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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
loved all the swaron..moments...spcly d lttr of sharon...
plz pm me whn u update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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TaaRey romance loved it nyc update:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thnku vry muj evry1

tanha 4 ever i will surely pm u

nd m happy tht u all lykd ur fav couples in my ss
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Posted: 12 years ago
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amazing ss tanyadi...luvd it...I also luv taarey n swaron...plzz pm me wen u update next...u write wonderful
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thnku swty!!!!!!!!!!!!1 i will pm u dnt wory!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: chaichil

thnku swty!!!!!!!!!!!!1 i will pm u dnt wory!!!!!!!!!!!!

yaar take sum rest...kal update karna ye ff
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haa yaaar i will babez

thoda tym toh do
kal tak kardungi!!!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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this update is spcl because there is swarons engagement in it

and hats of to raadhi as she has written the taarey romance part(which is in red)

without her i wud haf been stuck between no wer

thanks to evry1 who luvd my ff and supported me

thanks thanks thanks

hope u like tthis update to

plzz dnt forget to cumnt and like

and pardon me for the late update

...

THE MAGICAL MOMENT

The preparations of the engagement was going in full swing

Rey luking rily handsome in the nagada style walla kurta was busy receiving guest and taani was handling the relatives both the rai prakash family and her own shekhwath family

The roka ceremony was to be held in an hour the whole gang the best twelve was present and was doing their best to make this day a success rhagav aashi's long time boyfriend helped with the rehasals of the spcl dance which was the grand surprise for swaron they were going to enact swaron love story through a dance and the spcl thing about the dance was that...well tht was a surprise

There Sharon was sitting amidst all the the styling equipments who wer making her beautiful though the beauticians themselves said ki unhe zyada mehnath nahi karna padega shez already so pretty

All her cousins wer sitting around and teasing her with jiju's name

"haye dekho zyara meri raani bitiya ko...sharmathe kitni pyaari lagthi hein" said Sharon granny

Sharon just blushed

rinni was sitting there and seeing Sharon being dressed up by simmi she cud not do anything as she had a small thing to look after.her pretty little daughter ashana

seeing swarons marriage she remeberd her own roka with amar she is very happy now for herself and her best frnd Sharon

but rey was still restless abb tak janab ne taani ko jo nahi dekha

"teri behen ne toh ab tak khud dressup bhi nahi kiya hein...yeh itni busy q hein" said rey handing over the diamond cuffs to swayam he wore them

"thank you mein bolu kya?'asked rey

Swayam luked at him confused

He agin showed him the cuffs and said mera gift hein tere liye

"ohh yaar tu toh bhai hein mera..."saying this they both hug


Swayam thn takes out a pacake and hands it to rey

"le madat kar li teri"said swayam



"kya???t

tu chahhta hein ki mein tere shaadi mein saari pehen lun nahi mere bhai itna bhi math expect kar mujsein tu"said rey

"shut up dud3 yeh tere liye nahi taani ke liye hein"said swayam

"ohhh"said rey and did not waist a second and went towards taani


taani is looking after each thing n rey is looking at her n thn taani go to her room n rey follow

her she go inside n forget to close door soo rey quitly go inside n close door n thn he hug her from behind n star kissing her neck n taani tight her hold on rey hand tht is on her stomach n thn he turn her n star kissing her front side n thn he went up n kiss on here eye thn on check n star licking it n thn he went near her lip n thn finally he went to her lip n he put his lip on her n thn soft kiss turn into aggressive kiss n thn thr break kiss n taani ask rey wht shld she wear



n thn rey give taani gift n tht was dress tht he ask her to wear it n thn she com out n was trying to put up but was unable soo rey hlp her to dress up n her make her wear saree


n thn he kiss her stomach n thn he com up n kiss her throat n thn he again kiss her on lip n thr were disturb by someone at door n it was non other thn swayam

"tujhein abhi hi anna tha kya" asked rey irritated

Swayam smiled and replied

"shayad tum dono bhool gaye ho ki aaj meri engagement hein"

"ohh teri"said taani and runs from there as she promised she will be with Sharon

Then the engagement starts with the music saibo in background

Both Sharon and swayam proceeds towards each other


Swayam indicates with his hands to her"tum bohut achi lag rahi ho"

Sharon mouthed "tell me sumthing new"

Swayam chuckeled

Vicky heard this and said "beta ha tu has le vaise bhi shaadi ke baad rona hi toh hein"

Swayam gave a weird look to him

Finally they reached the center of the stage

A cockatoo flew above them and dropped two beautifull rings but b4 sharon cud catch them rey and taani caught them and ran from there

Swayam and Sharon looked at them shocked

Taani- itna intezar kiya toh abh thoda aur kar lo

Rey- qunki hum dikhane waale hein ajj ek mahan premkhatha

Taani ' yes the beautifull journey of swaron

They showed a video remix on them

From the 1st meeting of swaron

Till the pics of the pre roka ceremony

Suddenly the light went of thn frm a bg voice taani said

"swayam humari relationship ko mein ek chance dena chahti hun,trial relationship ke zaariye"taani said who was enacting the role of Sharon

Rey who was enacting the role of swayam said

"sharon i will make u fall in love with me...i love u taan...hmm.mm sharon"

Then a bg voice is heard {it was of nil}

Patha naahi kab yeh trail relationship love mein baadal gaaya

Paatha nahi kab aakadu Sharon sweet bangayi {Sharon gives a cute pout at this}

Kuch patha nahi but itna paatha hein ki swaron ek ho gaye

Ishq walla love songs starts and taarey shows the perfect ensemble of salsa swaron was shocked taani ka pehla dance{expect khatak}

Thn reey twirls taani towars swaron taani hands them over the ring

(Ishq wala love)
Agar yeh usko bhi hua hai
Phir bhi mujhko zyada hua (Ishq wala love)
Oo..o..

Meri neend jaise pehli baar tuti hai
Aankhien mulke maine dekhi hai subah
Hui dhoop zyada leke teri roshini din chadha (Ishq wala love)

During this part swayam puts the ring on sharons finger sweetsimi123

And kisses her fingers

Sharon blushes

The music playes on

Tutta zyada zyada taara jab gira
Zara zyada zyada mangoon dil tera
Kabhi zyada zyada maaney na
Dil yeh surfira
Ishq wala love

Bada yeh dil nadaan tha
Aaj kuch zyada hua (Ishq wala love)


And Sharon slips the ring on swayams finger and she tip toe and kisses him on the cheek

There was a set of ooh from his frnds and evry1 clapped and wished the couple

"atlast said taani smiling and luking at her bhaiyya and bhabhi

Rey luked at her and said "humari engagement mein tum aise kaam nahi karoge"


"phir mein kya karu"asked taani

"tum mere saath raahoge" said rey

Taani luked at rey "i luv u rey"

"luv u more"replyd rey


LoveTaaRey

Edited by chaichil - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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RES
UNRES

Awesome update
It was really really cute
Loved the update
Thnkx for the PM dear
Update next ASAP

Simren👏
Edited by sweetsimi123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#80
aww it was really cute and the romantic part was hawtt i loved it

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