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Posted: 11 years ago

Beautiful update.

Awesome

Geet confused by her feelings. Don't know kya kare. Maan calling her. She is happy but their Talk didn't go well. Geet accusing Maan n he has nothing to say.

Knew abt Geet working place. Geet jealous n angry seeing Maan so Close to a girl. Maan coming their kisi bhi bahane se to see Geet. It soothes his heart.

Both of them are seeing each other from far but none taking a step.

Continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
they cant stay away from each other...
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Posted: 11 years ago

PART 25

Maan to bass saath baithane ko laaya hai

Ladki laaya to ladki aise side baith gai facing Geet aur Maan ki chair not facing Geet thi

Then Maan asks the girl to dance and then wapas aate time baith gaya jahan use baithna hai

Geet ne wahan stage pe keh dia ki, main bajaungi par spotlight mujhpe naa ho, jo koi dancers ho unpe ho. I am uncomfortable with people looking at me

Maan khada hi ho gaya ki kya natak hai, nahi dikhegi to wo kyon baitha hai wahan par

Geet ke upar se light off ho jaati

Maan ne cheque mangwa liya, pay kya aur katt liya

Nahi aya agle din bhi

Ek baar ko laga bass spotlight nahi hai par Geet to hai, par phir laga ki dikh kahan rahi hai, baat to waise hi nahi hoti

Do din ki absence ke bsad Maan fir wahin, iss baar office wear mein 2 aur logon ke saath

Aaj bhi Geet nahi dikhi... to Maan ne socha ki complain kar di jaye ki bohot andhera andhera lagta hai...

Aur bhale hi Geet ko spotlight pasand na ho..lekin baki sab musicians ko thoda bohot to dikhna pasand hai

To fir jal gai light, is baar focus wali nahi hai lekin light hai

*****

Aaj Maan ka birthday hai

Uski party to ghar par thi.

He came to the party...bada crowd...sab se baat ki...sab se haath milyaa...par man nahi laga

Around 10 jab sab kha kar drinks le rahe the

He slipped out

Bhaagkar jaane ki bhi jagah ek

Maan gaya, aaj akela pehli baar

Jaakar baitha jahan se Geet sabse saaf dikhe

Generally he didn't order alcohol, par aaj kar hi liya

Waiter scotch lekar aya hi tha, ki waiter ne manager ko kaha ki Mr Khurana aaye hai..

Ab Mr Khurana to thehre khaas patron, to manager ne kaha ki aaj bday hai sir ka, kuch to karna chahiye...to socha ki Maan ke liye b'day song hi bajwa diya jaye

To kaha ki b'day song play kar do orchestra se..

Sabne poocha ki bday kiska announce karna hai

Manager ne kaha ki announcement chodo... Maan waise hi bhadkila sa tha pata nahi kis baat par bigad jaye...bass bataya ki ek Mr Grewal hai. He prefers anonymity, unke liye play kar do, no announcements

Maan wahan baitha drink sip kar raha tha dekh raha tha ki ki sbaat ka commotion chal raha hai orchestra mein

Geet ki maathe pe shikan.

She is tip toeing among the orchestra to listen to her cue

Maan bhi surprised b'day tune sunkar...par kisi ne uska naam announce nahi kiya bas kaha ki for a special guest

Ussne dekha Geet ko.. does she know it's his b'day...wondering ki agar pata hai to would she come and wish him

Maan to Geet ko hi dekh raha hai

Aaj to koi saath bhi nahi hai ki Maan discreetly.. chup chupkar dekhe; sharam waise hi Maan ko kam ati hai

Geet ne as usual bohot koshish ki nazre churane ki pure gaane mein

Akhir Geet ne dekh hi liya nazre uthake

Geet soch rahi thi kya karun, wish karu nahi karu, karu nahi karu...should I acknowledge him or not? Baat karun ki naa?

