IPKKND:Closing The Loops * Thread 2 Pg 144 * - Page 72

Originally posted by: meera30

Ah I loved this story - This really is what should have happened - at least in essence even if not in exactness

This is the story about mature adults who do the right thing - Payal, Khushi, Arnav, Akash - everyone did what real, smart people would do in a situation like this. The best part is the drama is still just as potent, the intensity just as much as you need to make it an interesting watch

You don't need buckets of tears and villains with twitching faces and heroes with grandma'll MUs

I thought I'd catch up with the loops when I found this. Now will go back and read the rest.

Originally posted by: snoopy84

That was real beautiful wished something like this really happened.

Originally posted by: gifttag

Wow loved it...what a write up and I so wish that that's what they had shown in a show.
I have read all the closed loops in one go, Absolutly brilliantly written, loved them all, wish I had started reading or had find it earlier but better late than never.
Coming back to this closed loop or what if loop as you are calling it, you have captured the essence of IPKKND to the T. That's what we would have expected from a 'shaatir dimak' ASR to do, never mind.
I really hated that terrace scene, but the way you have written it I think I will superimpose this scene on that one now as I can already imagine in my minds eye, I know I come accross as a half crazy person but there you go the obsession with the show is not leaving me, any suggestion how to achieve that will be most welcome.
You are one really talented writer, the emotion you have portrayed it just out of the world.
I am going through your other stories on IF and will do so on the Blog as well and will comment as and when I come to the last updated chapter so please don't get rid of me from the PM list.
Thank you so much for writing all the wonderful stuff and adding me to the PM list.
Thanks for this PM.

Originally posted by: SirenMitra

We are blessed with the writer like YOU and EXPELLIARMUS...

No offence to anyone but on TV I have never seen something remarkable and flawless in any show. Even though IPKKND was the first show that hooked me up but as we all can see, there are many LOOPS... Thank God you're filling them up... I still wish I could see the same in the show.

Good Luck in the Future...

Originally posted by: N0306

closing another loop indeed.. something arnav would do.. it makes sense.. if she had told him on his face then he would have gone all angry and wouldn't have listened at all.. so i am glad that khushi ran away.. let him investigate on his own..

Originally posted by: LyssaPie

That was just too perfect!

Originally posted by: arshifan91

This "closing the loop "series is such a treat to read 😊 The way u have closed all the loops so far are really commendable.

I chanced to read this wonderful piece when i was searching for some other article and i would say that the time i spent here was really enjoyable :)

I read all the loops at one stretch and was really with a loss of words - his proposal to her, their much needed discussion of meeting Shyam, Arnav mom's letter, recreation of holi episode, stargazing followed by heartfelt apology, shaping of Anjali's character to a strong woman and making her meet her man of dreams , Khushi's ways to irritate her LG


Coming to this update, what can i say ?? I always thought what could have happened if Arnav had gone to the terrace instead of Shyam and u have given me the answer in a meaningful and logical way. I hated that terrace scene in the show 😡

The way you have brought out the true Khushi who was prevailing in the initial episodes of the show and the apt Shatir dimag Arnav was really laudable.

His hesitation in confessing , her confusion about the outcomes, her way of solving the problem in a logical way by writing a letter and asking him to investigate knowing that he would need proofs so as to accept such a bitter truth, his heartfelt confession that he has not given her chance so as to express his trust on her and saying those 3 magical words were truly a bliss.

I also liked how you created a strong Payal unlike the one in the show 😊

Waiting for yet another loop with a hot mirchi bajji !!!!!😛

Originally posted by: ranogill

so beautiful,so sensible ...why our serial maker destroy the stories...kaash esa hota

Originally posted by: ShikhaKhushi

That was really beautiful...

Originally posted by: flowers4u

Amazing update...something i would have loved to see...keep it up