Completed* TimeHunt&HauntedTime - Ch28/Ep- 29/5 - Page 15

great update...

so as promise after 23 chapter i am going to comment
so hier it comes
i love it
its beautiful story but arnav mom is living in londen
i have something similair to this story i know as reader you are going to fix anjali with anand but plz i know may be anjalie is sweet woman but i really hate that when she knew about khushi being lustfully watch by her husband she stil did not believe khushi and went after families back with her evil dadi to spend time with shyame
and dadi never give a DAME about khushi even if she knew what she did in past to her familie
and you brought DADI out of pitcure and she is living happy in her ashram
ok i want that dadi to repend big time but dont know how you are going to do it or even you are going to do it
and arnav say many thing to khushi about golddiggers and that she is the cause of familie destress but know that she is rich he cannt say that and about shyame ya he is behind bars and love it that he cant find job and have no money
but their is something fishy is it shyame who gave her ratpoison
why i am thinking he did not do that
why khushi lost her memory but when arnav went to lakhnow she was fine what happend
and plz i request plz do not make anjalie fall in love with anand plz i hate her
i dont know i just hate her
she is the cause of all khushi distrube life and i dont want have quik happy life and stealing khushi's brother
i hope anand understand that the main cause of his sisters distress life is anjalie and that he do something to make her reilise
thank you
and i love your story and obot your less likes is i think not many people know of your story
i find out myself not 2 or 3 days a go
but really love it

Originally posted by: bewuster

so as promise after 23 chapter i am going to comment
so hier it comes
i love it
its beautiful story but arnav mom is living in londen
i have something similair to this story i know as reader you are going to fix anjali with anand but plz i know may be anjalie is sweet woman but i really hate that when she knew about khushi being lustfully watch by her husband she stil did not believe khushi and went after families back with her evil dadi to spend time with shyame
and dadi never give a DAME about khushi even if she knew what she did in past to her familie
and you brought DADI out of pitcure and she is living happy in her ashram
ok i want that dadi to repend big time but dont know how you are going to do it or even you are going to do it
and arnav say many thing to khushi about golddiggers and that she is the cause of familie destress but know that she is rich he cannt say that and about shyame ya he is behind bars and love it that he cant find job and have no money
but their is something fishy is it shyame who gave her ratpoison
why i am thinking he did not do that
why khushi lost her memory but when arnav went to lakhnow she was fine what happend
and plz i request plz do not make anjalie fall in love with anand plz i hate her
i dont know i just hate her
she is the cause of all khushi distrube life and i dont want have quik happy life and stealing khushi's brother
i hope anand understand that the main cause of his sisters distress life is anjalie and that he do something to make her reilise
thank you
and i love your story and obot your less likes is i think not many people know of your story
i find out myself not 2 or 3 days a go
but really love it

thanks for such a long comment... :)
I really appreciate your idea but I have already typed out all the chapters till th end...
as for dadi she is gone for good... as soon as she found out that Khushi was Raghavs daughter...! I really don't wanna bring her back... =/
as for anjali, I understand ur POV but it was only because she didn't trust Khushi... she has no idea about Shyam till she found those glass pieces and she immediately took action na? besides I think she was punished enough by Arnav not talking to her ... =|
and Arnav ka repentance period hasn't started yet... ;)

one more twist coming up soon ;)

waiting for La and NK[nandu]...

How can anyone forget that kiss

awesomeee...waiting fr da next update..!! 😃

hey nice one how has she remembered dat...story is gettng more interesting update it soon

Just found this ff .read it in one go
this is just awesome .different concept plz update soon
plz pm me

hey i am waiting
plz do continue