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Purva

@Tani2804

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Posted: 13 years ago

#71

Hey amazing part Muskaan

i Liked d way u r writing it

i m liking d v/s of ria... her level of patience is amazing

i mean , he spoke rudely, not letting her call him by his name, ...n still she hope dat 1 day he will reciprocate his love...

Loved her for d patience and courage

I liked d part wen Arjun realized her importance... his realization dat she went outside to bring fruits for him n probably got kidnapped ...

I m glad he didnt raped her..thanks for dat

U r writing beautifully

Will wait for more ...👍🏼

Edited by tani23 - 13 years ago

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DivineDarkness

@DivineDarkness

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Posted: 13 years ago

#72

Hw culd he??? hw cn he b so brutal??? omg my head s spinning reading this chapter... i jus hate him in this part... oh no i cnt do dat... he s genuinely worried for her also... Poor Riya i'm feeling so bad fro her... aftr all dese still she luvs him hw cn she??? Precap s scary...

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50ShadesOfMe

@50ShadesOfMe

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Posted: 13 years ago

#73

Awesome update yaar!
He cares for her but still he behaved so rudely with her! :(
Btw..Superb concept!
I loved it!!
Update the next part soon :)

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kunchu

@kunchu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#74

superb update yaar...

it was as if seeing live... Arjun's rage.. Riya's helplessness...

waiting for more updates.. and pls do continues..

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Tabassum

@Arieltabi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#75

It was just amazing. I was feeling like I am actually seeing this infront of my eyes. I m loving Riya's character. She is just like the fairy tales princess. Always helping others. But she is strong too. After what Arjun did to her she still love and care for him. Arjun he was so rude to her but still can't hate him . He does care for her.Even she is drugged she calling Arjun sir
. I wonder how is he gonna explain this to his team. They are also listening the conversation.
I love it a lot
I know u r busy but pls try to update soon.

Edited by Arieltabi - 13 years ago