ARIYA:Love n Understanding part 14 on pg 33

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It was raining.A girl was walking in the streets.She was drenched Suddenly a hand grabbed her waist,twirled her around and hugged her.She resisted but hugged him back as she felt him hug her tighter

Then with a full effort she pushed him n ran away.

SO, how was it good bad or worse.do comment whatever u feel of this plot so i can decide to continue or not.suggestions r welcomed too and thanx a lot for going through this.😊

Edited by Christeee - 12 years ago

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Mimi2609

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Posted: 13 years ago

interesting and suspenseful start

whose the girl?

whose the boy?

why did the girl run away?

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DivineDarkness

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Posted: 13 years ago

intresting start... continue soon... make it long parts...

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Nida

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey ...

Great plot ...

Can't wait for the first chapter :)

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pravallika

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Posted: 13 years ago

interesting starts...
Do continue..
Plz pm me when u update

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kaveriw2008

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Posted: 13 years ago

Wow...this is so amazing...i only think that the girl is riya and boy is arjun...

Pls update and add me to your pm list...i really love to read more...

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Posted: 13 years ago

PART 1

Next day in ETF

Riya had been reading on a case when Rathore n Arjun came in.He looked at her but she AVOIDED him.Arjun kept on staring her and when Riya couldn't take it anymore she just went from there with an excuse of making coffee.Arjun looked on confused😕 n thought"ab kya hogaya isse kal raat se bohot aajeeb behave karrahe hai".Arjun just engrossed himself in these thoughts when rathore announced a new case.

Riya tried to avoid him all day.She knew he was looking at her but she couldn't look into his eyes.The day's case had been easy.The father had killed his own daughter to hide his affair.After solving the case rathore shree and chotu had some work so they went leaving Ariya alone.arjun went near her but riya moved away.now arjun was super pissed😡.he pulled her in his cabin and pinned her to the wall.

"subhae se dekh raha hu tum mujhe avoid kyu karrahe ho"he yelled.now riya lost her cool all her frustation burst out🤢

"accha to ab aapko ko attention chahiye kyu ab ki wo dusri ladki aapko chodke chaligaye ya fir aapko time pass karna hai"she yelled back.

Now arjun had enough.He went super closed to her.

Arjun "Riya kya bakwass kar rahi ho konsi ladki kya keh rahi ho saff saff bolo"

Riya"lagta hai super cop ARJUN SURYAKANT RAWTE ki yaaddash ko kuch hogaya hai to thikha mein yadd dilati hu apko"

FLASHBACK...

In past few days arjun hab been too kind on Riya.She had been on 9th cloud.She was sooo happy.Ever since she had come back recovering from an accident he hadn't scolded her.Even in the hospital she had sensed him holding her hand sitting by her side.

In a case Riya had been stuck between goons and other member couldn't help heras they were themselves stuck.Arjun was shouting her name and asking her to fight.She gathered courage and put all her efforts. She did it and Arjun was so happy that he had hugged her.Yes her dream was finally coming true(or as she thought).Riya was thinking that finally her love would be reciprocated❤️.Rathore told them that they would be going for dinner together to celebrate Riya's hard work.Arjun had told her that he would pick her up.

Riya was so excited that she took 2 hrs to be ready.She had wished long for this day.The day was very special for her and she hoped it too end happily.Little did she know that this happiness was the sun before a huge storm.💔

so how was it do comment😊

Edited by Christeee - 13 years ago