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lovespell

@lovespell

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#961

Awesome. Loved it every bit. Arnav made Buaji apologize to khushi. Nice!! Khushi becoming bold and bold. Arrghhh! That veer is so disgusting. Hope Arnav finds out about hm soon. Night is still young. Would love to see how khushi makes Arnav sleep with her

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ManmarziyanTeri

@ManmarziyanTeri

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#962

Good lord that was so hot! 😆

I loved it! So beautifully written!

Urgh! I wih I could thrash Buaji! Can I please go into your story and hit her? With a huge baton or something? I just want to hit her! Lol

And haha Khushi is back to her games so god help Arnav! Bechara he just can't resist her. I think once I get back from holiday I'm going to read this fic all over again from the beginning because it's just so good! I love the connection that you've created between these two, the humour, the love, the intensity and the games that they play! Love it love it love it!

Bechara Aakash, Buaji won't let him meet Payal either - see this is why I want to hit the woman! 😆

This was an amazing chapter! I felt like I was there watching this all happen! 👏

And Veer Grr 😡! Yeh can I hit him too? Though I can't wait till Arnav gets his hands on him! Now can't wait to see if Khushi manages to keep him there or not... And then what that could lead to :S.

But I shall wait patiently because I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter of Shameless too!

Great work! xxx

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Izadora

@izzy0502

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#963

i love ur writing ...

awesome story

waiting for more rabbe ve moments

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fareeha

@pinkpearlz

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#964

Oh boy! It was amazing. Then saans, it so fits them!

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Chochoo83

@Chochoo83

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#965

wooww beautifull update dear😊 thanx for pm

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magss24

@magss24

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#966

wow an update from u ..loved it...it was amazing...

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Devilways

@Devilways

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#967

Hot as hell and great! I like them back together. And hate her family esp buaji. Crappy lady"

I really wish they get together...

Great update beautifully written and thanks for the pm.

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nee

@march2011

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#968

it seems veer gonna be the duplicate of shyam..

love how he kept her promise..now waitg to soo how khushi will convince arnav to spend the night

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wonderblake

@wonderblake

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#969

That was a sizzling update Tina,
What's Arnav going to do with his little minx now?

Great update,
Continue soon.

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FictionsFan

@FictionsFan

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#970

Hey Tina, I don't noe if u only write fan fictions, but I recently discovered this awesome site called wattpad.. I think, u shud write there as well, if u evr get spare time. I wud love to read ya there as well.. cuz tht site also has an app for androids.. ;)