Chasing Dreams (1) Chp 10 Pg132, Thd 2 link pg 144

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anumadduri

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Posted: 12 years ago

#211

Loved nani's coming to his office with Pooja ki thali wali dhamki 😊 . But we know that Arnav does not fall for emotional blackmail that easily ... Also the heart goes hmmm when Arnav catches you in his arms *SIGH * it goes Dhak Dhak :) waiting for their reactions when they come face to face or in this case she in his arms 😉

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john-angad

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Posted: 12 years ago

#212

why do i feel khushi and arnav may get married...and yes they bump atlast!

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shree10

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Posted: 12 years ago

#213

I like Payal and Akash in your story. Modern yet mature.

From first 2 updates, I couldn't make out that Akash is related to Arnav in the story. Does Payal know he is a rich man ? (Arnav has also met her)
Nani knows about Payal and she also seems to be quite in touch with current times. So it's 'Put your cellph on silent' order!

And you got all the group at AR. Meera, Gitu, SJ who made Khushi comfortable. Looking forward to see how you portray these characters. Whether they will be supporting Khushi.

And finally typical Arshi meeting moment. Eagerly waiting for next one.

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Jaya Devi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#214

Hahahaha!!
how can arnav n khushi meet without khushi falling n arnav catching
😉
loved it totally!
cant wait for the next update...thanks for updating sooo fast!!
good that her work at AR is good n not as horrible as the drama 😆

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Sasha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#215

HMMM ARNAV HER SAVIOUR, NICE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!

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@debby_11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#216

Wow...that was a wonderful part...I love this Payal...she is strong and confident. Loved the crashing part..Khushi falling and arnav catching is the most awaited part in each ff...next comes the face off i guess...Waiting for the next part..Thanks for the pm :)

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Anupama

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Posted: 12 years ago

#217

M happy that i came across your ff and just read all 3 chaps a while ago..its so interesting..and hey,it s rabba ve at the end of chap3 . :D
the excerpt is tugging at my heart..m i to cry when we come to that?of course,isn't it? :(
and m stalking it! ;) not on your buddy list,but i promise to comment. :)

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DISHA

@shinaa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#218

Nb sorry 4 d late comment.i was actually planning to not read any new one but damn now its interesting.are u sure its ur first time.

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boreddamsel

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Posted: 12 years ago

#219

NB, how could you? You reminded me of Japanese food 😭

I miss sushi 😭

Aah.. well but I guess when I go back to US, I will miss my mommie's fish fry.. 😃

Ok about the update.. I simply loved it!

I know I said this twice already.. I love your style of writing.. you better remember it, NB, 'coz I don't want to keep saying it..

I mean do people see the sun everyday and say that the sun rises in the east

Arti is mad 😡 First you reminded Arti about sushi, then you made Arti hungry talking about lunch, and then you ended it just when they met!

You better update soon, NB! <sending you telepathic daggers>

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vgedin

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Posted: 12 years ago

#220

Your Payal and Aakash are a refreshing break, thats one of the things I like most about this FF. And then theres the fact that Khushi is so real - the problem with the heels, the anxiousness before Day 1 at a new job, the nervousness at meeting your boss - its so real, without any of the additional forced showy glittery stuff. I really like that about your writing.

The last bit is such a classic Rabba Vey moment - can I call it Rabba Vey - 1 in Chasing Dreams ?

Thanks for the PM :)