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suhaaana

@suhaaana

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Posted: 12 years ago

#141

sorry fr late reply

awsome one dear

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Chaiya_Chaiya

@Chaiya_Chaiya

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#142

OMG. Loved it!!

A beautiful ending indeed!! :)

Loved ArHi bedroom scene in the beginning. Really emotional. Finally they made it up! :)

N now to my favorite scene and I LOVE you for writing it very descriptively so I could imagine it easily. Khushi and Sheetal scene.🤣🤣 I couldn't stop laughing. LOL Khushi pulling Sheetal's hair and dragging her down the stairs. That too after her series of slaps! Truly a sight to see!!

And then I liked how you made Anjali adopting Aarav. Now that she has her own clone of her Chotte, hopefully she won't disturb ArHi. On a serious note, when Arnav rejected the idea of adopting Aarav (and that too from of the kiddo) I was feeling bad for the kid, but Arnav's reasons were valid. I was glad that Anjali adopted him.

And now to ArHi's last bedroom scene. That was sweet. Khushi is 2 weeks pregnant and they are going to be parents!! A perfect ending indeed! :) However, there was a flaw in the logic. How can Khushi be pregnant if they didn't have any actions going on for more than a month and half? Because according to Khushi they last DID IT in farmhouse before wedding, and then they problems going on regarding Sheetal for 1 month and the other half in exposing Shyam and Arnav's birthday event.

But I can look over that. Because other than that minor flaw, it was a great OS. Loved the characterization of Khushi! Something I had always wanted to read! :) Please let me know if you write any more OS! And thanks for the pm! :D

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deepa

@deeswarna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#143

superb ending. loved it

woah never thought khushi would be so wild! i mean pulling sheetal's hair out! that would have been a treat to watch

n really happy anjali adopted aarav instead of them because i badly wanted them to have their child 1st. n its good coz anjali too wont feel so lonely:)

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saba

@ASR6262

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Posted: 12 years ago

#144

loved it Awesome end 👏

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sai

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#145

Hiii...Awesome update...Loved it...loved da strong khushi.. she was mindblowing...ArHi b coming patents...cute...perfect ending...Thanks 4 da pm

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sruthick

@sruthick

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Posted: 12 years ago

#146

Wow...Awesm update...
Sheetal s gone frm their lives...
Nd ...nw Khushi s Pregnant... Lovd it...
Beautifully writtn dude...

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Pavin

@..Sugar_ArHi..

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Posted: 12 years ago

#147

Woman figjt will be always the funiest fight..
Ur update is so long..how u manage to write tz long..
I really enjoy ur writing..
N love to tht anjali adorpt aarav ethr thn arnav..