Ariya ff : HUM-TUM(PART 49 PG 153 OCT 5) PM LATER - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
sooo finally the cat is out of the bag...Its Arjun, Riya's secret bf

but poor Roshni, what abt her??? and why is arjun still a secret to Riya??? very curious to know why is his character cloudy? koyi undercover mission hai kya???
and wow...he is so caring and loving...love this version of Arjun!!!
update soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
I feel so scare naow...
Edited by kaveriw2008 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
wow!!! loved it... so arjun is riya's bf just hope this roshni's pyaar wont b a trouble for them...

wow arjunis romantic n caring.. loved it... btw y she doesnt no he is in etf n her brother is his boss??

update soon!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
ufff what a romantic bf...
i wish real life me bhi aise bf hote...
lovely update...
plz next part jaldi se update krna... 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
Awesome...so the mystery man is Arjun...lots of drama in d future between ariya n roshini
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
Res di I'LL edit soon awesome concept😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
sorry for the late dear,
it was awsome
riyas bf is arjun so gud
continue soon
send me pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
Part 5
Riya hugged him tightly , "You know Arjun everytime i knw u mre , my love increases for u."
Arjun kiss her forehead lovlingly. Riya looked @ her watch & jumped out on bed. "Oh shit , my god it's 5:30pm. Di will be hm @ 6:00 & if im nt thr she will be scold me bye Arjun , she climbed down frm bed & look @ herself @ mirror .
Arjun : Ohf , are u r luknig gud baba..
Riya : Oh god Arjun , agar mai chali jaaungi , to Di ko lagega ki mai kahi se neend mai uthkar aayi hue , aur log kya sochnge? Meri to reputation hi kharab ho jaayegi na. (she said while put kajal in her eyes)
Arjun : Oye madam , aur kise dekha na hai ye roop tumhe ??? Jise dekhna vo dekh chuka aur phas bhi gya .
Riya : (hit him on his chest )Shut up Arjun. (wears her sandals & open d door . She is abt to go , suddenely she turn back & come runningly towards Arjun & kiss his bth cheecks. )Bye Bye sweety...
Arjun : Sweety nahi Arjun 😡 (he murmured under his breath)
Riya : (who closed d door , open d door half ) Gud Bye my sweet Arjun .(mischivously smiles @ him & shut d door again)
Arjun : (Cn't help , bt smile) ACP Arjun Raute , tu to gya ab kaam se , ye to tujhe pura pagal karke hi chodgi. ( & ruffles his hair & slowly hit backside of his head)
Riya reaches home & hurridly open door. She remove her sandals & put thm back on stand. & goes to kitchen & drinks water. Door bell rings. Riya runnigly goes to door & open it. "Di" she happily said. Roshni comes in. Riya gives her water. Roshni drinks water & goes in her room. Riya sigh in relif.
@night Suhani & Riya watching romantic movie. Roshni reading magzing , while Rathod playing games on his mobile.
Riya : Su bhabhi , bhai ne kaise propose kiya tha?
Roshni lift her gaze & look @ Rathod who look Riya & Suhani. Bt Suhani did nt notice him bcoz she also deeply involved in film. She animadle ans Riya who dreamily watching movie.
Suhani : Sammy ne , u knw Riya i never imagine tht he did ths . I dn't knw he is so romantic. Ek to case ke duran meri multkat use hue , tumhe pta hai case solve ke baad bhi ek mahina mere peeche pada tha , har time mere ofc mai , mere ghar ke neeche aa jata , aur kuch puchu to bolta , case se yahi najdik aaya tha , socha tumse milta chalu. Vaise mai bhi kuch kam nahi thi , jaan thi ki iske dil mai kya hai. Bas uska maza le raha thi. Bt really Riya he is too cute (& pulled Rathod's cheecks)
