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Posted: 12 years ago
ok so i think,aarav is dead..but not confirmed.so khushi is not believing.she is still calling him in his number on her wedding day.so,may be,the wait is of khushi for aarav to return...😳
Edited by momai - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
aarav dead?waiting for the next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice.its really shocking to know that aarav is dead.its really interesting
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Posted: 12 years ago


Part 4:

Khushi: Arnav.. Just leave my hand.. Its paining.. Oucchh!!! Where are you taking me?

He didnt answer.. That was his speciality.. He speaks only when the other person deserves hearing his words.. Otherwise his action is enough for understanding his anger..

He dragged her till the Drawing room and then made her stand before the wall.. He left her hand and clutched her shoulders and pulled her towards him..

Arnav: Turn your Left and see Khushi.. The one whom you expect to come and touch you in that sense is DEAD.. We all have accepted this Fact and so should you..

The word DEAD pricked her heart and tears of misery started flowing out of her eyes.. She wasnt able to digest the fact that Rubble is no more in the world.. For her, he still existed.. For her he was still Alive.. She looked in her husbands eyes which were raging out fire to her..His hold was tight and she was been crushed into his arms like she was a Soft toy.. She continued crying and turned to her left to see the Photo of Rubble on the Wall with a Flower Necklace on it.. 3 months have passed forthat Accident. But she could still feel he was Alive.. And Near her.. Once again her husband clutched her shoulders tight and made her look at his face..

Arnav: You took 1 month to recover from that Accident Khushi.. That accident has taken his life.. Accept what has happened and follow the decision that you took of marrying me.. This is the last time I am warning you .. Dont you ever get Rubble between us anytime.. Because you are no longer his Tin-Tin.. You are Mine.. Arnav Singh Raizada's Legally Wedded Wife now..

Saying that he left her there at the Drawing room and walked outside the house leaving her alone.. Khushi sat on the Couch closing her face from her hands crying bitterly for once again been reminded of the fact that Rubble was no more Alive in this world..

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Arnav Singh Raizada could never control his anger.. Be it on anybody. He was never bothered of the person before him. And today what his wife told him on their Suhaagraat was just hiting his brain with all the negative thoughts.. Her one sentence " I can never let anyone else touch me other than him Arnav.. Please.. " made all the nerves of his body to circulate Blood with full speed towards the evil side of his brain poking him to think only one thing.. "She was been touched by Rubble.. She was been marked by Rubble .. She had submitted to Rubble completely .. Thats the reason she would never like anyone else than Rubble himself to touch her.."

He pulled the Brakes at a lonely lane and then got down from the Car.. How he wished all this never happened.. How he wished he had never met her in Sydney.. How he wished he had never fallen for her at his first meet.. How he wished her had never shown that kind of liking for her in that Dance Party.

FLASHBACK STARTS

Aarav: Bhai Please.. Only you can do this.. I have promised her I would come .. She would kill me if I dont..
Arnav: Have you gone Nuts Rubble? She is your friend and she is waiting for you to come.. Not me.. Understood?
Rubble: Exactly. Thats what I am trying to make you understand.. Look.. We look alike and if we cannot help each other in this situation then when would we Bhai? Please..
Arnav: You know me Rubble.. I cant flirt with any girls..
Rubble: Yeah.. You can spend nights with them but you cant Flirt.. I know that.. But then who is asking you to flirt.. Its just one damm dance.. She needs a Dance Partner thats it.. She called me and I cannot deny her.. Please.. Afterall you know I have proposed her and she still hasnt given me a YES for it.. If I dont go, that YES would never come from her.. I know her.. Please Bhai.. For me!!! Once..!!
Arnav (Still hesitated a bit): Fine.. I will.. But then What if she comes to know I am not Rubble..
Rubble: Well.. I have never told her the small pimple difference That we have on our face that differentiates us.. Upon that she doesnt even know MY twin brother is here in Sydney for some work. So she would never guess this..
Arnav: Okay.. Tell me the place.. I will handle this..
Rubble: (Hugged Arnav): Thanks Bhai.. I Owe you for this One Dance.. Thanks so much..
Arnav:(Pulling back from the Hug): Its Ok Rubble.. But just tell me one thing.. What other important work you have today that you cannot go to meet her?

Rubble started stammering now..

Rubble: Umm.. Wohh!! I mean .. I .. Bhai just forget it.. I will tell you some other time..You are getting late for the dance bhai..!! (He said smiling and Arnav just walked from there..) Bhai Wait.. One minute..

Arnav stopped and turned behind..
Rubble: There is a Dress code.. White.. But I am sure you dont have time to buy.. I already have bought it.. So lemme just give you that..
Arnav noded and then walked with Rubble in his room..

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Dance Party...

Khushi was waiting for Rubble to come.. In the past few months he had become her best friend. She had no good friend here in Sydney except him.. She could rely on him easily.. Infact he had proposed her for marriage and she said she needed time to know him more.. And he had accepted that from her.. All of a sudden she saw a Car getting parked and her Rubble getting down from it in White.. He looked different today. Infact he looked more matured and handsome today than ever.. His hair were never so tidy .. Infact it looked as if he has put on some weight too.. She was seeing him after a week. Doesnt mean she can so easily guess if he has put on some weight or not.. But that muscles and his perfect V Shaped Body had never gave her goosebumps before like tonight.. She just blinked her eyes once again to confirm if he was truely Rubble and Yes he was..

Arnav on the other hand was never so nervous as he was today.. Since the time he had seen Rubble's friend's picture, he was totally behaving strange.. He wasnt able to drive properly as he could see only her Face before his eyes .. Why was this happening? He tried to clear off these thoughts after getting down and started searching for this girl named "KHUSHI" and thats when he saw her watching him from a distance.. All the same thoughts again started pinching his body.. She was more beautiful in person than in the Photo. Her Blue Choli and White Lehnga were complimenting so much to her Delicate slim figure.. Arnav loved girls having Long hair and she was also one of them now.. Their eyes met and they started walking towards each other.. He was lost..



