Pi Jaun: Kriyansh OS

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Okay first of all kiddoo!!!!!!!! Sorry haa agar tune iss gaane pe sequence likha ho ya os likha ho toh!!!

But thanks ye gaana sunane keliye …I can't tell how much I loved this

So here goes my style of OS

Don't worry concept bohut bakwaas ka hai

Just wanna share my thought..

So here goes an OS for u all..

*dnt ask me abt updates*

Story line: Rey gets a mail from Kriya … after 6 months of her sudden exit…he still is single ….he is very happy ….but the thing to be noticed is he is very happy for his friends

He got a mail one day saying him the truth and also saying she wanted to at least tell this before leaving India forever …… and after reading the truth he was like hit by a big rock… he was sinking each second …so the gang decided to take him on an outing and reached goa….

The song sequence starts here….. it will be a dance based OS….

PRESENT:

He walked front remembering how difficult it would be for her to say those words…how much have she crushed her heart to say those words….

bhulaun kaise

He walked front head hanged down

Wo pal jo mere bin hai tu bita chukka

He clutched his hair thinking the blushes of hers when he spoke to her

Loutaun kaise

He kicked the sand hard

Jo aansu meri yaad mei baha chukka

He looked at the ocean which reminded him of the tears she shed for him …

Mar mai jaun..

Caught his head and swinged his upper body in from left to ri8…

Fanaa ho jaun

Stretched his hand as he saw her image in water but turned it into a fist in next second as she disappeared…..

Kahi mei jaake doob jaun

He walked front into water when swayam placed hand on his shoulder and he shoved of……..

Nazar milaun toh ye chahun ke teri aankhon se

He looked up slowly tears ready to make its way out …

Pi jaun ye gham

Pi jaun ye num

Pi jaun ye gham

Pi jaun ye num

He looked helplessly as if asking her why she did this much for him …… why she is suffering to that extent….. why he is that helpless now !!!

Bhujaun kaise

Jumped and kicked the air with left leg

Ye aag tere dil mei jo laga chukka

Pulled her twirled and lifted by waist ……..

Sunaun kaise

He bought her down

Bas isiki aas jo dil mai hun daba chukka

Caressed her face and wiped her tears….

Mar mai jaun..

Stretched his hands *as in dil se re*

Fanaa ho jaun

Bet hard on his heart….

Kahi mei jaake doob jaun

Took quick steps and cupped her face

Nazar milaun toh ye chahun ke teri aankhon se

Smiled wide and soon the smile vanished as her image disappeared…

Pi jaun ye gham

Pi jaun ye num

Pi jaun ye gham

Pi jaun ye num

Bought his fists down from above head falling on his knees and crying hard…

The gang were broken to see him like this ….

"Reyaansh Singhania … ek weakling Kria Ghai ke pyaar mei pad gaye"

"maine sirf aapko use kiya"

"Aapme aur swayam mei kisiko chun na ho toh mai swayam ko chunungi aapko nai"

"rey!!!"

She sat up sweating…. The same dream again….its haunting her as always… from last 6 months it's the only dream she got!!! She got up and looked at the sea in front….. Slowly she saw his face … a naughty smile playing on his lips and as she smiled he winked….

She ran as fast as she can but as she reached the shore the image vanished with the waves…

She stood helpless and again disappointment taken over her….

Mitaun kaise

Took a small knife from her shorts pocket……

haaton ke lakeeron par hai jo likha

scratched the lines on her ri8 hand with frustration

bataun kaise

fell on her knees throwing the knife…

mujhko hai toh bas tera hi aasra

cluthed the wet sand giving more pain herself

Raat kaali

Covered her face with hands

baat baaki

bet the water …..

Ashq bheege dil sawali

Layed back as water flowed over her

Man mei mere tu hi tu hai

Got up hands stretched as if trying to catch him

Toh aaja saathiya

Ran into the water searching for his image

Teri poothe Bandhagi hai

Did a pyramid … Went down into a split….

Tu hi meri zindagi hai

. Got up with a smile…

Lamhe tune jo diye hai

Did a jump along with stretch and stood

Wahi meri daastan

And smiled wide as she saw him standing on the rock with hands in his pocket and smiling at her as usual…

Pi jaun ye gham

Pi jaun ye num

She ran to him and caressed his face as tears rolled down and a wide smile spread on her face…..

