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sruthiif

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Posted: 12 years ago

#481

Originally posted by: 45678
oh it was amazing. please dont make us wait for the next one.

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sruthiif

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Posted: 12 years ago

#482

Originally posted by: kav_50
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urs is a different kind of story line and it is well portrayed .congrats and all the best for ur effort

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musicfan5

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Posted: 12 years ago

#483

Very very intriguing story...read it in one go...all 10 chaps...i like this khushi...she is a strong lady and of course willing to do anything for her loved ones...

Love Khushi Aman relationship...They share such a comfortable and beautiful friendship...

And ASR will be ASR...the same ruthless...hot headed angry business tycoon...

eagerly waiting for the next chap...

if you are posting ur FF on ur blog Please can u send me ur blog link

Thanks...

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nadianatalie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#484

One of the most interesting Ffs I am so intrigued to know how these three characters will play out. I'm really fascinated to know Arnav's reaction towards how Aman and khushis relationship evolve. Wonderfully written story!

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Stapleton

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Posted: 12 years ago

#485

interesting story...

just read all d parts...

plz inform me 4 ur future updates...

my mail id z jamielandon192@gmail.com

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710617

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Posted: 12 years ago

#486

This is a very good story..u have written it well what I like the story has many possible outcomes...

For eg khushi can leave him after a year ... Or earlier as her studies get over..

Khushi can stay on with him and still become independent working women...Anjali can pressurize him to get married ... He finds a suitable girl but still realizes she is not right as his right was khushi...

Keep on exploring the story don't give it a fast and easy end..l all the best..

Please give me blog link meghna.sri@ gmail.com

Edited by msin - 12 years ago

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xyzsm

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Posted: 12 years ago

#487

hey...good one...

pls add me...

email id: minar.sanjid@gmail.com

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koisk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#488

hey, when will you update next? waiting eagerly.

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shivaniguru

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Posted: 12 years ago

#489

can u give me ur blog link ...plz...

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Preet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#490

just read the first eight chapters and I'm speechless, the story is really great, unparalleled, something totally different, and I like it.

Arnav saved Khushi, but obviously the great ASR doesn't do anything for free, if he doesn't get something in return, and the cost of saving her life, was that she had to be available to him whenever he want to be with her.

But I don't know why I can not hate Arnav, perhaps because he feel something for her, because if a one is to possessive toward another person, that means that he feel something in his heart for Khushi, even if he doesn't know yet, or maybe because he can not recognize it, I think being possessive is a feeling and it is one of those feelings that are capable of changing the lives of people, and from what I've read so far it doesn't seem that Khushi hate Arnav or feed grudge against him in fact, I think for her he is a very important part of her life.

Arnav and Khushi for now are bound by a contract, but I really hope that the two of them fall in love with each other and that this change the contract into a marriage certificate. But thanks to the contract is seems like they are already married, because she doesn't love anyone, and he in all that time didn't slept with any other girl, they are surrenderd(in a nice way) to each other.

Loved the friendship between Aman and Khushi.

A mind blowing 👏 👏 story keep it up 👍🏼 👍🏼