SS: Keeping Khushi: Th5: Part 51 Pg 130

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ashred12

@ashred12

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

congrats on new thread...
everytime i read a new update, i feel its d most cutest one...but d next update surpasses it...
awesome...

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

loved how Khushi said the correct words.. good update..

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831628

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

smita...waiting for todays update

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@Jhalak29

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

Wow once agn i m stopped with this😊

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barfi

@barfi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

just love their relationship if only we could have that in this day and age just reading your story makes me feel good, happy and relaxed. it puts a smile on my face pls do keep going

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rati123

@rati123

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

Wow ! What a story! Read it in one go ! Congratulations on the new thread.

Waiting for the next update. Pl PM me.

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Vrushika

@Ms.Raizada

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Posted: 12 years ago

#107

New reader new reader new reader :-D hi smita di. I know you dont know me so well lemme introduce myself first. My name is vrushika :-D m 17yrs old and m from goa. !! This is my second ss on this forum. Well i love barun sobti , but just a silent member on this forum. Coz since m in first year this time i really dont get time to come online. Next is my modem is not working i threw it in water so i operate through cell till i get it back so cant really remain active here. Well i know i speak a lot. My first ff what i read was of deeps. That's falling in love with enemy. I love sweet cute stories. And your ss is in my fav list. !! U r an amazing writer and you write stories that i love. Simple cute meaningful stories. And well m a fan of yours and deeps's updates. You guys are my fav writers. And in my class room i keep discussing abt you guys and your stories. Well i dint comment before coz i rarely getto come online and then i dint wanted to be left out commenting. I will tell you sincerely that i stalk your updates. Sorry for reading them without your permission.. :-( but i love you both. You just write in a very superb way.. Gr8 style of writing. And a very emotional as well as a meaningful story. The way you have potrayed each and every character and the depth of love is just awesome.. I m in love. Its super natural. . And well i love arnav here the way you have explained and talked abt him di.. Its just too good. M not commenting over here coz i need a pm or anything from you. Its just that i really wanted to tell you that you are gr8 as a writer and m your one of the fans.!! Read everything in one go. I know many must have told you how sweetly you write but still. :-) well i wont say add me to your pm list coz it wont be fair enough coz i getto comment just one in the week as my college has started back.. I can keep stalking. But yeah if you permit me can i pretty please leave comments on your updates ? If at all you dont have any problem ??? Tc. . Muuhax. . Waiting for next. . Love -vrushika and ps - without your permission i called you di ! Is it fine with you ?

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rulama

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Posted: 12 years ago

#108

Smita😊,

This update is one of the best that I have come across. How well both Arnav and Kushi are attuned to each other.. As a couple they are exquisite. Even without vocalising their thoughts they are able to grasp what is expected and what needs to be done. Both understand that the happiness of the family is the core to their happiness. Thats why Arnav's assurance to Payal and sharing and shouldering her responsibilities is touching. Showing the largesse of ASR which is unknown to the world but only to his family was an insight to Payal as to how well loved she will be in the family she enters into. The endearing qualities of both Kushi and Arnav is shown to her. They take care of all who belong to them be it the family or the extended family. Thats how their love that overflows and warms the heart and the hearth is! Such is the power of their love those who come across it feel they are blessed. Thats why them being the Elder Bahu and Son the family looks upto them and agree unequivocally as they know that the faith reposed on them is never misplaced. Thats what Payal was shown which overwhelms her. This is what Kushi had wanted Arnav to do and he did willingly without any hint. This what is called being attuned to.

The family too though accepting readily Payal as a bahu were apprehensive of Manorama and her aspirations towards her Bahuriya. But the scaling down of Manorama towards her choice of bahuriya from a beautiful rich girl fit to be Ms. Universe to a simple, hard working, service minded, traditional, middle-class girl, Payal, is astounding It also depicts the love, trust, faith and warm friendship she shares with Garima, though meeting after a long time is able to accept Payal unconditionally. This is the Manorama whom Arnav adores.

The pick of the day is

"Hamre Bitwaa ijj bery shy!", Mami laughed. "Payaliyaa ijj bery shy too. Saasumma, just imagine, after marrijj, both of them..." She was laughing too hard to complete her sentence.
I have never seen a mother ribbing her son so and joining the family in pulling his leg.
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It reminded me of the Holi episode where akash and payal keep saying Payalji,

Ji Akashji convo.

For this update you deserve a warm 🤗and a round of 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