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Priya

@Crazy_soul

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Posted: 12 years ago

#731

Great update.is he intending to get an expensive gift for khushi?

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Amanram

@Amanram

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Posted: 12 years ago

#732

Great update. Been waiting for this for a while now. Love the angry Khushi but Arnav calling aman to solve his marital problems just cracked me up - that's the limit😉 Trust Arnav to do something like that.

I am now followng your link on twitter - thanks for this.

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thesis

@thesis

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Posted: 12 years ago

#733

i don't mind reading this story forever the best part about ur work is the fact that no one become good all of a sudden there should be always shades of grey i hope u keep the intensity and anger intact like tell no one can write drama the way u can most of the times the reader is bound to cry

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Onlooker

@Onlooker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#734

The sketch on thoughts, beliefs and principles of ASR is exactly what i expected him to be. Thus, that abrupt sorry did surprise me. But i surmised that it means that he understood that she was hanging by the last thread when she unleashed on to him and that he had crossed his boundaries with his indifference. Even ASR himself was surprised with his apology, though he didn't complete it.

He is genuinely confused as to why and what of what he did!! He is looking into himself and trying to understand what each of them wants in this relationship. Pondering over their fight, remembering Nani extracting his promise to look after Kushi, and Kushi's rightful accusation that he does nothing to work on their relationship. I liked how he recalled the dialogues from past ..it showed how much he was affected by all this outburst from Kushi.

Why the hell did he call Aman?!! You made me damned curious by that single sentence. So when are we getting the next update.Hold on.. Now am reading your thoughts. You think am greedy and is exasperated that 5 updates in 2 days is not good. Certainly, you have made me greedy.😛

Edit: Am following you on twitter.

Edited by Onlooker - 12 years ago

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shah.1234

@shah.1234

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#735

nice update bt u r taking ur story very slowly to next levels well amazingly written

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applesauce.

@applesauce.

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#736

Beautifully Written.I am so loving the way you have sketched and described each intricate details that makes up the complex man ASr.👏

Cant wait for the next Update!

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bc1972

@bc1972

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#737

Great part! The much needed ASR's perspective. Important to know what's going on his mind...khushi is an open book.

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Sarah

@arnavkijalebi

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#738

First of all..this was a quick and very much appreciated update! Hopefully its going to be Aman to the rescue but I really hope Arnav gets a taste of his own medicines and all the hurt he has given Khushi...wow the sounds cruel, but Arnav has just hurt Khushi soo much that it breaks my heart. I cannot thank you enough for her lash-out in the previous chapter because it was very necessary. It'll be exiting to see what ASR does next😉

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Aparna Mohan

@zoyadarkrose

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Posted: 12 years ago

#739

He called Aman??!what the!! 😲
I loved how you portrayed Arnav,his past & his present

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N0306

@N0306

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#740

really beautifully written Arnav's side of the story.. how sadist he is to see her hurt.. he intentionally didn't pick up the call even after knowing that she wouldn't call if it was not absolutely necessary...

thanks for quicker and longer update... i was in for surprise.. :)