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kafa

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Posted: 12 years ago

#791

lovely update and just love Arnav confused mind

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arnavbarun

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Posted: 12 years ago

#792

great update!!

the way you wrote why he is what he is was wonderful!

I am happy atleast he is giving it a thought now! he is questioning himself what he wants...he is thinking of winning her forgiveness!

but I am not sure whether his ways will be acceptable to khushi!

this is an critical point! either khushi will see his efforts and they come on a truce of sorts and giving it a try!

this time khushi wont give him the chance

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Yellow.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#793

awesome update!!! loved how u brought arnav's inner feelings and thoughts so perfectly... now what will he do?? he called aman hmmm gifts??? 😳

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simi888

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Posted: 12 years ago

#794

Your on a roll - i never expected another update so soon, not that im complaining!

It was great to be able to read things from Arnavs perspective, his such a tortured soul in so many ways but i love the fact that his well built walls are crumbling around him, one push at a time.

I really enjoy the steady pace you keep, its all very believable in how their relationship is developing and i think its important for Arnav to change gradually as opposed to just instantly overnight realising his mistakes and undying love for khushi! Not that i think he loves her yet, but there is definitely a very acute awareness of khushi which if only he gives the chance will change in to love. I always think the lead up to the characters falling in love is the best part anyway so i look forward to reading more about Arnavs struggle to avoid khushi.

Love the last line, if in doubt call Aman! lol

Also wanted to say a quick thanks for the scraps you posted, i really appreciated MAYBE i could be REALLY lucky and you update Caught too! 😃

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Dalmuthuya

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Posted: 12 years ago

#795

I am glad you dedicated a chapter to Arnav's point of view. He definitely needed to think all that. Loved how you portrayed his confusion in this chapter. Uff you write so smoothly, it perfectly transitions. Loved it.

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kshows_fangirl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#796

I am shocked to read another update so quickly!! Thank u! Coming back to the update, you have given us so many glimpses of Arnav's past, and I loved the detailed account of his past. Brought me to tears especially the part when he remembered his mother, as she was the only person who he had said sorry to. It's hard for Arnav to speak those words, and it's no surprise that he never apologized to Anjali, instead he lavishes expensive gifts on her, as his way of showing love and apologizing. I am curious to know about what is Arnav going to do next? Hmm...Aman, haha, Arnav will remain ASR as always. I am thinking maybe just as in IPKKND, he is going to send Aman to buy gifts or something..but let's see😉 ...Fab update!!

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reshamc

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Posted: 12 years ago

#797

Wooowww!!!! I just came and saw 5 updates waiting for me😃

BRILLIANT...AWESOME...LOVED IT.

Khushi's outburst was sooo goood...and Arnav apologised😲 had to read that part twice to make sure he really did say sorry😆 a very pleasant shock...

continue the great work...

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Polkadots78

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Posted: 12 years ago

#798

Insights into ASR' psyche,...vey well written...repeated use of his full name drove home the point quite well...he had apologized and he didn't even need to practice in front of the mirror...

ASR, you are fighting a losing battle, give it up😊

The last sentence about Aman had me laughing out loud..😃

Edited by Polkadots78 - 12 years ago