Ariya ff : HUM-TUM(PART 49 PG 153 OCT 5) PM LATER

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Sreeparna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

great start di...
Riya & Roshni are sameer's sis,Roshni is in love with Arjun,Arjun is in love with someone secretly,Riya also has a secret affair 😲
kafi saare twist & turns hai..

so I am sure this is gonna be interesting too 😉
update soon di 😃

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

@MRD1692020

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Part 3

Rathod msg Riya his ofc address , So , she catches taxi & goes to his ofc. She got irriate ,"OMG itna bada ofc mai ab mai bhai kaha search karu? " She calle him bt Rathore cut d call.

Riya : Oho , ab ye dekho ye phn bhi nhi utha rahi hai , aur ab dekhna baad mai mujh par hi apni bhadas nikalenge...

She look here & there & chose right way to go , Suddenely she bumped into someone . She look & sees one guy , wit curly hair , spects , same age as her , looking @ her confusedly. "Excuse me , wht do u want ? U need somthing? " The boy still thinking "i had seen her somwhere , bt whr???"

Riya : Ya... Sameer Rathod.

D person look @ her & ask , "U cmg here for case? "

Riya : Wht ???? no...

Boy : K.

Riya : U knw him ?

Boy : Ys , ofcourse..

Riya :Thts great.. (She said happily)

Boy : (looking @ her confusedly ) Isme khush hone wali kya baat hai he murmed to himself. Chaliye mai aap ki help kar deta hue. (& accompany wit her) (suddenely he remerbers whr he seen her)

Riya sees one well build man come towards thm , he come close to thm & litterally pulled tht boy frm Riya . Thy stand in one corner. Riya just looking @ thm , she only understand thy bth talking abt her. Suddenely tht well built man came to her side & introduce her , "Hi , im Chotu " & he is Shree " he pointing his finger towards ttht boy who Riya bumped.

Riya : k . then?

Chotu : Aap ko Rathod Sir se kya kamm tha , mera matlab tha , aap hame bata sakti hai , hum bhi police mai hi hai .

Riya : Ammm , nahi vo..

Chotu :Are aap dariye mat , w bth r gud cops , hai na Shree...

Shree : (Only nodded)

Riya :Its k. bt thx

Shree : (nudges Chotu)

Chotu : (cn't stop) Dekhiye aap unke pass mat jaiye , varna baad mai pechtayigi. Vo daant denge aap ko , vo to ek no. ke Hitler hai .

Riya : (Raise her one eyebrow ) Hitler ???

Chotu : Hitler , are ye to kaffi nahi hai , vo to ekdum khudus , ghussale insane hai.

Shree : (Nudeds Chotu again) Nahi ... aap inki baat ka bharosa mat karna... ye to bas hamesha se hi aise hi..

Riya : (folded her hands towards her chest & listening thm)

Chotu : (Are aise dar mat Shree , Rathod Sir kuch nahi kehenge, unhe to pta bhi nahi chlega..

Riya : Ohh , to unhe pta bhi nahi chelga... hmmm..

Shree : Chup kar , ye wrong no. hai ( Shree whispers into Chotu's ear)

Chotu :( just ignore him) bhagwan aise bosses kisi ko na de , are ek Rathod Sir kya kam the , jo ab... (Chotu abt to take Arjun's name , bt Shree start to speak)

Shree : Chaliye aap ko Rathod Sir se milne hai na, mai le chalta hue..

Riya :(is abt to go wit Shree , bt stops in mid-way & turn around to Chotu ) Ek mimute , kya naam bataya apne aap ka? (She look towards Shree )

Shree : Shree.

Riya : Ha , Shree , vaise aap ke dost badi intersting baate karte hai . Viase aur kya keh rahe the aap ...

Chotu : To mai yeh keh raha tha ki... (and start his story again)

Shree : (hit his forehead & murmed) Ab to ye gya , jab ise pta chlega ki ye kon hai , to iski aawaz hi gayab ho jaayegi.

Thy reach into thr main ofc & sees Rathod talking to somone in his cabin , So thy tke Riya into Arjun Sir's cabin.

Shree : Thank god , ye samjhe ya sam jhayone yaha nahi hai , varna hame to maar hi daalte (He murmued to himself) Here Rathod called bth of thm , so thy goes frm thr. Riya felt somthing familier in tht room , she felt she famliar wit d room fregnace , she look around d room & sees all papers , files keep in thr exact position, "Hmmm , impressive " She just abt to read d name of d person frm nameplate who kept thr .Whn her phn rings its Rathod ,

Rathod :Whr r u nw?

