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moomin4455

@moomin4455

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1011

"Aman!"

"Y..yes Sir?"

"Fix this!"

ASR over and out. Aman looking perplexed at the phone "What should I fix again???!"

Everything Aman. Fix everything!

Arnav has a long slog in trying to make this marriage work. If I were Khushi I would maintain my stance of giving up on Arnav and wait till he makes the first move. The ball's in his court - his behaviour is insufferable!

I believe Arnav can change or at the very least Khushi can be included in the circle of people that the great ASR would turn the world over for. But does she even want that??

The article was brilliant! So ASR is by no means a trendsetter, but a 'adapter' of fashion...well, seems like recent events have disturbed him and perhaps been reflected in the black/white wierdly symmetryed clothes. Funny that: not all things should be black and white - and one should try and have a perspective that is balanced or symmetric...impossible when you are determined to put everything into neat little boxes..

Perhaps ASR should the message in the article!

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hellgirl

@hellgirl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1012

Hey that is jut horrible article written about AR,arnav and ofcourse khushi...
Arnav is not going to very happy...

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Deepa876

@Deepa876

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1013

Hi Krani, faboulous update again. I really wanted to know about Arnav's point of view, his frustrations, mindset & regret which you delivered perfectly. I'm still angry with him though for deserting Khushi. He really needs to do something to come back in his wife's good books and of the readers too.
I wanted to thank you for giving us so many updates in a row. Hope to read more & more frequently of this wonderful story.
p.s-just read the article too, a very novel idea of taking the story further. I hope Arnav gets back at that journalist for writing crap about AR & also about his wife instead of getting angry at Khushi for the dressing sense matter.

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Swati Hansraj

@swati-89

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#1014

Didn't expect this and so was totally left surprised.

What a slap of an article, now it remains to be seen whether Mr.Raizada is aware of this latest news item. With so much going on in his mind now, how is he gonna react to this????

See u in the next thread...

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preciousgirl125

@preciousgirl125

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1015

Before i start lemme tell u i absolutely love ur works...arranged marriage is one of my first FF that got me glued to the arshi FF world...can't believe i missed so many updates..came across the updates only yesterday when i saw u on twitter and followed u there...i love the way u write..its so touching..khushi's emotional burst out gave me goosebumps..i could literally feel all her pain and anguish..also her loneliness and fear when she sat on the bench..u took me to australia for a moment there..its like am sitting next to her and watching all of it !! Brilliant !! And the perfect description to the two sides of arnav is more than brilliant...take a bow !! Waiting for the next parts to be updated very eagerly...am not much active on IF...if u can,will u plz update me on twitter when u update else tweet abt it..i'll be stalking ur tweets anyway :p

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preciousgirl125

@preciousgirl125

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Posted: 12 years ago

#1016

Hi krani:)Before i start lemme tell u i absolutely love ur works...arranged marriage is one of my first FF that got me glued to the arshi FF world...can't believe i missed so many updates..came across the updates only yesterday when i saw u on twitter and followed u there...i love the way u write..its so touching..khushi's emotional burst out gave me goosebumps..i could literally feel all her pain and anguish..also her loneliness and fear when she sat on the bench..u took me to australia for a moment there..its like am sitting next to her and watching all of it !! Brilliant !! And the perfect description to the two sides of arnav is more than brilliant...take a bow !! Waiting for the next parts to be updated very eagerly...am not much active on IF...if u can,will u plz update me on twitter when u update else tweet abt it..i'll be stalking ur tweets anyway :p and whoa !! The article :o whats happening...update soon plz

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--BumbleBee--

@--BumbleBee--

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#1017

That was awesome.

The narrative about his past and how it has shaped him was written beautifully..

Just caught up with the article as well.

Have a feeling, maybe, maybeee, Khushi will help him out?

Please update soon..

Can't wait!!!!!

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noreen

@noreen

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#1018

oh no! in for some fireworks from arnav's side

pls ud soon thnks!!!

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kristin

@sweet_5

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#1019

I loved it

I appreciate it when authors devote time to their stories and give us a background on a certain character

Good to kno that this man possesses some sort of intellectual thinking.Hopefully he puts the pieces together and realizes he was an ass

And yes Aman!!! God I love him! Hope he has a big part in the story

I love how you spoke about wealth in the eyes of ASR, you can see how we expects everyone around him to be the way he wants them too. I'm not shocked to hear that he hides behind wealth so that he doesn't have to use his words.

Very ironic that he is married to someone who Mirrors the exact opposite of him.