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Romance in a store room! Hawt man!!! And poor Am, nanda kishore just caught you!! Hehe im so happy am n nk!! And my gawd what's ur name n will u marry me! What speed! Nk guts man! And I'm waitin for the reply aarti reply nt am pls!

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what an update Smita!!

The description of all the pairs through Aarti's POV was fabulous,

And NK's Aarti's sunflower,
WOW.

And NK's proposal!!!
Fabulous writing,

And get well soon honey.
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NK moves fast, doesn't he ;) Go for it, NK!
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Hey Smita, hope you are better today. Are you updating?
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loved it dear nl is super fast ...but i wish his girl doesnt say yes very esaily he should do more effort to get a yes from her and i want a request dear if u like u can make the girl not to belive in marriage or love sort of thing because of her past it will be lovely how nk and arhi get the real yes
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great update NK really works fast already proposing and Arnav and Khushi were cute as always
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OMG NK proposed and that too in a room without light wow cant wait till next update
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I must say NK is exactly like Arnav...Arnav had the guts to call up Khushi within minutes he met her and asked her to be his mistress and hounded her till she agreed to bcome his wife...and his Bharat is following the footsteps of Ram very well...:)...

Btw...if Akash and Sunflower both get married together...we will have a big problem...Arnav has to buy one more cottage at Shimla...lol..;)

Whenever I think of sunflower again...i am going to recollect your FF...:)

And the update screamed of your unique humorous style of writing...:)

Akash Singh Raizada had a pair of specs that worked!

Taking a leaf out of the Sunflower's book, Aarti said, "AM."

Would she have to spend the whole day running about in the 4 buildings, one step ahead of the Sunflower?

Family planning in a store room! Aarti hit her forehead with her right hand, knocking the cap slightly back. Kahan phas gayi, Aarti Ki bachi?

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Oh...you were not well..how are you now...get well soon...:)
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A short & sweet update. Hoping to write more today.



Part 48


Aarti's mouth fell open.

NK, never one to waste an opportunity, especially not one that had fallen into his arms like a ripe plum, kissed her, hauling her soft body closer to his hard one.




A while later, when their lips parted, Aarti's eyes were dazed. She couldn't get her breath, and was panting, gasping for air. Her head was spinning. Her limbs were trembling. Her first kiss! And maybe her only kiss.

She managed to free herself from his hold, maybe because he too was in shock after the mind blowing kiss.



"What is your name?", he asked again when he got his breath & senses back.

"Jaankar kya karoge?", she asked, her voice shaky, but her chin up in the air.

"I can print it in the wedding invitation."

She glared at him, trying to be angry.

"Who said I will marry you?"

"I know you will." The cute dimple on his chin made him more devastating to her self-control. "Mujhe pyaar ho gaya he."

"What the!"

"Pyaar! You know, Mohabbat! Love! Ishq Vishq!"

"You love me?" Aarti was sceptical, and it showed.

"Sacha pyaar. Even before I knew you were female."

"Uuhhh?"

"I thought you were a man. Woh loose clothes mein...", he shrugged, "I couldn't make out you were female!"

Aarti stared at him for one long second, her eyes almost popping out of the sockets. Then she burst out laughing. She clutched her stomach as she laughed hard, guffawing. Her first heart-felt laugh.

She fell against the wall, trying to control her giggles.

NK stood looking at her, smiling.

Finally she asked, softly, without any anger, "You want to marry a chauffeur?"

"Who is also a mechanic."

"What will your family say?", she was casually curious.

"They will say Rab Ne Bana Di Joru for me. Because I am hopeless at repairing things." NK smiled sweetly.

Aarti sighed. What had she gotten herself in to? Ever since she met the Sunflower, her life had been hurtling away on its merry way, totally out of her control.

"Surajmukhi kahin ka...", she muttered.

"What?", NK asked, curiously.

"Nothing.", she said crossly.

"What is your name?", NK persisted.

"Eeiyaam." She pronounced it like Buaji. Now what would he do?

"Eeiyaam? What does it mean?" He looked perplexed, and too cute for words.

"Does it have to mean anything?", she asked.

"No.", he admitted. "So Eeiyaam, when will I get to meet your parents?"

Aarti's face closed up. "Never?", she asked, cocking an eyebrow.

"Can you make that 'soon', ummm?", NK asked.

Aarti looked around, searching for inspiration to get rid of him. Failing inspiration, even a stick was acceptable.

Fate was kind to her.

"NK Bhaiyya! NK Bhaiyya!", came Vivek's call. "Where are you? Akash Bhaiyya is asking for you."

NK said, "I have to go. Promise me you will dance with me at the sangeet?"

"I don't dance."

NK sighed.

"NK Bhaiyya! Where are you?", came Vivek's call again.

He turned to leave, stopped, & turned back.

"Come with me, Eeiyaam. Let me introduce you to my Khushi Bhabi & Payal Bhabi."

"No.", she rushed to say. "No."

NK walked up to her. With her back against the wall, there was no where to go.

"Your name, you say, is Eeiyaam. You won't introduce me to your parents. You don't want to be introduced to my family. You won't dance with me. You won't marry me...", NK said sadly, sounding exactly like a kid who had had his balloon blow up right in his face and was left with just the rubber bits in his hands.

Aarti nodded with difficulty, swallowing a big ball that seemed to be lodged in her throat.

"Then, will you kiss me?"


Part 49: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/3297671/ss-keeping-khushi-th5-part-51-pg-130


Edited by smitar - 12 years ago

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