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Posted: 12 years ago
Madam .. ab update bhi karo na..Waiting!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey sweet hearts thanx for your lovely comments it really touched my heart i didnt know that my ff was so popular so thnx guys cz of u guys nly have come so far...tmmrw m off to my native ..i wont be able to update until 2nd april..cz in ma native v hv ntw prob..but also i ll try to update from my cell...

and coming to update.IMP NOTE:if you guys are not in mood to witness taarey s mushy mushy scene then pls dont read it😉and again this chap is dedicated to tahira...(my sweet heart)..enjoy..

Chapter 14.b-DIL SE RE!!!!!

Taarey break the hug..and head back to hotel ..

taani s room

taani remembers the whole incident & is blushing..

Taani(blushing):rey ki taani?rey ne meri taani kaha..hayee !! taani ka boyfriend rey? Blushes n hides her face in pillow..

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On the day of dance with me..

All preprations are done..cameras are flashing all over st Louis college..compition has started...solo performance are over now its time for couple dance..taarey performance is after 2 hours(i.e last) and both are busy in changing costumes..is ready he is looking like prince ..his hair is neatly (gelled) and combed back and he has a black colored long tika on his fore head..he is wearing dhoti kind of pants you can visualize his costume in radha kaise na jale song & he is shirt less(wink wink!!gosh girls stop drooling)..he is wearing solid round kada in his hand n solid silver color round neck piece his look is that OF SRK in movie ashoka...

..he is searching for taani eagerly..while others r busy with performance n other prep..so basically both are alone..

Taanis room (in 3rd floor)she is wearing but in white color and her top had 6 dories

And Dil se song is played..

Ooo...
Ek Sooraj Nikla Tha..Kuchh Paara Pighla Tha

Taani is in her room trying to tie dorie of her top.. she had managed to tie one dorie in top n one last dorie in bottom ..she had her all hair pulled in front(i.e left side..when rey enters ..(her door is slightly open)

Ek Aandhi Aayi Thi Jab Dil Se Aah Nikli Thi
Dil Se Re..

Rey was looking here n there searching for taani when he was near door..he spots taani near dressing table her back is facing the door..freezes midway when he sees taani..

Ek Sooraj Nikla Tha..Kuchh Paara Pighla Tha

Rey is staring at taani without blinking. rey is mesmerized by her..she was trying to tie others..taani is un aware of rey s presence continues to make failed attempts to tie her dorie...rey is staring at taani only..

Ek Aandhi Aayi Thi..Jab Dil Se Aah Nikli Thi
Dil Se Re

Taani is tying to look at her back so to tie dories..makes faces when not able to reach the dories..rey is blinking n staring at her in dreamy way when wind starts playing with her hair

Dil Se Re Dil Se Re Dil Se Re Dil Se Re
Dil Se Re

rey now completely lost in her looses his sense & starts walking towards her slowly in dreamingly & dazzed way.

Dil To Aakhir Dil Hai Na,Meethi Si Mushkil Hai Na

Rey is behind taani he slowly places his hand on her bare shoulder..taani feels millions of ghoose bumps all over her body..

Piya Piya.Piya Piya Piya Na Piya.

Taani turns back to see rey there. .rey holds her by her shoulders n slowly lifts her making her face him..her eyes meets reys.

Jiya Jiya Jiya Na Jiya Dil Se Re

Both rey and taani are lost in each others eyes..when rey goes near taani..their bodies are barely half inch apart..taani is out of her trance n realizes in which situation she is in..she moves back and pushes her hair back to cover her bare back. holds the ends of her top from back (even though it would not fall or slip).

Dil Se Re Dil Se Re Dil Se Re Dil Se Re
Dil Se Re

She starts walking back wards she is not able to meet reys eyes..rey starts walking towards her..he is looking at her with such an great intensity..that its making taani blush..

Dil To Aakhir Dil Hai Na,Meethi Si Mushkil Hai Na

Taani looks at rey shyly ..and her eyes meet his..his graze is make her blush n shudder even more..rey is nearing taani ,taani is walking back..she halts when her back hits the wall..

Piya Piya.Piya Piya Piya Na Piya.

Taani s eyes drop down..rey is still walking towards taani..his eyes still on taani..he is slowly moving towards taani.. Rey is near taani..taani places one hand on his chestt..

Jiya Jiya Jiya Na Jiya Dil Se Re..

they are inches apart when rey rey cups taani 's face n makes her look in his eyes.. and rey:"tumhe mujh pe bharosa hai ?" taani smiles nods in approval..rey smiles ..

Music plays ta ra ta ra ta ta..ta ra ta ra ta ta.. .. (hope I gt the lyrics rite did nt want to miss this part if u guys r still confused play dil se dong this music starts from 1:56-2:46)

Rey goes near taani their bodies are hardly few cm away..then he holds taani by her waist & pulls taani towards him she crashes to his bare chest..taani feels thousands of butterflies flutter in her stomach...both are looking into each others eyes passionately

Ta ge ta ge ta ..

