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Mimi2609

@Mimi2609

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+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#601

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finally i'm back for commenting😆

well muskaan where are the hot parts you promised🤣

😉 ok jokes apart

Firstly it was lovely the way Arjun was losing control of his determination with Riya😳, but then when Roshni's death flashed in front of his eyes, he was back in his jerk mode😡

And he again hurt our doll...

What was even worst that Riya was getting a very bad and false inferiority complex due to Arjun's behaviour. she actually thinks she's a bad kisser and worst that she's nothing compared to Arjun, this girl has got a completely deflated ego...

My heart went to her when she was crying like that...

But still i'm amazed at her selfless love for Arjun, she actually prepared food for him and even gathered the courage to go to his office and give it to him.

I was proud when despite feeling scared she dared knock on Arjun's cabin👏

Now back to our akdu Arjun, stupid guy, he loves her like crazy yet treats her so badly. Loved when he didnt want Riya to see the real world with murders and everything and even made Shree removed all pictures, but making them climb the stairs for it was 😆 so funny specially Amit's part...

It was a real treat to Riya when at least some people are complimenting her😃

and finally Arjun's concern about her going alone was too cute😳

Fouf, finally they caught Sikander😡

Now will have to wait for next update to know how it came about, and you take so much time to update😭, kaise katoon gi itna saara din without knowing the hows and whens😭

Lovely update as usual Muskaan, and since i have almost given an OS as comments🤣, you have to give a long and long and long update😆

Edited by haruhi26 - 12 years ago

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Payal Goel

@Payal_156

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#602

Haye muskan dear...
dil khush kr diya yaar..
what again a chumneshwari update hehe.!
loved it..
claps!!!
riya ordinary n arjun prince wow...
riya made food fr etf..!!
yar amit ne to dil jeet liya..
lion den hehe
feeling tired oops 5th floor stairs..
Amit dialogue me bi to aya hu riya di ke sath me rofling..
arjun thinking riya amit se bi zyada innocent h rofl..
Awesum arjun concern fr ria safety!!!!!
ria comparing arjun n herself hehe
arjun has eyes everywhere hehe really ??
Force aa gyi tu to gya sikandar bachu...
ek gana sick sik ke liye
bach ke rhna re baba
bach ke rhna re
tujhpe nazar h..
Me too proud of urself fr d fab
outstanding
updates
by
u
amazing
writer
u
r dear.!
do update
soon..
jab
tak hme
aise long
updates
milte
rhenge me
long coments
krti
rhungi.!
ur greedy
reader
lol..

Edited by Payal_156 - 12 years ago

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littlebrat

@littlebrat

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Posted: 12 years ago

#603

hey another fantastic job👏

and thanks alot that you are extending it😃

actually i my opinion arjun ne riya ko itna rulaya hai, daraya hai, tardpaya

etc etc... toh usse apni mistakes correct karne bhi do please😆

and thanks ke sik is under arjun's arrest

let me request...

i want a very suprising to read arjun's confession to riya please

because you yourself have raised my expectation from you😳

i am expecting mesmerizing and ultra romantic ariya milan😆😉

pyar se request kar rahi hoon ignore mat karna dear😊

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ALEKHYA VENDRA

@alee001

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#604

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏

waitng for nxt part!!

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Queen.Bee

@Queen.Bee

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#605

AMAZING!!! me sooo happy!!! yay so finally ETF caught him!!

i didnt thought he would push her away n go!! poor riya! thought she is a bad kisser.. i doubt he ever let her kiss him...

loved amit riya convo before arjun's cabin..

well her face comparison was hilarious.. n arjun found out too.. embarrassing..

loved arjun's way of protecting her n how he tries to make the damage minimum..

one request.. please dont end this ff.. with arjun apologizing to riya.. we need much more.. i am expecting der full on romance without any guilty feeling or hindrance.. or anymore sikender coming in between...

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-SREE93-

@-SREE93-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#606

hai muskan, thank u so much for making ariya meeting so fastly

as always this part was also so nyc.lovd it so much.

the past was so nyc.amit's remarks abut arjun was so funny...calling arjun lion😉

both arjun and riya cared 4 each other.par haalat kuch aise hi arjun can;t show that in front of her.

wowso finally etf team catch sik...

very good.nw i want arjun to make sik pay 4 all his deeds..

precap s so interesting.hope in nxt part we can see arjun and riya 2gether..

thank u so much

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_Roka_

@_Roka_

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#607

oyeee so nice i didn't think i could read any ffs not ant arshi but ur writting is sooo good

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#608

Amazing update...

ARIYA scene and how she goes to his room to give him food...only to be taken to the conf room was too good..

Arjun's concern is to the extent of hurting her and indirectly that hurts him too...crazy lovers!

Didnt expect Sik to be caught at Arjun's palace...well that was a pleasant surprise!

Now that Sik is caught, i hope Riya is rescued soon!

Cont soon

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Nida

@Gurmeet4Drashti

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#609

Hey ...

I thought that you are an amazing writer ( that you are ) but without dangling us ... But nooo you proved me wrong today 😲

You gave us a cliffhanger for the first time and that too for a sort of a climax scene ... 😭

But that's somewhat ok ... coz the update was just Fantastic ...👏

Awww poor Riya feels dejected and can't help herself from comparing herself with Arjun and his status ... But whatever happens she'll always be the selfless, compassionate and caring Riya ... 😃

She took the food for Arjun and the team and lol Amit is too cute and adorable and he actually had a permission to enter Rathod's cabin 😲 And him calling Arjun "Lion" is so funny 😆

Arjun's cabin scene is sooo lovely 😳 He made sure that Riya doesn't look at the frightening pix and even Shree was so cute 😊

Lol He actually caught her comparing their faces 😆

Awww he's so concerned for her !!! He actually dropped her back and pretended to take back a file ... But I wish he didn't pretend and actually showed her that he cares for her and even have installed those cameras just to make sure that she's fine 😛

N ahaaa my favorite part !!!! Arjun acting as a prince !!!! 😉

Yayyy !!!! He caught Sikander finallyyy !!!! *dancing*

Sikander you are so dead dude ...Arjun won't spare You for anything

N OMG Arjun actually knows where Riya is ???? 😲

I'm sooo looking forward to read the next update 😃