He was for the first time getting magnetically pulled to some Girl like this.



They were just one feet away from each other and still looking in each others eyes when a girl from the crowd came and breaked their First Eye Lock..

Girl: Rubble .. Khushi.. What is wrong with you guys.. The dance has started and you both still here? COme on..!!!

The girl dragged Arnav and Khushi to the dance Floor where already all the couples were dancing with full passion..The chilling night was adding more spice to the Desires of the couples today.. The girl left and Arnav and Khsuhi kept on looking at each other when finally Khsuhi broke the silence..

Khushi: Rubble.. You look ...(Before she could complete the sentence Arnav slid his hand on her bare waist and pulled her towards him surprising her .. Her front body was totally glued to his chest and she looked in his eyes again asking a kind of explanation to what he just did..)



Arnav: You look Beautiful... Khushi..

Khushi started breathing heavily feeling the Hotness in his Tone.. Rubble never sounded so husky anytime before as today.. May be she was just lost seeing his personality today..

Khushi: Since when did you start calling me Khushi, Rubble? What happened to Tin - Tin? (She said passing a Sweet smile..)
Arnav then realized that she was been nick named as Tin Tin by his twin brother..
Arnav: Let me call you Khushi tonight.. Just khushi.. (He said in a damm possessive voice and she gulped seeing this side of Rubble.. Something was surely wrong with him.. She smiled and they started dancing slowly seeing each other)

Arnav wasnt even blinking his eyes in the fear of missing her glance for even a fraction of second.. He was very very attracted to this friend of his Twin Brother.. She was so different than what he had thought.. Initially when Rubble had told him about her, he always visualized her to be a Modern flirt kind of girl but she was so opposite.. He could easily guess though she was rich, she was simple and damm innocent..

His fingers were drawing circles on her lower back which was for the first time giving her so many new sensations inside her stomach. She never felt this for him till now then why today? Was today the day when she had to realise that Yes she loved him and wanted to spend her whole life with him? May be yes.. Thats the reason she was so deeply getting attracted to him today.. May be her Devi Maiyaa was pointing her today that she should agree to his proposal.. He turned her while dancing to make her back hit his chest..



He was so damm turned On by her touch.. She closed her eyes feeling his fingers entwined with hers on her belly.. She turned sideways on her right shoulder where he almost had leaned his face wishing to Kiss her cheeks..



She closed her eyes and when he she felt his lips almost touching her cheeks , she turned to face him once again.. She could see some known desires in his eyes which she failed to notice anytime till now.. She touched his cheeks and kept looking at his face..

He had almost forgot what he was here for.. He was here only to dance nothing more than that..His twin brother Rubble was interested in this girl, he cannot lay his eyes on her, never.. He left her and turned the other side.. The music was still On and every couple was dancing.. She felt bad when he left her .. She thought her still denying to accept his proposal was making him change his mood suddenly.. She decided.. She wanted to be with him forever.. She moved and hugged him from behind and uttered those 3 magical words..



" I LOVE YOU."

Arnav was totally shocked hearing this and feeling her hugging him from behind.. No girl he slept with till now ever was able to turn him On in this way as she did.. And upon that She just said "I LOVE YOU".. ???? He turned back to face.. He could see her eyes and they were truely pouring out LOVE.. He cupped her face.



He was about to Kiss her when She closed her eyes and uttered the same thing again..

"I LOVE YOU RUBBLE.. I LOVE YOU"

He froze there.. One inch close to her Lips.. He couldnt think anything further now.. She was not HIS.. She was his Brother's .. He can never cheat His Brother .. He left her and walked out from the party making sure he doesnt even see her once back..

FLASHBACK ENDS

Precap for Part 5 – Page 84


Edited by Madhu123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Katelyn


I feel the same way too! Still hard to deal with a lost of a loved one! 😭 Thinking about it everyday!
Yeah, feeling so horrible for Khushi! 😭



Wat is this madhu u made all senti 😕 Ok ok it's not u that comment from meena made me more filmy. 😊 No more sentiments just enjoy the story 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG I am firssst [:D/]

OMG Wat an update man. My heart is Pounding so fast. I need some time to comment coz I am on my phone, need to write more but hate this touch screen. So let me login my laptop. U always make us wait for ur post now u need to wait 😛


I am back. I still cant believe that i am first and this is the first time i reserved this place (been in first page before )

so let me celebrate that first Ohh la la...

Ok now let us come to the point. That was an awesome update dear. very very very beautiful i really dont know wat to say the flashback was very intense and ... and wat???? OMG yeah he is already possessive and... the way u narrated the entire scene made me ... ur very descriptive narration helped us to visualize everything and also feel their emotions. brilliant writing 👏. I just loved it.

So she had actually fallen for our arnav ☺️

so the conclusion is its an amazing amazing amaaazzziiinggg piece. Thats it dear.




Edited by shalinii173 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update aarav is dead wow shocker n really loved the flashback cant wait to read more loved the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG! What an update.
For her at that one dance she said I love you to Arnav not aarav.
Well of course Arnav was gonna fall for her when he saw her.
Wonder if he is gonna tell her he was at that party not aarav.
But there is a question in my mind.
What was so important that aarav didn't attend the party?
Daal mein kuch kaala hai.
Edited by rashika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome.so arnav had fallen for her in his first meet.
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG what a flashback! Lovely update :) So in a way Khushi fell for Arnav at the party!
Looking forward to the next update :)

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