Rey could feel taani s breath on his neck..he feels goose bumps all over his body..he slowly moves one hands from taani s bare waist to her hand with which she was holding her top .he gently takes her hand in his right hand and places her hand over his right shoulder mean while with his left hand he holds taani s top..he does this without breaking eye contact with taani

Sa sa ni ni pa ni ma re ma re ni pani..

Rey now with his right hand takes her hand which was on his chest and places it on his left shoulder..then he places his hand on her waist n pulls her closer leaving not even a tweeny bit of gap for air to pass through..

Ooo...
Do Patte Patjhad Ke Pedon Se Utrey Thay
Pedon Ki Shaakhon Se Utrey Thay

Rey is still looking in taani s eyes with great intensity..now he slowly brushes taani hair from her back n pushes it in front..taani s heart skips a beat..

Phir Utne Mausam Guzre Vo Patte Do Bechaare
Phir Ugne Ki Chaahat Mein Vo Sehraon Se Guzre

Rey noe moves his face closer to taani s both can feel each others breath on their face..both are lost in small HHLL moment..when rey moves his face near her neck..

Vo Patte Dil Dil Dil Thay..Vo Dil Thay Dil Dil Dil Thay

Taani feels ticklish when she feels rey s breath on her neck..rey is still looking in taani s eyes..then he slowly places his hand near his left hand..

Dil Hai To Phir Dard Hoga
Dard Hai To Dil Bhi Hoga
Mausam Guzarte Rehte Hain..

Then he catches hold of second dorie of her top and pulls them together in order to tie them..taani closes her eyes n is blushing..but rey is still looking at her only with passion..

Dil Hai To Phir Dard Hoga
Dard Hai To Dil Bhi Hoga
Mausam Guzarte Rehte Hain

Rey then sowly moves his hand along her back till he finds other dorie..now taani s heart is beating fast she digs her fingers deep into his shoulder..she slowly opens her eyes and sees rey looking at her..she looks into his eyes..and but reys hands are working on her dorie..



Dil Se Dil Se Dil Se Dil Se
Dil Se Re

Rey tightens the dorie lil too hard due to which taani flinches lil..rey(worried) looks at her back and says sorry dard to nhi ho rha na?..taani says nahi..

Dil To Aakhir Dil Hai Na
Meethi Si Mushkil Hai Na

Rey notices that due to tightening dorie taani got red marks on her back..he has tear in his eye which taani notices n says mai thik hu ..rey then gently rubs her back where rashes have appered with his thumb ..taani feels 10000000 volt electricity pass thru her..
Piya Piya
Piya Piya Piya Na Piya

Rey then looks at taani again..who had closed her eyes then..rey smiles looking at her n gets back to dorie..and ties it..again slowly slides his hand down to tie other..


Jiya Jiya Jiya Na Jiya


Dil Se Re

He finishes tying all the dories..now he slides his hands down herback n holds her by her waist..and pulls her more close..now toh their bodies are plastering to each other..both are lost in each other..embracing each other..

Ooo...
Bandhan Hai Rishton Mein
Kaaton Ki Taarein Hain

Taani n rey both snap out of their trance and..taani then feels shy n starts blushing (itna blush ki usko blush karta dekh chand bhi lal hojaye)..she looks at rey but not meeting his eyes..thnx rey with blush..and turns back n strts walking..(in opp direction)


Patthar Ke Darwaaze Deewaarein


Belein Phir Bhi Ugti Hain

Rey then remembers something and smiles ..and starts walking towards taani..taani is still blushing when she feels rey hold her wrist from back n pulls her towards him ..taani is shocked at same time happy

Aur Guchchhe Bhi Khilte Hain
Aur Chalte Hain Afsaane Kirdaar Bhi Milte Hain

Taani comes crashing to his bare chest..she again feels goosebumps over her body ..she feels awkward n tries to go away when rey places snakes his hand on her bare stomach and pulling her closer..
Vo Rishtey Dil Dil Dil Thay
Vo Dil Thay Dil Dil Dil Thay

Rey brushes other hand across her neck from one shoulder to other..taani now closes her eyes..he moves his face towards her n she feels his breath on nape of her neck..
Gam Dil Ke Pak Chulbule Hain
Paani Ke Ye Bulbule Hain

Rey now brushes other hand also across her neck..&places both his hands near her neck slightly above her cleavage ..causing taani to breath fast

Bujhte Hain Bate Rehte Hain
Gam Dil Ke Pak Chulbule Hain

then he brushes his hands across her neck ..she feels ticklish she closes her eyes..then she feels some thing cold against her neck n chest..taani slowly opens her eyes

Paani Ke Ye Bulbule Hain
Bujhte Hain Bate Rehte Hain

taani sees a beautiful chain and heart shaped blue ocean stone pendent..she realizes it's the same pendent which she wanted to buy..mean while rey is putting hook to her chain..

Dil Se Dil Se Dil Se Dil Se
Dil Se Re

Taani turns back to see rey who has a smile on his face..she gets a tear in her eyes ..and rey brings his face close to hers and says surprise..taani is happy n touched beyond zenith..
Dil Se Re Dil Se Re
Dil Se Re Dil Se Re

Taani goes near mirror n runs her hands over the pendent n chain.. and feels shy..and holds her arm with other hand looks down & is blushing like hell rey sees her in mirror ..

