#2 Forever Yours-A Swaron FF chp 21 pg 65 28th may'14

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shaani2209

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Posted: 13 years ago

#11

congrats for the new thread!!

coming to the update..

it was lovely...nicely penned emotions...

thanks for the pm...

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Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#12

First of all congratulations for the new thread Sneha!!
loved the update!!sharon's pain for swayam not being with her was sad she still loves him madly so his absence on her bday broke her!!
the whole update was in present mostly!!wich i really liked!the flashback was cute!!
hope they get to talk n meet real soon each of them is goin through too much of sadness coz of the separation!!
thankx for the PM:)

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Roger

@HPHolic-3

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#13

congo for new thread
Swayam still love her but really want to know the reason why he left her n i hope swayam is not preetha's fiance.
Waiting for next part

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Lassi_TanHa

@Lassi_TanHa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#14

congrats for the new thread!!! 🥳
Thanks for d pm!!!
nice update.. 👏
"SHaronn!!" Rey said, and ran to her like a little kid. "Happy birthday little sister!" "Happy birthday to you too, big brother!" Sharey bro - sis bondg is beautifully penned down d way he consoled her sis..
Swaron in flashback were cute..
Swayam gifts sharon bracelet but doesnt meet her.. sharon's pain was nicely expressed..
"This is a song..that I wrote for someone really special. But I wrote it after'we..broke..up. If he's here I hope he still knows that I love him and will always do. So, if you're here, I hope your listening." Song was awesome fits d sharon state of mind perfectly it expressed her pain...
Swayam still loves sharon.. but doesnt want to face her.. 😔 want to know d reason y he left her.? Does kriyansh know d reason y swayam left.. i hope preetha's fiance is nt swayam..

Edited by lassipriya - 13 years ago

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Yogini

@yogini64

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Posted: 13 years ago

#15

Congratzz for the new thread 🥳
although . . . Mann to bahot kar raha hai tujhe marne ka . . . . . Tune Apne personal benefit ke liye swaron ko alag kar rakha hai 🤣
but tune swayam ki entry same party me kara ke mujhe control kar diya 😛
ab agar vo usse milne nhi gya toh tu gyi kaam se 😈
its so sweet . . . Ki sharey apna b'day hamesha sath manate hai 😃
mujhe thoda shaq hai . . . . Uski mom pics layi but force nhi kiya zyada . . . . I think isme swayam ki hi pics hai 😉
this preetha is so annoying . . . . Ye to yahan hi pahuch gyi 🤢
achha hua isse rudely baat ki sharon ne,,, but she's pretty dumb . . . . Isse samajh nhi aaya ki sharon usse kitna pak chuki h 😆
wow . . . . She's singing there . . . N swayam sees her 😊
rey ko, swayam ko vahan push karna chahiye tha . . . . But vo bhi tera hukum maan raha hai 🤪
iss janam me milvayegi unko ya agle season ka wait karun? 🤣

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Sanskriti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#16

Awesome update 😊

well described Sharon's feelings

Thanks for the pm

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Ameena

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Posted: 13 years ago

#17

Congrats for the new thread 🥳...
Fabulous part 😃...
Shar's dad is so Sweet...
But her Mom is always after her 🤔...
Swayam just left before Sharon could come , not fair...
Sharon is really very hurt 😒...
Sharon singing , that was nice...
Sharon and Swayam in the same party , great 👍🏼...
When Swayam Loves Sharon then what is his problem 🤔...
I have a weird feeling about Priya's 'Fiance' 😳...
Well loved this part❤️...
Plz reveal the suspense soon...
N thanks for the pm 😊.

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.....pujan.....

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Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#18

first of all congrats for ur new thread.

amazing update.

the song u choosen is also amazing.

update soon.

thanks for pm.

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Nikki

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Posted: 13 years ago

#19

thanks for the pm and loved the update :D i hope they meet soon

and congrats for the 2nd thread

Nikki <3

Edited by 1D_D3-Crazy - 13 years ago

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Snowey

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Posted: 13 years ago

#20

Congrats on the new thread.

An awesome update, could feel the pain Sharon was living through..as of now this FF for most part has shown how much Sharon loves Swayam and very little about how much Swayam lover her. The FF sure is getting intriguing with each update and with this one i could feel Swayam's side of love and it must be something really major that he had to choose staying away from his love. Another best part of the FF has been the sibling love you show between ShaRey..i just love reading their part.