ARSHI FF:ONE NIGHT STAND2(c)#13 V.V.IMP NOTE Pg138

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urm21

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Posted: 12 years ago

#191

brilliant, but u cannot leave us hanging, u have to update immediately!!!!!

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shivani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#192

congrats for new thread , awesome update

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rulama

@rulama

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+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#193

Hi Appy!

This update was very good. Enjoyed the VM. You have done an excellent job of synchronization.

Glad that you have not given prominence to redemption and moving the story forward in the right pace.

I went through "Inverted" at your recommendation and I found it extremely

lovable. As you have described its based on an unique concept.Thanks.

Looking forward to read how ASR will cajole Kushi in your next update.

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..ashiya..

@..ashiya..

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#194

Awesome update.. I just loved it.. Khushi trying to supress her hurt infront of Arnav was too good.. She surely had gained a lot of confidence.. Like the way she was dealing with the business associates and Arnav truely had to be proud of her.. And the ending was just tooo too too good.. He moved in her flat... Now they gonna be together and stay as hubby and wife??? I'm sure nxt chap is gonna have a lot of ARSHI romance.. And the precap.. First night with he hubby😳😳😳.. Waiting for the update eagerly!!
And once agn congo for the new thread!!

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nadiaben

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Posted: 12 years ago

#195

This is simply beautiful !!!

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Peehu24

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#196

congrats on new thread...

ah! that was amazing...khushi being jealous..and arnav teasing her...were so cute...so? arnav is here afterall...and moved in with khushi...loved it...i am eagerly waiting for next update now...

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Dazz

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Posted: 12 years ago

#197

Cngrats n awsm updae cnt wait 4 da nxt

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prati

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Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#198

Congo 4 d new thrd... Lovely updt jst luved cnt wait to read to wat happens on deir 1st nite 2gether aftr being hubby & wifey... Cont soon

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shivi.10rocks

@shivi.10rocks

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+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#199

what an update
just luvd it

i enjoyed d office part... d naughty arnav (kuch aur bhi jataa sakta hoon)😉
they way u expressed khushi's feeling was just amazng...it was vry difficult for her to control her feelings after watchng her husband
she tried to control her feelings but being jealous she started dancing wth nk
still khushi eyes were lukng for her luv

(ankhon ki gustaakhiyaan maaf ho
chori chori ye nazre mili)
lykd d way arnav was proud of his wife , her confidence, her achievements

khushi at home thinking about him wanting to hug him, touch him, melt n his touch
awww that was so cute
(dil kyu ye mera shor kare,
idhar nahi, udhar nahi teri ore chale)
yeee arnav at their house... what an adaa he has
he held her waist n i thnk s about to kiss her

eagerly waiting for d next part

thanx for suggesting another ff
wll try to read it

Edited by shivi.10rocks - 12 years ago

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Ruki.F

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Posted: 12 years ago

#200

WOW .. it was Just brilliant brilliant brilliant... loved the update Appy ... and end how he said that they gone stay in one house together was FANTASTIC and FULL OF ROMANCE MOOD ... cant wait for next part ... HOPE FINALLY AFTER 43 Chapter something gone happen between of them .. (i should be SHAMEFUL but wut to do 😉) WAITING FOR IT APPY ..PLZ give us some super duper moment between of them ...cant wait for 2morow (hope u gone post 2morow )