Dil To Aakhir Dil Hai Na
Meethi Si Mushkil Hai Na

Piya Piya

Rey is lost in the blushing beauty who is standing before him n feels taani looks so beautiful when blushing..blush is making taani look more angelic ..he feels that god has made this beauty only for him..


Dil To Aakhir Dil Hai Na
Meethi Si Mushkil Hai Na

Rey inable to control himself starts walking towards taani still looking at her reflection..


Piya Piya Piya Na Piya
Piya Piya

Rey hugs taani from behind ..holds her by her stomach and buries his face in taani s neck ..taani feels like she is in heaven..and she responds back to his hug by holding his hands in hers..and places her hand on his cheek n says "it means a lot to me"


Jiya Jiya Jiya Na Jiya

rey smiles and lifts his face from her shoulder..and stands straight but still he is holding her by her stomach..

Piya Piya Piya Na Piya
Dil Se Re

Rey now moves towards dressing table making taani also move with him forward..she is shocked and looks at rey with puzzled expression

Jiya Jiya Jiya Na Jiya
Dil Se Re

Now rey leans his face forward ..his eyes are searching for some thing he forwards one hand reaching the object while with other hand still holding taani..taani is still puzzled n looking at rey only not paying attention to what he is doing..

Dil Se Re Dil Se Re
Dil Se Re

then rey comes bck to previous position and places a kala tika(kajal) on taani s neck taani looks at him surprised and rey goes near her ear n wispers "kisi ki nazar na lage tumhe" and kisses her on her cheek..taani is looking at him still surprised unable to figure any thing..then she realizes that rey complimented her n starts blushing..rey says"haye " & smiles at her n leaves taani blushing still more harder..

OK guys i cannot write further..mujhe yakin hi nhi ho rha ki maine itna mushy mushy kaise likh diya,,knw wt m kind of blushing ☺️ as i m visualizing the whole thing..plsss do comment n like agar acha laga ho toh!!n dnt frget to wish me happy journey😉

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Posted: 12 years ago
HEY , 😳☺️☺️❤️
😳I AM ALSO BLUSHING HERE ☺️ , ITS REALLY VERY ROMANTIC ,LOVELY ,
I WOULD HAVE 2 STOP IF U WRITE MORE ROMANTIC THAN THIS 😆😆

LOVED THAT PENDENT PART ALSO😳😳

UPDATE SOON
AND YA HAPPY JOURNEY AND HAVE FUN😊😃
Edited by chinudolly - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
bags ur jst owsome m blushing lyk i have seen d whole incident😳...loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
<font size="5">Aww... how sweet. I love the part where Rey puts a kala tika on Tani's neck and then he goes near her ear and whispers "Kisiki nazar na laga."
Edited by CharMarfan1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it
continue soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome...I was just smiling!!
Great job!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG Bags..I just loved it yaar...Even i was having Butterflies fluttering in my stomach😳😆 ... Itna intense Scenes😳😆..vaah kya baat he yaar!!👏 muaaahhh for dat!😛 Nd I really loved d way Rey tied doz doris.😳😊.. nd end pe voh, pendant taani ko gift kiya dat was too cute.😉.romantic.😳.nd what not!!👏 nd in d climax..dat teeka was just awesome⭐️..nazar na laga taarey aur saath saath tumhe bhi..Just loved todays ud..nd apni holidays enjoy karna.😉😊..have a safe journey.😛.m going back home tomorrow..!! Ud sooon..😊.jaldi..can't wait..atleast ek promo toh dedo yaar.😆.until you come back..we can't wait longer!! Apni trip enjoy karna.teeke ..bye! 😛
Edited by Itz.Me.Charleen - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
i have read ur update but i have toread it again coz 1 st time i kept on blushing and had gooze bums so i can understand your condition and such a romantic shievering update without lipkiss is just just commandable,
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Itz.Me.Charleen

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OMG Bags..I just loved it yaar...Even i was having Butterflies fluttering in my stomach😳😆 ... Itna intense Scenes😳😆..vaah kya baat he yaar!!👏 muaaahhh for dat!😛 Nd I really loved d way Rey tied doz doris.😳😊.. nd end pe voh, pendant taani ko gift kiya dat was too cute.😉.romantic.😳.nd what not!!👏 nd in d climax..dat teeka was just awesome⭐️..nazar na laga taarey aur saath saath tumhe bhi..Just loved todays ud..nd apni holidays enjoy karna.😉😊..have a safe journey.😛.m going back home tomorrow..!! Ud sooon..😊.jaldi..can't wait..atleast ek promo toh dedo yaar.😆.until you come back..we can't wait longer!! Apni trip enjoy karna.teeke ..bye! 😛


awww thnx dear actully na dil se song sun rhi thi thode din pehle sote tym n yeh sab scene agaya dimag mai but thik se nhi socha tha .😊n nazar ?LOL n promo?kuch socha h nhi ab tak aage kya hoga.. aur kal wapas ja rhi ho?hope you had a great time in kochi...kash mil pate

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