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vaishali

@Vaish24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

i so agree with yogi di abt the the missing cloth... 😎

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tish18

@tish18

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Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: kriyansh24
i so agree with yogi di abt the the missing cloth... 😎

hahahaha... i dont know from whr all her brain works in all this.

ek ek line ko she scrutinizes and comes up with such weird stuff makes me roll on the floor.

😆

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vaishali

@Vaish24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#113

yhai toh hum gande dimag ka jalva... 😎

she scrutinizes her way ... i scrutinize my way...

the asaan way of breaking up with fiance: go like grey's did... make her find the cloth in rey's cupboard... easy and clean break up...

vaise where is he gonna keep the cloth... in that waterproof cupboard of his?????

vahan pe toh termites bhi nhi aate honge nah??? matlab ekdum high security cupboard lagta hai... 😉

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tish18

@tish18

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Posted: 12 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: kriyansh24
yhai toh hum gande dimag ka jalva... 😎

she scrutinizes her way ... i scrutinize my way...

the asaan way of breaking up with fiance: go like grey's did... make her find the cloth in rey's cupboard... easy and clean break up...

vaise where is he gonna keep the cloth... in that waterproof cupboard of his?????

vahan pe toh termites bhi nhi aate honge nah??? matlab ekdum high security cupboard lagta hai... 😉

😆

haan haan... itne tension ke moment main i shud decide whr he wud hide her lingerie.

*roll eyes*

yahi baaki rehe gaya hai likhne ko.

next u'll wud want me to write abt their toilet activities.

she dint use the washroom before walking out of the room... r'nt u worried abt dat?

😛

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vaishali

@Vaish24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#115

now u remind me...

she didn't actually brush... both of them didn't...

so is it prelude for another bathroom incident... *nudging shoulder*

now since we talking abt it only.. since it was ur off... what time did u take the bath??? i am curious... 😃

ur reply: u r curious abt all the weird things...

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vaishali

@Vaish24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#116

so here i am with the comment...

and with my monkus...

so first of all...

i loved the update... not just coz it was KR heatingly served but of the literal quality... by far the best usage of words u ever done...

iske liye u get pappi from chutku

and from me taaliyan:

so... the breaking news of the day...

i enjoyed the aftermath more than the scene... i mean it was so fun to read... and finally the Rey i like... i mean fun and lil bit stupid not the jerk... so kudos for that

so the memory of the evening is etched like the patthar ki lakeer for both of them... nice... at least now the stry progresses... and rey will approach more discreetly...

isse kehte hain jaagti aakhon se sapna dekhna...

okay so i have to say this: he bit the pillow... looks like the breaking dawn effect... the vampire influence

so coming to the scene... i mean thats KR... i just loved it... especially how u described everything... the arousal, the heat just everything ... a treat to read ...

then when they realize what were they upto... and how u brought abt their reaction... just perfect...

like how they jump apart... how rey stares and how kria chides but can't help herself... then the naughty rey... u know crooked smiles everything... so good...

rey getting green... thats karma sorts... i mean earlier it was she who was uncomfortable... seeing her so called prince charming with someone else... but now its rey who is seeing his damsel with others... thatsjust too good... go girl...

the bestest was the 2nd almost make out they had... the husky voice of rey and he enacting over it...

and then that line : again... again.. again...

just best... that was fav my part...

looks like santa came early for me...

ab santa se request get me the gift fb too...

all in all awesome and a mind blowing update...

waitng for next part...

Edited by kriyansh24 - 12 years ago

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Ameena

@Roxxy47

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Posted: 12 years ago

#117

FINALLY the much awaited part is here 😃...

Me being 16 read the 'Goodie' part , plomish 😳...

Firstly i want to tell u how 'Fantastically' u describe each n every scene...

Alright the 'Vanilla-Lavender' haunted Rey and was the cause of his sleepless nights , that is so interesting...

And after '10 years' he got to feel that scent again , how is he supposed to let that 'Someone' or 'His Angle' go 😉...

Their romance going on , which was happening in a bit unconscious state but still it was 'Romance' ☺️...

Rey ne toh usse 'Conscious' state mein bhi nahi chora , was busy taking his Sweet revenge 😳...

Which was unfortunately broken by Shivam 🤔...

Ahan Rey possessive hoing , great going 😉...

N idhar Rey ko jalaing keliye Kria behaving 'Extra-Sweet' with Shiv...

Ah Kria ek bhi chance nahi chor rahi Rey ko 'Unintentionally' jealous karne keliye ...

Really 'Fabulous' part 😃...

Me toh in love with this work of yours ❤️...

Ahem ahem , how can i forget 😆...

Will be waiting to know Swaron's morning...

Continue soon...

N thanks for the pm 😊...

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GoldenLuna

@GoldenLuna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#118

congo for new thread...

awesome update...

loved it...

thnx for pm...

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

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Posted: 12 years ago

#119

congrats for the new thread...

n the update was too good...

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#120

Tishu di this was a fabulous update..
Me Loving it more chappy by chappy..
And the parts were fabulous..

It was a romantic update..
I seriously read both the posts and felt both equally blissful..
Finally he found the girl is Kria and she felt strange that he remembered something so past..
Whats fishy with Shivam...
Why does Rey want her to be away from Shivam..
Is he jealous ya phir Shivam ka character..But you told ki Shivam is a positive character here..me confuse...
Thanks for the pm...

Aww you are too much caring about the kiddos aint you??
Thats really swet opf you dii..
Hats off..