Ariya ff : HUM-TUM(PART 49 PG 153 OCT 5) PM LATER

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Sreeparna

@Mellifluous

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Posted: 12 years ago

#331

my mannu di you are just too good [>:D<] Love the new friendship blossoming around..
Riya was about to slap Rathod also 😆
great going di..loved it

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

@MRD1692020

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Posted: 12 years ago

#332

Originally posted by: Payal_156
Thanku manu di...fr three back to back updates...
all was superb..
wait to knw arjun reaction after gaining consciousness..!!
Hope he nt lose his memory hehe..!!
di can i call u manu di??

Thx dear

happy to know tht u like it.

Ys u can call me manu di..

Dn't wry..

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

@MRD1692020

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Posted: 12 years ago

#333

Originally posted by: Piyarani
It was awesome update manu,
per arjun ko hosh kab ayega,
i m waiting to kno ,
ke sge arjun kya karega,plz update soon

Thx dear.

Arjun ko bahut jald hi hosh aayega.😊

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

@MRD1692020

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Posted: 12 years ago

#334

Part 21

Riya goes to home , Suhani & Roshni goes to hospital , Suhani take Roshni with her because she does not any mess between sisters. Roshni is deveasted , while Riya is happy & joyful , one sister lost her love , & other get acceptance for her love. Suhani & Roshni reach hospital , whn Rathod sees Roshni he grab Suhani's arm and draged her in a corner.

Rathod : Tum use yaha kyu leke aayi? Tum janti ho na ki vo Arjun...

Suhani : Sam , aap aisa kaise keh rahe hai , mana ki Arjun se pyar karti hai , aur vo ye bhi jaan chuki hai ki uska pyar use nahi mil sakta , par uska dil ye baat nahi maan raha , use thoda wqut dijiye , ham sab uske saath hai . Sam use achnak se aise Arjun se dur karnge to vo bokhla uthegi , aur shyad isi bokhla pan mai vo kuch alag kar baith. Hame uske saath rehena hoga , khaas kar ke aap ko vo bachpan se aap se judi hai , uska har sukh-dukh , uski pasand-napasnd aap janate hai . Aaap hi ek aise insaan hai jo use sambhal sakta hai , mai to aap ke saath hi hue.

Rathod : ( Hold his wife hands in his and kisses her hands) Thx Su , mai sirf yahi kosish karta raha ki Roshi ko Arjun se kaise dur rakhe , kyu ki mai nahi chahta ki ye baat Riya ko pata chale , mai nahi chahta ki dono beheno mai koi problem ho .. maine kabhi Roshi ki dil ko uske jajbaat ko kabhi samaza hi nahi..

Suhani : Mai samaz sakti hue Sam .. Aap ko pata hai jab koi ladki kisi ladke se pyar karti hai , use pasand karti hai , tab vo sirf uski baare mai sochti reheti hai , use kya acha lagta hai , use kya pasand hai , kya napasnd hai , uski khushi kis baat mai hai . Mai kya karu jise vo mujhe dekhe , uski bhi nazar mai aa jaau , vo har ek mauka dhudti hai uske paas rehene ka , use jaan ne ka , par vo duniya se bhi darti hai , kahi kisi is baat ke bare mai pata chal gaya to , log kya kehenge , uska mazak to nahi udayenge. Vo kisi se kuch nahi keheti , Sam kabhi kisi ko uski manzil mil jaati hai , to kisi ko sirf uska intjaar karna padta hai . aur ye baat mujhse jyada aur kon jaan sakta hai..

Sameer Rathod notices her eyes filled wit tears , he just patt her back , "Hey wht happened huuh?"

Suhani : (Just wipe her tears back of her palm) Sameer aap ko pata hai , matlab ye baat aaj tak maine kisi se nahi kahi.

Rathod : Kya??? (he ask her confusedly)

Suhani : (Slowly speaking) Vo , aap 1st time mere office aaye the na , tabhi mai aap mai fida ho gayi thi , par darti thi aap se vo sab se sun rakha tha ki aap bade strict ho , khadus ho , pasand karne lagi thi aap ko , par darti thi ki kahi aapko apni dil baat bata du , aur aap naraj ho gaye to , mujhe galat samaz liya to , aur office vapis nahi aaye ti mai kya karti , aap ki aadi ho chuki thi mai( She tighten her hold on Rathod's hand) AAp ko pata hai har baar kuch na kuch kaam nikal ke aap ke saamne aa jati , lagta aaj nahi to kal aap mujhe notice jarur karnge. Koi aur aap ko dekhti na to uske saath apne aap ko compare karti , agar kisi din aap nahi aate na to pura din tadpati , aisa lagta kisi ke aap ka no. leke call karu aur puchu aap se ki aap kyu nahi aaye. Aur to aur( she stops & smile to herself)

Rathod : Aur, aur kya Su??? ( He ask her lovingly) (Tod he feel happy , because he knows how much his wife loves him , her love is more important thing for him now)

Suhani : Ap ki kuch videos bhi mere pass thi ..

