SS kriyaansh swaron important check pg112(09/2) - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice
update soon and pm me
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thank u guys for lovely comments n likes..i am updating the next part..

Part 2

Vp is confused now..he did not expect this kind of reaction..he knew that along with rey, few of his frnds are also involved in that performance bt never thot that they will accept infront of the whole clg like this..which made him difficult to announce his decision..

avp senses vp's confusion so without wasting the tym she takes d initiative n says

Avp: impressive..we knew that few of u were involved with reyaansh but never thot u guys will accept it..good..so abb jo humne reyansh ke against decision liya tha, that will apply to u 3 also..

Vp: so without wasting our tym will announce our decision..n humne ye decision liya hai ki...

All r tensed..swayam holds reys hand,nil holds reys other hand..aashi holds swayams hand..all others just crossed their fingers n praying to god to save their frnds..

Avp: humne decide kiya hai ki we will suspend all 4 of u till d next term..n u are not allowed to attend this term exams also..

listening to this rey nil swayam n aashi closes der eyes..they expected something serious action against them bt not to this extent..all other gang members are hell shocked..for the 1st tym vicky decide to speak up for his best buddy ..

vicky: but sir foreign delegates n our clg higher authorities ne tho performance n unke dance as career idea se impress hue the..

taani: n sir evry student ka ye haq hota hai ke wo apne ideas apne opinions express kare..n these guys did the same thing..

neha: exactly..wat z wrong in that??

bharat: agar aap logone khud hammare baate ek baar sunli hoti tho aaj inko ye kadam na utana padta..

avp: so u guys think ye hammari galti hai??

vp: u all r ryt bt har chees execute karne ka ek tareeka hota hai..ek discipline hoti hai jo aap logo ne follow nahi kia..so this z d outcome..n no more arguments on this..u all go back to classes..

Avp: n u 4 plz clg premises me enter mat karna till next term..u guys are not allowed..hum nahi chahte baki ke students b aapko dekh kar aisa kuch...

Vp cuts off avpz sentence : u all may leave now..

all other students left except the gang..they r unable to digest whatever happened just now..they left the place thot of going to basketball court..before leaving the main door of the clg rey again suddenly stops n sees here n der..swayam notices this n takes him to bb court..

all r sad..does not know how to react..after few mins of silence

rey: swayam tum kuch jante ho uske bare mein??

sw: kiske bare mein?

rey: tumare bestfrnd..r u sure she z not back in d city??

sw: u mean kriya??

all looks at rey..shocked, confused or may b sad..

rey: exactly...ur frnd...ur frnd kriya

sw: r u mad rey..??hum sab yahan pe suspension ko lekar tensed hai n tumhe lagta hai kriya wapas aagayi hai..??btw how do i know..??rey plz bhool ja usse..wo jaa chuki hai..for god sake rey...plz move on..

rey: i can feel her(with teary eyes)..

all: wat??

rey: yes i can feel her presence..itne din nai bt aaj hi q muje aise lag raha hai ki wo yahi kahi pe hai..mere aas paas hi..guys plz trust me i have a strong feeling that wo yahin kahin pe hai aaj..

sw: shut up rey..just shut up..bahar nikal uske duniya se..i knw u still miss her bt it doesnt mean u go crazy talking like this..atleast i dnt expect something like this from u..

vicky: swayam plz relax..rey b hammari tarah ek normal insaan hai yar..usne aaj tak apne aur kriya ke bare mein kuch baat nai kia, it doest mean that he z nt hurt ya he miss her still..aaj pehli baar wo kuch express kar raha hai let him..

sw: i knw vicky bt i cant c him like this..i am helpless..i was d the only person who knew abt them frm beginning bt i could not do anything to stop her...muje nahi pata chala kab ye sab hogaya unke beech mein..jab pata chala tho wo jaa chuki thi..sabko chod kar..(by now every1 has tears in their eyes)

rey: wiping his tears: tumhari kya galti hai isme swayam..actually galti kisi ki b nahi hai..i am sure kriya ki b nahi thi..

all: wat??

rey: yes..maine hammesha se uske aankhein pade hai(read) n hammesha uske dil ki baat jaana hai uske aankein dekh kar hi..chahe uske jubaan kuch aur hi bole..bt dat day when she was telling all those bitter words to me, she has tears in her eyes..jinhe wo rokh ne ki bahot try kar rahi thi..so agar usne muje kushi kushi wo sab kaha hota tho wo aansu nai hote uske aankon me..n usse muje use hi karna hota tho, kab ka wo hamare relationship ko initiate karke muje use kar sakti thi bt...she took hell lot of tym to accept her feelings..n agar uss din me force nahi karta bar bar tho shayad wo kabhi apne feelings express b nahi karti..kuch tho missing hai meri love story mein jo usne apne sath lekar gayi..

all r unable to hold their tears..vicky hugs rey tytly..followed by all other gang members..within no tym they were in group hug..except 1 person taani..

there comes another voice.."guys muje itni jaldi bhool gaye..even i deserve this hug"

all r surprised...

to b continued(continuation of 2nd part)...keep guessing😉
Edited by smileysmi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome update...pls update soon and pm me...
Edited by rhu90 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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its an awsum story!!!
atleast here rey realized dat kriya lied to him!!!
waiting for d next part!!!😊
plss update soon!! n plss do pm me have sent u a buddy request!!!😊

Priyanka!!!!😊
Edited by priyankah07 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That person is kria...
Oh god plz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing update 😛

loved it to the core 😉


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Posted: 12 years ago
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u should have at least reveal the name of the person... 😲😲😲😲😲
kept a suspense till the next part... 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼
update res of the chapter soon...😲😲😲😲😲
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing i liked it very mch
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG . . . . .Smi. . . .
That was realy awsome. . . . .
Rey,Nil,swayum and aashi suspended till nxt term. . . . . . .
Rey expressd his feeling so well. . . . .
OMG . . . . . . .KRIYA KI ENTRY HONE VAALI HAI. . . .
I tooo have a strong feeling tat woh kriya hi hai. . . .
I jst lovd it. . . .
Can't wait 4 d nxt update. . . .
Update soon. . . .
Thanks 4 d pm. . . . .
Update realy-realy-realy -realy-realy-very-very sooon. . . .
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey just read ur ss now amazing start plzz update soon and next time do pm me

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