the point in getting married?


PaYash thought this marriage is good for their siblings. It is definitely beneficial for Arnav how will K benefit?

Yes Akash break your bhai's face if he hurts her :-D

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