Arhi FF: What happened in 1998|| thread 1 - Page 3

Originally posted by: Rasgulla_sp

I am not on your 1st pg? 😔

Will edit in a while 😊

Edited:

I am being lazy.

You already know what I think of the story. So am only copy pasting 😛

The synopsis, disclaimer, the story everything is perfect.

The story gets you hooked at the first word itself.

It shows the brain behind it just like I expected

That's Arnav's past, isn't it?

Mujhe aur chahiyeee

See I liked the imgery it created. I could see the silhoutte. I could see the embers and the ashes. I could feel the pain and the determination.

Isn't the 1st vow to not be like his father???

Missing toh nahi.. But you have deliberately used "it" both when the silhoutte is watching the ashes and when the silhoutte is talking to the dad.

So I cant really be sure if it is the same person or not. Of the same sex or not. If being vague there was intentional then you were successful!

The title itself makes u want to want more.

And I want more 😊

The story will start in the current day where both KKG and ASR are grown up. Is this avenging the death thing between their families? Coz you said the story revolves arnd families and relations too.

Update ME soonish.

Originally posted by: raomedhz

Vengeance,mystery,vows,pain...everything is there isn't it?

I loved the fact that you didn't reveal any identity here...but only exposed the raw emotions the characters were going through at that point of time.

I'm all for this.

And a really intriguing start.👏

Originally posted by: Anamika100

I love the story concept...the mystery as well as the multi time dimension.

I would also urge you to stay true to your vision as an author and not listen to the urgings of the readers...already...after just reading the prologue...of whether to make this about Arnav and Khushi or not etc.

I think if you leverage the characters, it helps readers visualize but if you do not...then you as the author have to fill in those additional character details.

Either way looking forward to your story.

Originally posted by: Kalyaani

I actually wanted to copy and paste this comment of Saiyu's but was not that lazy as I wanted to add my bit to it. I read this a few times and am I glad you started writing. There is something about the way you observe things in stories and it would be a pleasure to read anything you pen. I am so looking forward to this story.

In 1998 I was 12 years old 😃