Hatred-The shade of love? AK SS - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
interesting but confusing to their hatred exciting part so far

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Posted: 12 years ago
#12
interesting...
hatered is definately a shade of love
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#13
nice update so they got married only for their parents...waitin to see how story unfolds from here

thanks for pm to both aromaraina and jasmine
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Posted: 12 years ago
#14
part 3
nice part...
do they have a past?
cont soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#15

Hatred-The shade of love Part 4


Naina knocks at the door.
Kripa who is sleeping gets irritated:Who is this?
She:The door is not locked.Please come in.
Naina comes inside.Kripa wakes up quickly:Mom...you?
She smiles:Kripa...someone has come to see you.
Kripa thinks:Who is that?

Kripa comes to the front room.That was Kasturi.
Kripa is surprised:Kasturi!
Kas:I could not stop myself from visiting you.
Angad:I knew that you will come to see your best friend's present condition.
Angad whispers to her:Don't worry...Kripa is still pure.She can leave this house at any moment to get married to someone.I will be relieved.
Kasturi feels weird.
Kas:Now only you woke up?
A:Kripa is an ideal daughter in law who wakes up very late.
K:I could'nt sleep last night..because Angad was snoring like hell.
Naina and Kasturi laugh.Angad is embarrassed.

Calling bell rings.
Angad opens the door.Angad is surprised:Robbie!
Robbie hugs Angad.
All are surprised to see him.
N:Robbie...you are back from US?
R:Yes...today i landed.I thought i will give you a surprise.Hi Kripa...after a couple of fights...you both got married?Surprise.
Kripa and Angad are dull.
Suddenly he sees Kasturi.
R:Who is this pretty woman?
K:This is Kasturi.My best friend.
R:Hi Kasturi..I'm Robbie...Angad's cousin.
He extends his arm.Kasturi feels weird.Robbie shakes her hand without seeking her permission.He is holding her hand tightly.Angad observes it.Kasturi takes her hand back.
Kas:Kripa...i'm going..bye...
N:Have your tea Kasturi.
K:No thanks Aunty...i will have it later.
Kasturi goes.Robbie's eyes are on her:Lovely!

Angad takes Robbie to a room:Robbie..i know that you are a big casanova.But don't try to play with Kasturi's life.She is a nice girl.Don't hurt her.
Robbie has a naughty smile on his face.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#16
Love it.Cant wait for next part.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#17
nice update but a bit short...
thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#18
part 4
nice part...
Robbie and Kasturi...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#19

Hatred-The shade of love Part 5

Sorry,this part is abt RoKa.next part wil b on AK.





Kasturi brings a file to Angad's house to see Kripa.The door is open.Nobody is there.
She hears someone singing "Tum ko bhi..."{Kabhi alvida na kehna}.She follows the music and reaches a room.She is surprised to see Robbie singing.
Robbie stops singing seeing her.He is surprised:Kasturi!
K:Actually..i came to see Kripa.I work in her office.I came to return a file.
You sing very well.
He smiles:Thanks a lot.
He extends his arm and shakes her hand softly.She felt comfortable.She smiles slightly.Slowly she removes her hand from his.
K:Ok..bye...
She turns back and walks forward.
Robbie sings:Kabhi alvida na kehna...
She turns backs at looks at Robbie.Her eyes are sparkling.She gives him a cute smile and goes away.
Kripa sees Kasturi:Kasturi...you brought the file?
K:Yes.
She gives her the file.
K:Robbie sings well.Right?i heard him sing.
KRIPA:Ya...he is a singer.He does stage shows.Tomorrow there is a stage show.Are you coming with us to see the show?
K:Ah...
KRIPA:Come yaar...
K:Ok..
Robbie overhears it.He is thrilled:Kasturi is impressed by me..She is coming for my stage show.Wow!

Robbie's stage show...Robbie's etes searches for Kasturi.He sees her smiling at him.He is happy.He sings...all are jumping with joy...

Robbie goes backstage after the show.He is surprised to see Kasturi there.
R:Kasturi!
K:It was a nice show.You rocked.
R:Thanks a lot.You know..while singing you were in my mind.That's why i could sing well.
She feels strange.
R:I know that you can't believe it.But trust me...you helped me a lot unknowingly.
So you will come for all my stage shows to cheer me up.Right?
She smiles.

Robbie is standing in the rain.He sees Kasturi smiling at him.He goes near her.She disappears.He feels shy.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#20
part 5
nice part...
cont soon dear...

PS - can u add the update and page numbers in the title too?
Edited by spvd - 12 years ago

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