Geet ne socha wo bhi to baat nahi karta, he pretends as if she is a stranger, har baar wo kyun baat kare

Gaana bajan khatam hua

Maan to wahin dekh raha tha

Waiter aya ek mini sa complimentary cake le kar jispar 1 candle jal rai thi

Logon ko bhi laga aas pas ke ki kaisa aadmi hai, looks rich, handsome too. Akela baitha hai b'day hai, koi share karne ko nahi hai

Orchestra wale bhi yai baat kar rahe hai ki kya life hai sab kuch hai, har roz kisi ladki ke saath dikh jata hai; but jab it matters to koi nahi hai

Inn aamir logon ka yahi hai...aish to hai.. par content nahi hai

Geet ke peeche ye baat ho rahi hai aur uski ki ankhein Maan par hain

Log keh rahe hain ki; koi nahi tikta inn logon ke saath, adhe log inko use karte hai aur chod dete hai baaki duniya ko ye use karke dushman bana lete hai, batao kya fayda itne paison ka jo akela pii raha hai...isse achha to humara hi hai... chotti naukri hai par ghar to hai wapas jaane ko

Maan wahan sab baaton se anjaan sees that neither could she look away from him. Slowly he raises his glass as a salute to her. A smirk on his face to say cheers and gulps the whole thing down in one go

She frowns.

He first time he acknowledged her back

Geet ne pir 2-3 kadam badaye..phir ruk gayi

Maane bhi glass neeche rakh diya...his eyes opening a bit more... his body tense when she took those 3 steps

She is still staring at him with a frown

Maan bhi khada hua phir...pii to li hi thi...to socha ki kya to hell with it after all b'day hai, kuch to happy deserve kar sakta hai wo, wo hi uth kar chala gya Geet ke paas

She frowns doubly and steps back

G-Kya hai?

She snaps

He gives he an absent smile...his lips can't follow his brain to remain unsmiling

M- Dance with me?

She frowns

G-Go home

M-It's too crowded there... the whole party you know...

He says shrugging putting his hands into his pocket taking a relaxed stance. Inwards every muscle was locked in anticipation. Aesa laga jaise bade dino baat khul ke saas li ho. Thoda adrenaline ka rush hua ho...haath pairon mein thodi jaan se aayi ho.. feeling alive

Geet folds her arms

M-Dance?

She narrows her eyes; about turn march

He felt sucker punched in the gut, head bowed he too turned around and got out. And once again Maan Singh Khurana made a fool of himself this time in public too; congratulations...he think to himself

Geet looks over her shoulders to look at him

He walked out barely noticing the stares the manager trying to signal the waiter to give him the cheque..and the fact tht he left his dinner jacket on the table

Geet log bhi cab mein nikal rahe the ghar jaane ko, aur udhar Maan apni gaadi mein.

Phir se dono ki nazre mili

Maan to steering par sarr rakhe aankh band karke baitha tha

He was a bit drunk...and he didn't want to go home...he dint want to drive around...he was just sitting there..philosophing about life and love

Ek soft sa haath touch hua arm pe

He jerked back ki kaun hai

Geet saamne khadi hai

M-G..Gee...Geet...

He says.. word have some difficult forming..

She looks at him

He doesn't even know if she is real.. kya pata itna miss kar-karke maybe he is hallucinating

G-emm..are you ok?

He shakes his head in no

She looks at him questioningly and her eyes ooze that familiar care and concern

He looks at her

M- I haven't been fine for a very long time

She frowns

He closes his eyes briefly and then opens them again hoping that if she is an illusion she would be gone before he goes completely mad and if she is not.. he better not blurt his heart out

G-Maan?

M-Hm?

Maan ne gate khola and he comes out of the car, closing the door behind him

Geet blinks her big eyes

He raise his hand to touch her hands and takes her hand in his slowly intertwining their fingers.

He looks down at their hands. He likes her hands, long slender, elegant

She frowns...

G-God! You are drunk

M-A little. Not enough to not know what I am doing..

G-You are!

M- You know you have the most beautiful hands ever

G-What were you thinking ...of driving/?huh?

She looks at their hands

M- I always wondered if it's because you play violin or is it a prerequisite to play violin

G-Happy birthday. Get a cab and go home

M-I don't want to go home and thanks; and congratulations for the job

G-Don't wanna go home? Have you lost it? Go home

M-Have I ever told you; you play like an angel? I never thought I'd like hearing violin... but I like it...I like hearing you play it...serene and melancholy at once. How do you do that?

Geet ko laga..Maan to baat karta rahega wo late ho jayegi

G-Bye

Mudd gai

M-Don't go..

