~MeLiOrAtIng ThE bRoKeN tRuSt~ ch 11 updtd Pg 84... 20.8.15 - Page 28

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Posted: 12 years ago
read all the parts in one gothey r grt
pm me the updates too
i noe late hu par fir bhi:-P
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Posted: 12 years ago
read al d parts today...
really a diff stry...
plz update soon n plz pm me nxt tym...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Update hurry all are waiting come on continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
read all the parts just now...superb ff!
poor Taani she will suffer for no fault of hers
hope Rey realises his mistake soon
waiting for the next update...continue soon
i have sent a buddy request, plz accept it and pm me the updates 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
plz update sooon and pm me plz plz plz
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for hell of god
can u plzz update
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Posted: 12 years ago

Helloo!!😊

I Know it had been so so so long.. So Sorry for the long wait.. 🤢 I know some of you were eagerly waiting for the update.. Would try and update it on regular basis.. and if I cn't then again I am really sorry..😆

Vaise the plot is bit clear for me.. I mean I would surely love to update this ff regularly as it is also close to my heart.. I personally love this one.. And there's a note in the end!!😉

Plzz do comment and like the update guyzz.. Whether you criticize it or appreciate it.. I really don't mind but plzz do comment.. As I really feel great after reading your comments..😊

And do tell me wherever you feel something is missing.. It would improve me as a writer.. Would really appreciate it if you all do..😃

So no more bak bak.. Here's the nxt part..May be you wouldn't find it that great.. but this chapter was necessary to show how would their relationship gonna build up and how much time they would need to get used to each other..

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Note Related To Chapter: This may tarnish Rey's image from what you have in mind.. So read it at your own risk..
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CHAPTER 7
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"I want you'" He said suddenly while cupping her face with a hand.. and tilting it back up so her eyes were looking right into his.. She involuntarily leaned into his hand. Hazel eyes met brown and she sucked in her breath, feeling her heart quiver.

His gaze then dropped to her lips. She closed her eyes, waiting for his lips to cover hers.. Waiting for the kiss to come. She could feel his breathe pluming into her face, his hair touching the top of her forehead and tickling it.. Excitement was building in her chest and heart..

"'Not."

Her eyes jerked open when she heared a muffle chuckle and with a Quick wink he let go of her and stepped back, laughing and smirking.. She was bewildered on seeing him chuckling..

"Rey... Aap.." Taani spoke in her shuttering voice..

"Oh! Come on Taani.. Kya tumhe sach mei laga ki mei.. "He spoke between his laughs "You are so dumb Taani.. How can you even think for a second ki mei.." He again started laughing..

She was to shocked to say anything.. She stood there.. Tears pricked in her eyes.. She immediately wiped them..

"Thank God ki Kriya di aap ko chod kar chali gaayi.. You really don't deserve her.." His laughter immediately ceased and his eyes held the look of anger , hurt and vengeance..

As soon as these words came out of her mouth she immediately regretted it.. She hadn't meant to spoke such harsh words.. She knew how much affected he was due to all this drama.. She knew how much he loved her.. She knew how much he wanted to be with her.. But what she doesn't know was why his every action was affecting her to this great extent..

"Rey.. I am Sorry.. wo mei.." Her words remained in her mouth when he suddenly pushed her into the wall And then trapped her between wall and himself.

"Rey.. Please.." she pushed him due to which he hold her wrist so tightly that it was hurting her.. She desperately tried to pull away, tears running down on her already stained cheeks. "Let me go!" She screamed. "Please Rey.. You are hurting me..!" She yanked her arms down but he kept a steady hold on her wrists no matter how hard she tried to get away.. His eyes bored into hers.. Gazing her intently and angrily..

Suddenly the room seems so dark and cold.. All the candles that had illuminated the room before were now slowly dimming were increasing the terrifying atmosphere of the room...And the cold chill from the window which was entering into the room added the glooming feeling inside the room.. She felt as if it was all a nightmare.. Her worst nightmare from which she badly wanted to get out.. but she knew it was real and it terrified her.

Her wrists ached due to the tight hold and her head was pounding.. She was feeling too weak and dizzy to even stand up properly..Her eyelids started getting heavy.. And she would have fallen down if he was not supporting her..

