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badfaith4u

@badfaith4u

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#91

Originally posted by: Jyo.Arshi.IPK
YAAAYYY 🥳

am the first to comment on tis thread !!!!

totally wonderful update !!!!

loved it...Akash and Payal shaadi fixed !!!!

loved Arnav-Payal convo...also loved hw Khushi knew what Arnav spoke !!!!

waiting for more ARSHI romance !!!!

Yipee

new thread

and lovely chapter as always

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Swati Hansraj

@swati-89

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#92

Payal stood at the doorway, watching her Jetji drive away. So this was how it felt to have a big brother., she thought.

Smita this one line, the emotion in it stole my heart again. u know i don't have a brother and have always longed for one, from the moment i have understood relationships and i can very well understand what Payel or some girl, any girl, faced with such a situation can feel.

I have always said this to u that u r an amazing writer but today i came to fully understand why ur writing feels so good to read, coz maybe u understand relationships very well and it is this quality of urs that sparkles out of ur writing.

Needless to say, i loved the update.

Congrates for the new thread.

Love

Swati.

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.S.A.

@.S.A.

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#93

Lovely Jhet Bhabi interaction. Always loved Arnav Payal interaction in the show too. There was great respect displayed in every scene that there was ... Beautiful chemistry too. Wish they explored it.

I hope I get to see this relation develop here :D

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Mystery Girl

@mysterygirl06

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#94

awww sssooo nice part...update soon...

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S.B.

@-Xpress-

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#95

Wonderful update..loved it.. so finally payal and akash marriage is fixed and all the things arnav said to payal..loved him so much for that and for the person he is... loved how you have portrayed each character so beautifully.. hats off.. looking forward to the next part...

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swetha30

@swetha30

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#96

nice update... PM me ur future updates..

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samba12

@samba12

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#97

Smitar,

Thank you for continuing to tell this story despite the furore on the forum.

I enjoy each update and look forward to reading a beautiful love story as it unfolds.

More power to you for keeping your head when all about you are losing theirs!

(Last line - modified version of a line in the poem "If" by Rudyard Kipling)

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Sana Sultana

@sana11

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#98

finally akash n payal together😃🥳loved how khushi understood arnav😃its really a delight to read ur story dear😃fabulous one👏update soon😃

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831628

Hibernated

Posted: 12 years ago

#99

smita dear,...waiting for todays update...

Edited by toeditor - 12 years ago

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Paru

@paru_rox

Rocker

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#100

That was heart touching especially the last bit ... Payal & Arnav's conversation was really sweet.

Your updates make me forget what's going on in the forum & with the show Smita 😊

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