Riya :Ur ofc bhai .

Rathod : k thn cme to my cabin. , w r already lte. (and off d phn)

IMP :Shree sees Riya's phts with Rathod in his table drawer, & understands she must be vry close to him. r his relative.

Edited by M.V.Kohli007 - 12 years ago

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

U are adding suspense dear...update soon..

Awesome!! now i think her bf is Arjun!

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

@MRD1692020

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Continued part 3

Chotu & Shree r in Rathod's cabin . Rathod ask abt thr wrk & give instructions to thm , Suddenely thy heard knock on door . "Come in " Rathod ans. Riya eneterd in cabin , Rathod abt to speak somthing , bt Chotu suddenely starts his story .

Chotu :Rathod Sir : Ye ladki aap se kab se milna chahti thi , bada dukhi hai bechari , bahut bura hua iske saath ...

Rathod just look @ Shree who looking celing now. While Riya happily listen Chotu , a small grin comes to her face.

Rathod notices ths , & ask Riya : Ohhh , is tht true?

Riya : Oho , bhai... (she speak somthing bt Chotu cut her )

Chotu : Bhai ??????????

Riya :Ha bhai , ye to mera bhai hai , agar bhai ko bhai nahi bolungi to kya bolu ,

Rathod & Riya burst into laughter , while Shree try to supress his smile. Chotu think "kash earthqueke ho jaye aur mai earth mai sama jaau'"

Rathod leaves frm thr , Riya following him . Riya just came back & tld Chotu , Vo jaise bhi hai , mere Bro hai ."

Chotu look @ Shree angrily , "Pehele nahi bol sakta ki vo Rathod Sir ki behen hai , tu to jaanta tha na..."

Shree :To kab se to bol raha tha , ki ye wrong no, hai , Ab kal teri khair nahi.

Here Rathod &Riya comes @ school whr Roshni teaching , Rathod inquires frm watchman , bus dn't cme yet. So , thy waiting in car. Riya starts song ,

Riya , Riya ,

Yes Pappa (Rathod just look @ his little sis , she is still small , he thinks)

getng bored ,

Yes Papa

Ohh.. Open ur mouth,

And ha ha ha (Rathod complete her song)

Rathod :Just shut your mouth...

Riya :Roshi Di kab ayyegi ?

Rathod : jaldi.

After 15 mins bus goes into school compound all childrens desecding frm bus & teachers handed thm thr awaited parents. Rathod sees Roshni is damn tired , bt still she talking sweetly to all of thm.

"Roshni , ab time aa gya hai , use sab bata dene ka... " he thinks to himself & turn to wards Riya , who already wave her hand frm car , to catch her Di's attention . Rathod smile to himself. "Pta nahi ye badi kab hogi"

After 1/2 hr Roshni comes to car , Riya comes out of car & yelled on her happily,

"Roshi Di , i miss you too much... " (Hugs her)

Roshni : ( Also hug her back. ) I miss u tooo mera baccha.

Riya :Di , ab aap ko future mai koi prob nahi hogi..

Roshni :Kya ?? Kis bare??

Riya :Bachhe Sambhalene mai

Roshni :Riya ki bacchi (& pulled her ear)

Riya ::: Aaa Di , Sameer bhai , aap itne chupchaap kaise dekh rahe ho , ek policewale ke saamne ek bechari abla nari , par atyachar ho raha hai aur aap aap kuch action bhi nahi le rahe..

Roshni :Nahi bhai , aap aaj chup rahenge.

Rathod :(Folded his hands& touch thm to his forehead like we prnam god & look @ bth sisters & say) Ab chalo..

Riya : Di jaldi chalo , mujhe badi bhook lagi hai , (& dragged Roshni towards backseat & seat wit her)

All time Riya ask foolish questions to Roshni & Rathod , thy bth r damn tired bt still ans thr lillte sis's questions.

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

@MRD1692020

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Part 4

Thy all r in home nw , enjyng thr food . Though Sameer , Suhani & Roshni r always damn tired bcoz of thr wrk , bt tod Riya is thr to give thm relif. Thy all enjy thr food wit lot of masti . After Dineer Riya watching T.V. While Suhani , Roshni cleaning d table & wash utensiles. Sameer Rathod just enjy his cup of Coffee in gallery . Riya got msg frm her bf "Jaan , u free nw? " Riya look here & there and send reply . "No , after 15 mins " & again watching T.V. After a minutes she bid thm gud-nyte & goes to her room & off d light & take blanket over her full body. So , all think she is in sleep , bt she awake & dialed his no. He immedatly pick phn .

