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moomin4455

@moomin4455

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

😭

That was wonderful! Just sooo wonderful!

The way Arnav and her met once again after so many years - so reminiscent of their first infamous meeting! They came full circle!

Do you have any other FF/OSs that you've written? This was written so well!

Bim

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neverbefore

@neverbefore

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Amazing, amazing, amazing!!!! Loved the storyline and the fact that it was Lavanya, Akaash and Payal who were there for Khushi and Arnav ... Makes it so much more realistic and uses these characters as they should have been used. Brilliantly written as well ... The tears continued right to the end. 😭 Please write more! Not necessarily this story...just more! 😃

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Eggon_Snow

@Eggon_Snow

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

You made me cry...serious...so beautiful and moving...thank you for sharing this with us and thank your sis too for coming up with this idea😊

Edited by shar1988 - 12 years ago

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bewakoofLadki

@bewakoofLadki

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

it was simply fantablous...sooo heart touchng...i loved it

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Qwertyui

@Qwertyui

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Hi just loved so simple nice story I love dis new khushi plz update and pm me :)

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shafia Akhtar

@IISHAFS

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

tht is soo awesome i love it all 3 parts

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henamani

@henamani

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

this was an amazing story. kept the essence of the realtionship while accounting for the absence

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Filmyshilmy

@dennisdmenace

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

Brilliant.

If CVs care to follow this , then also our lives will be saved.

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Awesomeforever

@crazyforarshi

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#29

OMG!!!!!!!! I haven't cried like that in ages😭...what a beautiful imagination...my darling Madhu.👏...thank you so very much for sending me a PM, can't tell you how I've loved this story! I do hope they carry forward the actual serial like that😳...but, really??????...I don't think they could think so beautiful...at least not whoever is writing the silly tracks now😡...no ways!!!!!!!!! This is how it should go.👍🏼...goodness, gracious me...the way I cried...my dogs started wondering whatever the heck happened to ma😆?????????????

Keep it up love.😃...I think it would be appropriate to ask you to write another SS...or better still...make it an FF, so it goes on for chapters & chapters & we keep looking forward to it😳...rest assured that we will love it...I'm already looking forward to another one from you...come on luv, you can do it!!!!!!!!⭐️