An Indescribable Emotion #2 Part 20 PG 22 - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
Mr. Meanie as you have so christened yourself,

that update while good was woefully short. on one hand you keep threatening the end of AIE, on the other you skim the surface in your updates. it's like riding a stone skipping across a pond. the pond is the story, the skips your updates. you reach the other end so the story does come to completion but the updates are unsatisfactorily short. as a reader, i feel shortchanged.

give me an update i can sink my teeth into. once again as in the Bengali story, you have not even completed the conversation in this update. come on Avi, give me more


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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
omg how wll be the reaction of her colleagues after watching this in the cafeteria?
interesting chapter.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
Loved the anger and the passion. Cheese and chalk both of them...but just cannot get over the overpowering pull...well written..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
awesome reaction from both.. i felt arnav need to assure so adorable :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#75
NOOO NO NO NO NO NO!! You did NOT just leave it hanging there at that! NOOO :(

Now I"m going to have to WAAIITTT :(
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh dear! Arnav may have not done the best thing, but his attentions were noble...

I hope they can kiss and make up!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
All these two do, is get on each other's nerves. Can't they have normal civilized conversation for a change?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
Wow... U updated...??

It was amazing...👏... I like that schoolteacher thing...😛

I'm in love with this Arnie...😉

You are sooo mean Avi... How could you stop there...????

Hope your health is good now... N thanks for PM...🤗
Edited by arshy4ever - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
hope you are ok now great update take care and yes waiting for the new ff too!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
U updated??? 😊i hope u are fine dear... take care... 🤗
Update was great!! Oh I so love their passion... be it a kiss or a fight!!! haiyyy mardala jhalim!! public kissy wissy in the office...😳 But i loved it!!! cant wait for next update!! No pressure hon, u take time and update when u are well... get well soon!!😃

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