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Posted: 11 years ago
Aww too cute
Bechara Maan 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
dono k dono pagal hai...

lovely update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely updaten fr d pm also...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

Edited by love2_soma - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved both parts !! maan modern devdas banahua hai !! he cannot leave her ...he cannot go to her !! middle rastha chunlia !! doosere ladki ke saath jaake apne pyar ko dekho...!! chalo , birthday tho happy hogai in the last...geet came to him...worried for him...ab yeh narazgi khatam hoo...!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
ye ho kya raha hai...

in dono ka kuch nahi ho sakta...uff...n geet ko kahan jane me late ho raha hai..ghar??
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Posted: 11 years ago
Geet still not giving Maan any importance. Maan feeling very lonely. Geet kuch samajh nahi paa rahi.

Geet closed all option for him. He used to just see her that also she refused.
Maan bday. Want to see Geet. Kaise bhi kar ke light on karwaya.
Everyone taunting him. Doesn't Geet feel bad. I thought she will come near him after listening to everyone.

Maan at last said don't go. Wat will be Geet reaction
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Posted: 11 years ago

PART 26

Geet ko laga..Maan to baat karta rahega wo late ho jayegi

G-Bye

Mudd gai

M-Don't go..

He didn't let go of her hand

M- Just for today.. don't go yet

Geet looks at him

M-I've stopped bothering you, like you wanted..but ..just...stay for a bit more

G-Stay? Why? Wasn't I useless?

M-Of everything you listen and believe in that...

He pulls her close veryyy slowly ki usko pata bhi na chale

M- I came at a time

He rests hi forehead against her

She almost feels she is melting

G-Don't...

She murmurs inaudibly

M- I'll try

He murmurs back and slowly pulling her into a hug

She closes he eyes exhaling a breath she didn't knew she was holding

Once in her arms Maan hold on a tightly as he dares to; tight enough to just not hurt her but tight enough that no one can take her away, even she herself cant

She gives in into his arms finding her solace and peace again

He slowly whispers her name

G-Maan

She whispers back

M-Why can't you like me? Just me? Why can't you love!

He whispers fiercely

She moves away. Looks at him

G-What did you just said?

He lets go of her and looks away

M- Nothing.. forget about it.. you have made quite clear many time what you... never mind

She is looking at him but he is not looking at her

Geet dekhe hi jaa rahi hai, ankhein nahi headlight h..badi badi

He is looking away, hand safely back inside his pocket so that they don't do anything more impulsive on their own

M-Look I just..I don't know why I said that.. I mean I can't make you feel.. you are...you go ahead and be happy with that guy..

G-Guy? Which guy?

M-Shankar

Maan says his name with unhidden hatred

G-What do you mean by that? Tum Shankar ko kaise jaante ho?

M-You mentioned him when you were leaving my office.. I .. I saw u two together too so I know that..that you two are together. I won't try and come in between

G-You are accusing me of...

She rolls her eyes

G-And what about your girlfriend and the numerous other gals; the fact that you used me?

M-I don't have a girlfriend... a date doesn't make a girlfriend and I.. I didn't mean to use you for whatever you think I did use you for...

G-For?

M- I don't want to fight...shit! I knew it was bad idea coming here alone. I did everything I shouldn't have done

G-I want an answer. You can't just turn around like this after using me

M-Using you???..What the heck are you accusing me of ? Keeping at it like a broken record, what did I use you for? Huh? What? I gave you everything; every damn thing! and you are standing here all self righteous telling if used you!!!

G-There's something called using emotionally. But you need to have emotions to actually know what emotions are

M-So easy to say that, isn't it? What about you? So you have any emotions?

G-That's not even a question

M-You don't even have decency! What were you doing huh? Playing around with that...that... and keeping me right here nicely wrapped around your little finger

G-Playing around???? Me????

M-Well excuse me for being able to unwrap myself and coming out mentally stable

G-You don't know what you are saying

M- Don't I? Tell me what were you doing hanging out with that sorry excuse of a man, accepting flowers while you were supposed to be so sick that you can't even call me and tell me how high your fever is or when you were supposed to be quarantined? What were you doing smelling the roses? Huh!? Right; idiot I am to still want you...

She looks at him with disbelieve

M-But this is just a stupid need .. you don't have to worry about me bothering you again

G-M...mai...maine jaan bujke tumhe nahi bataya...that I have recovered

M- You think I still didn't get that? What do you care if I spend a few weeks more in worry. This is just sick!

He turns around to take out his wallet

M- I am going to take that taxi. Can't say it was a pleasure

Geet is looking down

G-I wanted to stop myself...stop myself...stop myself from...