Roshni & Riya just haapily look @ couple & silmes , Rathod just feeling embrassed.
Riya : Par bhabhi ye to bata do ki bhai ne propose kaise kiya.. ?
Suhani : Sammy ko pta tha , ki mai her Tuesday ko mandir jaati hue , vahi aa gya aur bola tumse jaruri baat karni hai , chalo mere saath , aur phir pura din hum dono ek saath the , & u dn't believe usene pura din koshish ki mujhe propose karne ki , par kar hi nahi paa rha tha , first to usne red roses diye , puchne par bola ki , aise hi , uske baad to mujhe fav , rest, mai leke gya , meri paand ka khana order kiya , uske baad to mujhe beech pe leke gaya , vaha ice-cream khilvayi , ghoda-gadi mai baith ke sair karva di. lekin phir nahi bol paaya. Aur jab ghar chodne aaya to tabhi chup-chaap tha. Mai ghar chali gyi , door close hi karne wali thi , tabhi achnak ye saab haafe hue aaye & aur apne ghutne pe baith gaye aur bole , " Suhani vo vo ... ek glass pani milega? (pani pine ke baad bole. " Viase kya tum mere ghar mai aake reh sakti ho? hmmm nahi nahi vo tum mujhse shadi karogi ? nahi mai koi zabardast nahi kar raha , bas suggestion de raha hue... arr suggestion nahi puch raha hue . dekho mai na bahut achi chai bna sakta hue , Maggi bhi bana leta hue , Sabi zi cut kar sakta hue... bas itna hi aata hai mujhe , vo kya hai baki sab Roshni kar leti hai. Vaise ans ki koi jaldi nahi hai , lekin abhi dogi to acha laega ga.. "
Roshni cn't control her smile , Whikle Riya fuming wit anger , "Kya bhai maine kya socha tha , aur aap ne kya kiya? " Aap ladki propose jar rahe the ya use apni cooking ki jaan kari de rahe the. " "Su bhabhi par aap ne to bola ki ye to bade romantic hai , isme romance kaha hai ? Riya asking her sis- in - law. Suhani nw look @ Rathod , who nw signal her nt to reavel abt tht.
Sunahi :Riya , vo vo kya hai na... vo jara thoda sa private hai , means tum abhi choti ho na...
Riya : To aap Roshni Di ko bata do , vo muhe censor kar ke bata dengi...
Roshni : (Look @ Rathod who nw vry much embrassed😳 ) Nahi , mujhe to neend aa rahi hai , kal baat karte hai . (She goes to her room)
Rathod sighs in relif , :Riya ab tum so jaao. mujhe bhi ofc jana hai. , Suhani chalo (thy bth leaves)
Riya goes to Roshni's room , "Di"
Roshni : Kya hua ? kuch chayie tha ?
Riya : nahi, aapne bataya nahi , ki aap ko bf aap ko kaise propose kiya tha ?
Roshni : Riya , tujhe sharam nahi aati aise baat karte hue? mera koi bf nahi hai ..
Riya : Ohhh Di , kya hoga aap ka ???? jaldi se koi dhund lena. Acha aap ko kya lagta hai ki vo aap ko kasie propose karega ?
Ropshni : (Abt to say somthing bt chose to keep mum)
Riya : Ohh , Di ab bol bhi do... kya itna bhaav kha rahi ho?
Roshni : Riya , vo mujhe I Luv You bol de mere liye vahi kaafi hai..
Riya : Di... aap kitni purani ho , kuch to romance add karo ,
Roshni :Chal ab ja tere room mai ...
Thy bth wishes gudnight to each other. Riya goes to her room. Here Roshni also lay on her bed & talks to her self , "Sach Arjun , sirf ek baar I Luv You bol do , aur mujhe kuch bhi nahi chayie tumse"
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
😊
mujhe maggi bahut pasand hai.. 😛

bechara arjun... dono behno k bheech me kahan phas gaya...
ariya were awesome together...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow...arjun mujhe pura yakin hai...riya sach mein ek din tumhe pagal kardegi...


Rathore...tumhe kya bolu sach mein sajh nahi aa raha...propose bhi koi aise karta hai bhala...ok private moment...hmmm...to phir thik hai rathore...



I love this yaar...awesome update...

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