But horror took place as his image vanished and appeared

And again smiled as she found the image in water….

Paas aa mere sanam

Bhool ja saare gham

He started struggling with eyes closed as all were tensed and confused as what is happening to him…

He saw her making herself crush between thorns and blowing flowers on him which in turn are pricking like thorns with the thought of losing her

Pi jaun ye gham

Pi jaun ye num

"kriya !!!!!!!" her friend called as kriya closed her eyes and fell back into the sea hoping to find him in or loosing herself forever..

He snap opened his eyes as soon as he heard the scream……and far on the ri8 saw a girl falling into the sea with her back closing her eyes and a girl running to save her……

All the boys ran as fast as they can and jumped in to search her….

After searching swayam along with rest came up dissapointed just to see rey coming up with her in hands …..

Rey simply got on the rock pulled her closed and tapped her cheek… after couching twice she opened her eyes…

"jhooti…tumhe toh swimming aati hai..jaan pooch ke kiya haina ye sab??"rey asked crying and always a smile playing on his lips……

She made "O " shape with her mouth and pouted as tears rolled ….

He smiled and hugged her tight as she in returned gripped more tight!!!

So here in the OS…

Hope u all like it…

Like and comment please…

Ufff……..its difficult to explain dance yaar…mast mast steps ko change karna pada…

Chalo kuch bhi …..hope u liked it…

Love ya!!!

Enjoy!!!

Deetha.😳


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Posted: 12 years ago
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so here i am...

so jaisa maine bola...

maine ekdum aisa hi circumstance kitne mahino se soch ke rakha tha for the truth to be out...

par maine toh use kria ke peeche out of india pahucha diya tha with some airport scenes 😎

so i loved it...

lekin mera doubt hai... log use goa issliye le gaye coz woh zyada khush tha ya fir dukhi??? i mean first line se clear nhi huya... thoda dekh liyo...

so i loved how u brought their dance abt...

it was really emotional...

all the feelings well portrayed out...

aur OS likha kar...
Edited by kriyansh24 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it's ooosssoommm deetha...!!! Jst loved it...!!!! Nd that song is perfect for their situation...!!!! Frst i thought it 's going to be an os wid sad ending...but in end u twistd evrything...nd last line..."jhuti tumhe toh swimming aati h" ...jst wow...!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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resss...unresss... Teko chain ni hai na... Kuch bhi utha k likh deti hai... 😛 ... Now coming to d update... Honestly i havnt ever heard dis song...and abhi bhi ph se couldbt hear it..jst read d lyrics... Lyrics ache lage... The song really suits kriyaansh... 😊 ... Concept k baare mei zyada kuch nahi kahungi... 😛 ... But i still loved the OS... Hehe... Song explanation was also amazing... Loved it... 😊
Edited by akanksha_arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome...
last part was superb...
thnx for pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Reserved!!!!!!!1
Unreserved

!12

Deethu tujhe nahi pata how much I love this song!!
Jab se aditi ne sunaiya its nt a day I had not heard of this song.
Mast song..
The dance explanation was superb!!
Mujhe pata hai ki dance se kitna pyar karti hai and its shown in brilliance with your explanation..
Just love it beyond core...

And the meet kya dramatic tha...
Awww I just could pictuarise it very well...


A REQ:Jane Kyu par bhi ek OS likho nah
Edited by asmaju - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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"He saw her making herself crush between thorns and blowing flowers on him which in turn are pricking like thorns with the thought of losing her"

best line...

and haan maine abhi padha sab samajh aa gaya...

too good..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aww i just loved it specially the song i hared it for the 1st time and let me tell u i loved it its heart touch and agar uske saath tera OS it perfet really tera was goona make way from my eyes but tabhi hi kriya meet phew warna mai sach roo deti anywase it was awesome loved it thanx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing os 😉

loved it so very much 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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woow maa... its ful of sad emoitions i totaly loved it i copuld i actually imagine it kassh yeh d3 mein hota i lovee the song am soo adiicted to it it sooo suits the situation very nyc... kassh u cnt8 nued onn to finsh stryt of porrpprly
nyway keep it up maaa luv u

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