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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
I swear i cried . I don't know why I cried but it made me cry. after a long time i am crying for the ss😃.

Its amazing how could you update so soon. I think you are a magician.


Ok coming to the update.

Totally loved it. You proved the word trust . And I want a good pay back for sheetal. Pls continue this ss.

Forgot to say this I loved the last part when he was sitting on the bed and grinning. I was laughing like a mad to think that.

Ok I will stop my buk-buk here.

Take care. Always your well wisher.
Edited by sruthi1921 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: kins103

I didn't expect khushi to forgive easily after the prank
They just met and are acting as if they are in love I.don't understand this



wait and watch... ;D
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43

Well you guys are probably wondering how im updating so fast, well my secret is that I type out about 10 pgs each week and split them up and edit it. LOL and as for my previous update, I think I rushed it abit to fast and also I don't want Khushi to forgive Arnav that easily so im going to take the story a little bit more slower and sorry to all the people who didn't like the previous update, we all make mistakes so yeah!! ENJOY!!! Just felt the need to add this!! Don't kill me please L BUT I PROMISE IT WILL BE A GOOD ENDING, ALL BAD THINGS HAPPEN FOR A REASON!!!!! :D

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Khushi wore a pair of pink shorts and a large white t shirt and headed off to School. She was walking in the corridor when she bumped into somebody, when she saw who it was she grinned like an idiot and said "you are right by the way, we are totally destined to bump into each other'" Arnav smirked and tried to kiss her but she moved back and said "Okay look, I want to talk to you about something. Last night I was not in my senses so I just forgave you for it but to be honest Arnav, it really hurt and I just can't be so selfless anymore, look at the facts, I DON'T KNOW YOU!!! We only met yesterday, there is a lot you don't know about me and there is a lot I don't know about you!!! Please give me time, we can be friends but I need time to think, and for last night's joke, I don't know whether you deserve my forgiveness. Yes it was a joke but I just don't know what to do anymore. Im sorry but let me go okay?" Arnav looked like somebody just kicked him, he soon held her hand and brought her to him and said "but Khushi I told im sorry, right?" "Yes you did Arnav and I know you mean it but I don't think sorry is enough, from today, I am just Khushi and you are just Arnav, you can call me munchkin but I think we need to keep a distance, after everything that happened last night, I need a break. I have gone through a lot and I just want to relax a little so please just let me go'" Khushi pulled away and walked off.

Arnav was in shock, he had never been hurt this much. Only because of his stupid prank that he had hurt her and himself! Why does she affect me so much? What does she mean to me? We've only known each other for 24 hours, so why is it so painful? He walked off thinking about last night's events. Her kiss, her tears, her warmth, her voice, her skin, her pain'''What did it mean to him?

'what happened yesterday between me and arnav was wrong!! I shouldn't have forgiven him so easily, I am new here and I don't even know the people here, I guess I was to scared to lose a friend that all this happened, but not anymore,im tired of always giving in to people. Not any more Khushi kumari Gupta, you have had enough of pain, don't forgive him so easily'." Khushi teared a little and walked off to class.

Arnav was playing Ball trying to figure out how to get Khushi to forgive him, this was the first time Arnav had gone to lengths trying to persuade a girl and that also a girl who he barely knows. Oh boy it was affecting him but he decided to follow his heart.

"Ms Khushi Kumari Gupta, you will come back to me, and that's Arnav Singh Raizada's promise! Even if it is the last thing I do, you will come running back to me'." Arnav decided'.

"No Mr Raizada, I don't think I will ever have It in me to forgive you'.." Khushi thought''.

Now did they both know that they were meant to be together? ''''

Edited by epicperson7 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
awesome story:) plz update soon and do pm me:) just luvd it:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
Hi super girl.

Can I take this as the next part or a continuation of last part.

But enjoyed a lot. I before I relpy my res comment I got the pm. Thanks for being a humble girl. Coming to the update. It was short but a nice one A good part of your writing want to see the magic of ipkknd again because they tired to conteol thier feelings.

Either I too wanted the forgiveness so easily. I write such a long comments but I dont get response.But its great.


Because this is my first long comment on any ss.
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Edited by sruthi1921 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: sruthi1921

Hi super girl.


Can I take this as the next part or a continuation of last part.

But enjoyed a lot. I before I relpy my res comment I got the pm. Thanks for being a humble girl.

Either I too wanted the forgiveness so easily. I write such a long comments but I dont get response.

Because this is my first long comment on any ss.
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u can take it as a continuation, lol i actually really like 'super girl', thnx for reading!! xoxoxoxoxoxox
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey jus now received ur pm for 2souls bt d link isnt working:( can send me a proper link?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
OMFG arnav kissed her !!!

and poor sheetal...can someone stab her to death !!!!!

superb update...jay is dfntly gonna make arnav go nuts !!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jyo.Arshi.IPK

OMFG arnav kissed her !!!


and poor sheetal...can someone stab her to death !!!!!

superb update...jay is dfntly gonna make arnav go nuts !!!!


haha lol thnx for reading! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
awww Jay is a sweetheart !!!!

he actually told arnav everything...sheetal is jay's sis !!!! hate her so much !!!!

arnav so mad about khushi...well we all knw no one can resist our khushi !!!!!

loved the update

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