M- Congratulations, you achieved your goal

She looks at him in disbelieve

Maan stops a taxi

G-You are so cold...I thought I liked you and...you are so cold. I sometimes pity myself for falling for an animal like you

M- Cold? You pity yourself? I haven't given you anything to pity yourself. Animal? Do you know how easily you insult me without reasons. But since you hate me anyways and I have no intention of seeing you again maybe I should give you reasons to say all that again

Maan grabs her by her waist and pulls her close lowering his lips to her before she could even gasp in protest; other hand tangling in her hair to get her exactly where he wants her. It was a methodic kiss meant to seduce not cruel and crushing but soft and inciting

Pehle to Geet ne thoda resist kiya, par kab tak karti. She had to give in and slowly she also gave back the favor

Maan knew the moment she stopped resisting and he deepened the kiss pulling her closer, letting go of the punishing hold on her hair, slowly rubbing her neck kissing her passionately, pouring everything he felt in that single kiss

Geet is hanging onto him, her feet just slightly touching the ground

He holds her securely against him afraid to let even air between them let it created big distance between them again. He doesn't want to ever let go. If only he could just freeze time like this with her in his arms and both in world of bliss

Tabhi phone baja Geet ka

Maan growls mentally willing ordering begging the disturbance to stop before the trance is broken the moment is lost

Lekin phone naa band hua Geet ka , baje jaa raha hai

Geet finally picks it up

G-Ma...emm...haan aa rahi hoon...haan...aa rahi hoon hu...don't worry

Maan willed his hands to let go of Geet...but they wouldn't move from her waist

He doesn't want her to go more than ever now

Maan closes his lips around her other ear slowly nibbling and kissing down to her shoulder blowing hot air on his wet kisses

G-ehhh..umm...umm..haan maa...haan..nikal rahi hoon...umm...ehhh...ah..late ho gaya...haan...umm

He turns her around so he can lean her back on his car side exposing her delicate neck

He slowly kisses his way across her neck to capture her hand and brings her finger to his mouth

If this is his last meal, he is tasting everything he can

He kisses her elbow her wrist, he palm, moving to her finger until he suck the tip of one and nibbles at it delicately considering how long the he had been restraining himself

Geet jaldi se phone rakhti ai\

G-MAAN !

She snaps

He doesn't listen

He takes her other hand free of mobile now and starts kissing nibbling at it too

G-Maaan

She pushes him, her heart beat and breathing has shooted up

Maan mutters her name in reply pulling her hands down behind her back locking her in his embrace cupping her cheek he kisses her chin, her lower lip

Chod hi nahi raha na sunn raha hai, slowly he moves back to kisses on her lips another deep passionate kiss

Maan ka phone bajaa, ghar wale pooch rahe hai ki kaha ho. Maan ne phone utha kar side kar diya

But Maan realizes at that moment that she isn't responding, so he stops.

He lets go of her and steps bacck

G-PAGAL HO GAYE HO KYA ?????????????

She is panting'

G-JANGLIII JANWAR !

M- Sorry

He turns around and walks away

She turns him back

G-Sorry???????????????? Sorrryyy. Ek sorryyy?????????? You are an animal driven by lust

M-If I were, I wouldn't have stopped. If I were that, I would have done this long ago

G-What?????

M-What part you don't understand?

G-Ki tum itne besharam kaise ho sakte ho?

He takes a long breath and releases it slowly

M-Besharam...I don't know about that

She narrows her eyes

M-But then yeah maybe by your standard... kya farak padta hai. It was a good bye kiss. I won't be coming here again and you won't have to face a lecher like me again either; that should make you happy

Maan phir mud jataa hai and waits for taxi. He clenches his fingers in a fist but doesn't reply. He doesn't know what he is going to do. Keh to diya ki nahi ayega, lekin ky akarega. Pehle to raha nahi jata tha. Ab after saying half the things to her, kissing her, holding her; it was an effort to even not look at her

G-It's..it's so..easy for you ..naa

Her eyes are brimming with tears

G-and I..thought...I thought...I...i thought...it was love...but you are not even worth liking !!!!!!!

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome Update..
Yeh misunderstanding khatam hone ke bajaye badti hi ja rahi hai..
Lovely Maaneet moments..
Cont. Soon...

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