VIRMAAN SS: BORN FOR EACHOTHER part 6 UPDATED pg 15 - Page 6

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Posted: 12 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: virumanu


Dr I hav my xams ...hav one more paper...I would finish it and then I would update 4 sure... but.I hav stard writing it...



Ohh 😒 !!

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Posted: 12 years ago
#52
Haww!! OH MY GOD!!? Misunderstanding right? I think he must be in love with mona. I have just started 2 read this now and I really really like it . Please update soon and regularly, its amazing!!
Thank You ! I love VirMan in this chapter 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53
sorry dear for late reply...
kinda busy in studies...
but must say beautiful ff...
looved it dear:)
keep on writing dear:)
thnx 4 pm:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54

Part-5

For some second virats world shated .he felt like just go some where else alone .he wanted to go somewhere else 'he wast able to stand their ..he felt like he was standing on the fire. .

But still wanted to hear the name from ankit's mouth so he turned to ankit to ask

V-who yaar??

A-arra yaar she is dancing there see

V- two of them are there ..she would hav a name rite

(viru was wishing tat it shouldt be manvi)

A-Mona 'my love ,my life, my everything yaar..i just love her to bits'I cant live without her buddy ..plsss help me .

V-thk god 'it s mona(siging,)

A-wat? ..i didt hear u(was looking at mona when virat said thks god).

v-nothing yaar (feeling happy for himself and also his friend)I m so happy for u ma friend..gud choice ha'bt I feel sad for her'

A-WHY?

V-u love her rite hahahahah😆😆

A-VIRAT ''.I M GONNA KILL U 😡

V-ok ok ok srry'she is the luckiest ok happy now'and don't worry just a week then u will have ur love near u loving u buddy.

A-thks buddy'but how yaar ??i don't think she feels something 4 me'she thinks just a like friend'

V-hey don't worry yaar'its getting late I think we should leave now rite..

They both go to the girl who r enjoying themselves.

V-hey I think we should leave no its all ready 11pm '..

MO&MA ' oh ya ..its 11 pm we should leave..

Virat thought of a plan and wanted to talk 2 manu so tat she can help him

Virat drove home and left ankit first ,ten mona..

Manvi was now sitting with virat

After some time viru stoped in an unknown place to talk to manu abt Ankit and mona

Viru gets down the car and goes to open manu's door.

Manu was first shocked and with some courage asked viru

MA-V..VI.VIRAT..wat happened y u stopped hear any thing wrong ???

Vi-hey don't worry ..i just wanna talk to u abt Ankit and M..Mona

M-Now this thime hey see the time yaar its 11.45pm..leave me hme we can talk 2morrow also rite

V-no manvi ..its urgent realy plzzz

M-ok tell me wat happened any thing worng'

V-hey take a break yaar'u talk tooo much..anyway listen ankit loves mona a lot ..he is scared if he proposes her he might lose her friendship tooo'plzzz help me yaar..i promised him tat I would help him get his love ..plzzz

M-WAT??(shocked)realy Ankit loves mona TOO.

V-so mona loves ankit ah'wow fab man '.

M-ok so both love eachother wow'now plan to get them together and confess their love..

V-no need of any plzn manvi ..i will tell him to proposes Mona 2morom it self'.ankit should be MAN now '

M-ya tats rite'now leave me in ma hme plzzz my aunt would be waiting..

Virat then left manvi at her hme and drove off to his hme'

Manu calls a worker women as her aunt as she had no one in delhi wen she came ..the aunt also cme to work in delhi to earn a living for herself as she to has her husband left her for someone else she has no children too. She treats manu as her own daughter ..she is a motherly figure to manu too..

Our viru boy lives all alone 'but has a kaka who looks after his needs'

V-kaka ..i m srry ..i was with my friends so ..im srry for disturbing u'

Kaka- it k beta'u had ur food or should I make something 4 u..

V-no kaka ..i had ..u plzzz go sleep..

Viru went to his room and fell in his bed thinking of his new friend manvi'and dosed of to sleep..

Next day both virumanu helped MO-AN tell their love to eachother

(guys I don't want to drag MOAN love story more'I myself getting bored..)

i knw its going bad but i promise i would make it interesting next as it is abt virumanu and some emotions)😊😊( hint----a seperation track on de way)

plzzz do comment and like it cozzz i feel i u all hate it...😭😭😭
Edited by virumanu - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55
beautiful story but I think this is some how kushi film story
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
res
Unress !!
heyy I can see some improvement in ur Writing 😊 Great 👏 ..
well the update was short yr very short as u updated after long time ... but update was nice good ..
And add some Confession scenes Of MO-AN .. it will look good 😊 .. like umm .. Preparation for confession jis'se VirMan Or b ache friends hojae ..
And OMG , abi se separation track 😲😭 .. waiting for the update .. Update ASAP ..
Edited by Tuba_KSG - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57
wow, its really nice update yaar
seperation????
waiting 4 to read more.
thanx for the pm dear
pm me in ur next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: Tuba_KSG

res
Unress !!
heyy I can see some improvement in ur Writing 😊 Great 👏 ..thks buddy
well the update was short yr very short as u updated after long time .i wrote this part long time a go bt didt wanna post it cozz i felt it was tooo boring so.. but update was nice good ..
And add some Confession scenes Of MO-AN...thks 4 de idea bt i didt want to drag MO_AN track tey are't not main rite...bt would try too.. .. it will look good 😊 .. like umm .. Preparation for confession jis'se VirMan Or b ache friends hojae ..
And OMG , abi se separation track 😲😭 .. waiting for the update .. Update ASAP ..will surly try ..

thks a lot buddy luv u muuuhh😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
😊

Originally posted by: silpasivan

wow, its really nice update yaar
seperation????
waiting 4 to read more.
thanx for the pm dear
pm me in ur next update

thks you
sure i would pm u😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
NICE UPDATE
ABHI THO DOSTI HUA AUR TUM DONO KO SEPERATE KARNA CHAHTHI HU. THIS IS NOT FAIR.😭

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