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asrfan90

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Posted: 12 years ago

#771

wonderful update dear love u

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SS88

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Posted: 12 years ago

#772

Oh yes, dont talk to her, don't be introspective, just call Aman, your man Friday, and every other day. God men are dense! And emotionally retarded. Oh good, she should just let him do all the hard work now, and sit back and give him hell. It was a really interesting update to read, it gives one an insight into what made Arnav ASR. And his inability to communicate like normal human beings. I guess now he's going to get a make over done for her? Or maybe gift her oodles of expensive stuff she'll probably throw on his face? I'm so looking forward to the next installment. Umm, Krani, when are we getting an update on Caught? Cos you ve left us at a cliffhanger.

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silki

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Posted: 12 years ago

#773

very well written...u have penned down Arnav's feelings very well...

now I can understand what he is feeling ...hopefully he is going to do something to make this remaining trip memorable for khushi :)

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LooneyLuna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#774

Thanks for finally giving us a proper arnav character sketch.

Its really hard to like him! His priorities seem skewed. Yes its nice his family does come first, and he would do anything for them. But when you mention expensive gifts and showing off and money is everything..it makes me feel like he still doesn't know himself, he just follows the norm. And maybe thats because he never got a chance to do that, grow up normally?

I liked this update because we are finally seeing some guilt, an acknowledgement of a conscience. He cant hide behind his mask forever, we know there is a human hiding there somewhere.

I like how you have made his character so strong and the slow progression really helps understanding and peeling all the layers. Its like a beautiful extended version of the show..so many things are clearer about these characters when you write them.

I still maintain my stance...

poor poor khushi.

Also thanks for updating so fast..cant wait for more.

going to stop blabbing nowww

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barfi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#775

just loved yr update pls keep updating

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AbdulloveIPKKND

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Posted: 12 years ago

#776

OMG OMG This whole chapter on Arnav and wait!!1 The last line and line before that seems to me that he is going to give her the gifts. If that is than omg omg I can't wait to read the next update. AAAHHH Please please make it happen what I am thinking. I am sure that is it. I hope so. *Finger crossed*

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soniachammu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#777

He did deserve her anger but did he get scared of her anger will he try to make up but seriously I want khushi to walk out of this marriage

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Kiruthika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#778

wow tat was amazing.. do update soon yaar.. nd tweet idea is simply awesome😊

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Nidsubh007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#779

Brilliant update! Loved seeing how ASR was born.

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rusticreet

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Posted: 12 years ago

#780

first things first...i never expected you to update so quickly!! but u did surprise very pleasantly and a BIG THANK YOU FOR THAT...i liked how you projected Arnav's anguish...i guess it was imp at this point of time...