Rathod : What , meri videos????(he ask her confusedly)

Suhani : Ha,,,, vo... maine office ke CCTV Camras se liye the.. ( with tht she lowerd her gaze)

Rathod : ( his eyes goes big like saucers . he litterally yelld loudly) Tumne kab kaise... ( he abt to ask her when Nurse come there & requested to speak in lower tone.)

Rathod : Ha to sab tumne kaise kiya...( he ask her suprisely)

Suhani : ( smiling ) vo mai aap ko nahi bolungi.. aur vaise bhi meri study ka kya fayda, agar mai itni si bhi baat kar na paau to... aur vo videos to abhi bhi mere pass hai..

Rathod : Kya??? kaha???

Suhani : Meri laptop mai... ( with that she look at her husband reaction)

Rathod smile at her & kiss her forehead) pehele latgta tha ki ghar ki ek hi pagal hai , par ab pata chala ki aur bhi hai.

Suhani : (Hit on his chest & bth r smiling)

Edited by M.V.Kohli007 - 12 years ago

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Anu

@anu91

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Posted: 12 years ago

#335

Happy new year dr...:)
Lovely rathore..
Waiting for ariya come soon dr...

Edited by anu91 - 12 years ago

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shruti

@shrutisweety

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Posted: 12 years ago

#336

lovely update
so sweet of rathod
plz dont seprate ariya

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MANALI MANKEEKAR

@MRD1692020

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Posted: 12 years ago

#337

Here Roshni goes to see Arjun , she enters room and slowly she goes near to him. She smile when she see him , bt suddenely her smile faded when she remberd her small sister wit Arjun , she can't forgot tht scene , when her sister talking sweet things to Arjun's ear , caressing his hair , kisse on his forhead .

Here Riya goes to prayer room in her home & look at Ganpati Bappa's idol & prays , " Bappa aap mere Arjun ko thik kar dijiye na , mai use kabhi fight nahi karungi , break-up bhi nahi karungi , promise ( she hold her throat ) bappa vo bahut acha hai mujhse bahut pyar karta hai , plz use thik kardo mai use khona nahi chahti , agar use jaldi hosh aaya na to mai us din kuch nahi khaaungi , pani bhi nahi lungi , bas use jaldi se acha kar do , phir bahut saari daat sun ni hai uski , mai use kita miss kar rahi hue , mai use is tarah se kabhi nahi dekh sakti. ." (she closes her eyes) Here Roshni's eyes filled with tears she lowered her gaze , suddenely she feels Arjun try to moving his fingers , she thinks its only her thinking , and seat besides him bt again she see Arjun try to move his fingers , Roshni quickly wips her tears & look at him now Arjun move his fingers slowly she immedatly press d bell , within a minutes Nurse coming there , Roshni teel her & Nurse also see the same thing. Nurse goes from ther to call dr. Roshni happily look at him. Dr come thr & orderd Roshni to wait outside. Dr checks Arjun. Roshni sees ths all through glass. After 10 minutes dr comes outside & inform Roshni , "Dn't worry ab unhe bahut jald hi hosh aayega , he is fine now." and goes from there. Suddenely nurse coming outside from Arjun's room & ask her , "Ye Riya kon hai , aap ka naam Riya hai?" Roshni nodded . "Patient ko hosh aa raha hai aur vo baar baar Riya ka naam le raha hai .Aap unse mil sakte hai."

Roshni feels so happy , finally vo thik hai . She runs into his room & stops near his bed . She start to caressing his hair & say "Ha Arjun , mai hue yaha , Arjun open your eyes na.." She requested him. After hearing somone speking to him Arjun stops for a while bt within a seconds he again mumbling , Riya riya & riya.. Roshni stops seeing that , she felt bad , she understands Arjun also love her sister lot , he is not in his senses completely but still he wants Riya by his side. he recongnizes her touch , her voice. Here Riya suddenely turn around & caal Arjun. she feels he calls her.