"And what about you..??"She at once looked at him on hearing him.." You surely deserve that they abandon you.. Don't you??" He spoke in his deep, echoing and dangerous voice.

"No.. they have not abandon me.."Taani said in equally dangerous voice.. She knew she was wrong.. She shouldn't have said that so she was ready to apologize for it.. But then he had to insult her family.. How can he. When he knew how much they love her.And how much she cares for them.. Do they really??

'No Taani.. he is just confusing you.. Don't listen to him.' her inner voice said to her.. and she again mask her uneasiness with the look of anger..

But Rey was able to notice her uneasiness.. smirked and spoke.."Sure.. then why did they agreed on marrying you with me..? "

"Because.. You father told them so.." Taani answered but with some lack of confidence..

"So the just agreed.. When you clearly told them that you don't want to marry me.. When they clearly know that I loved someone else and not you.. When they clearly know that I won't be able to keep you happy... " Rey knew he was able to break her confidence.. So he again started manipulating her..

"Because.. Because.. " Taani doesn't know what and how to answer.. She knew they did it to save their reputation.. To save themselves from further embarrassment..

"Oh.. No answer.. Then let me tell you.. They married you because they wanted to get rid of you.. Because they wanted you out of their life.. Because.."

"Noo.."Taani pushed him.. Due to the sudden attack he stumble back a little and since he was holding her she too was pushed into him.. but it didn't stopped her and she kept on hitting him with her tiny hands.. "You are lying.. They d.. Didn't abandon me. No.. You are lying.."She was frantically hitting him and tears were continuously flowing from her eyes..

'He is manipulating you. Don't just don't listen to him..' Her inner voice was again speaking.. But it was not able to each her ears..

Rey at once holded her wrists so that she would stop hitting him.. " Really Taani.. Tum muje believe karva rahi ho ya khudko.."Shock was evident on her face.. She looked at him.. Rey too was surprised on seeing her like this.. That's when he noticed her eyes were red from crying.. He knew she was crying from long time..But he was not able to see those red eyes before due to his anger and frustration.. But then how could he now.. He was still angry on her.. Then why wasn't he able to say anything to her now.. After seeing her crying so desperately He knew her family was her weakest point.. She cares a lot for them and they too..He immediately feel guilt wash over him and for some strange reason he actually felt'bad.

'No.. I can't feel like this... Mei yeh hi too chahata tha.. usse hurt karna.. Fir..'

Roughly, he pushed her forward and she landed on something soft and spongy. She heard the sound of opening and closing of the door and then complete silence. She strained her eyes trying to see anything in the darkness but it was no use. "Bhai..! "she proclaimed weakly crying hysterically. " I a.. am missing you.." After a few moments it all went black.

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PRECAP:Sawron, Reyam, Taayam Sharey.. together!!

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Do like and comment..

Ignore grramatical errors!! Would correct later!!

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IMPORTANT NOTE!!
And guyzz.. An Important Announcement.. : I am really disappointed and upset guyzz.. I send PM's to nearly 60 ppl or more but I don't get half of the response for my work.. So i have decided that If I wouldn't be getting enough responses I am gonna pm the story to only those who would comment and like my post.. and not gonna update it here..
So if you are willing to read and if you really like my work please do comments and like the update.. Sorry if this hurted any of you..
Edited by Freakin_girl - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res

unres!!!

yayy!!
read it before ur pm!!!
and i m first too!!!

loved it!! the update was amazing!!
i didnt find rey's image tarnished... coz he was himself in pain n anger... and after all the hurt he gave to taani he felt bad... he felt bad at what he did...
taani's pain was heart touching and emotional...
both of them are drowned in their own hurt and pain...
ek raaz ki baat... i love aggressive rey.. though how he behaved with taani was utterly bad and i was sad😔... but phir bhi...😳
awesome update!!!
i eagerly wait for this ff... so please jaldi jaldi update karna!!
and please do pm me!! 😃😃


Edited by toshi_ta - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
finally u updated😃 woww amazing update👍🏼 lovd it👏 update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
intertesting.
rey ye kya kar raha hai..
cant see taani like this..
pls. pls. do cont. soon
pata hai taarey itni jalid friends nahi banege.. still waiting for it.

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