Riya :Hey , baby hws you? (She ask him chirpy tone bt slow voice )

Riya's bf :Fine, bt wht takes u so long baby ?

Riya :Actually my sis cmg frm trip, & enjy family Dinner wit many years..

Riya's bf :Hmmm.

Riya :U r tired na sona? (She ask him lovlingly , she senses his tired voice )

Riya's bf :Ya. Little bit . par hame baat kar sakte hai , like w did .

Riya :Ya.

Thy talked till wee hrs , aftertht bth goes to sleep.

One week passed , Rathod got admission for his princess in Mumbai's best clg. Riya's bf is also back frm Banglore. Tht day Riya is nt willing to go clg , bcoz she is nt feeling well . bt she have to go because of assignments. She submits her wrk. & abt to leave home . Bt her bf called her & tell her to come @ his place , Riya unwillingly goes thr , she dn't want to spoil his mood. He instatly realize tht somthing different wit her.

Riya's bf : R u k sona ?

Riya : (tiredly ans him) Ys..

Riya's bf : ( talk to her , bt tod she is silent , she is nt chirpy & happy like she always.. He notices her face , her face is pale , she is damn tired tod. He immedaly pick her in his arms & goes to his bedroom & put her on bed.)

Riya : Hey , its k . im fine. (she knows his care)

Riya's bf : Ya . i can see tht. (Suddenely his phn rings & he goes frm room )

After 25 mins he came into room & worried wht he see , Riya curled up her body like a ball. She pull her legs close to her stomach & buried her head between thm. He immedatly goes to near her & seat besides her . He caressing her hair , but no response , he softly call her name , she just lift her head & look @ him , he obersves her eyes , thr r gloomy , Riya looked him for a minutes & again buired her head in her legs.

Riya's bf : Wht happened , r u k baby? (He worridly ask her & also lay besides her) He felt she cuddled up to him bt dn't break her silence. He just only caressing her hair & wait for her to open up, After 5 mins she again cuddled to him & look his face & rest her head on his chest. He only kissed her hair. Her silence kill him , he cn't see her like tht.

Riya's bf :Kya hua baby , if thr is anything u want to tel me , thn go on. R u want to go to Dr.?

Riya :(Just playing with his shirts button , stops immedatly , whn she heard abt Dr.)Nthng , its happen. bcoz of mothly cycle . (& buried her face in his chest again)

Riya's bf : He immedatly understands wht she want to say. & caressing her back softly ) Riya baby , if u want anything tell me , i am always by your side.Dn't be shy. (& hold her mre tightly)

Riya felt proud on him . He is so understandble , " Luv You Arjun "

Arjun : Ohh thts great , finally u remebered my name. It hink u totally forgot my name in those stupid & weird names tht u found loveable & sweet.

Riya : Ohh Arjun... Why u dn't like tht names its sound cute.

Arjun : Cute , my foot Riya , whn u called me baby , jaan , sweetu & alll those weird names i feel like im 17yrs old boy.

Riya :Thts gud na.

Arjun :Gud . yucks. Riya , im 27nw. nt 17. plz stop calling me by those weird names. just call me by my real name.

Riya: K. Frm tod im call you Arjun. Its k baby? (She lift her face & looked @ him)

Arjun : (Just look @ her )

Bth smiled loudly..

Edited by M.V.Kohli007 - 12 years ago

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sneha

@Sneha113

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

oh...poor chotu phas gya bak bak and insults krke rathore ki...!!!!
wud want to see his face 😃
roshni is school teacher!!
riya is really very chirpy and energetic!!!
dem singing rhymes is hilarious 😃yayy...arjun aa gya..hez too romantic 😉
update soon..
thanx 4 the pm!

Edited by priya00147 - 12 years ago

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poojdc87

@poojdc87

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Hey awesome!! I was right about Arjun!! That chotu scene was soo good! Hahaha wrong no.!

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diva

@rockz.diva

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

AWW bechara chotu n it waz superbbb updatee loved itt <3 <3 arjun iz soo caring

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573339

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Amazing update :) loved it

continue soon

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elle..

@elle..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#30

Bechara chotu..lololololol
Finally mr.arjun ji ki entry ho gai
Hayye...aisa bf muje mil jaye..itna.carin..itna understandinnng

Mast mast partss
UpdTe soon