Kriyansh SS: Some one behind you (Discontinued)

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Gayatri Jethani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#31

sorry for late comment...

seems interesting... loved it
update soon
thnx for pm

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-.Nisha.-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#32

Heya manu...and aroma
A horror ff..wow
Looking forward to the first chappy
Update soon

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glmorous_diva

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Posted: 12 years ago

#33

update kab tak milega???

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.....pujan.....

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Posted: 12 years ago

#34

sounds interesting.

horror story.

update soon.

sorry for late reply.

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zona_malik

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Posted: 12 years ago

#35

sounds interesting n super exciting👏

update soon n pm me too

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Blackheart

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Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Horror one nyc update fast

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Maneet

@moon_cupcake

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Posted: 12 years ago

#37

Hey guys, happy new year

Here's part 1:

Its been 2 years kriya left, and vishakha also left with her.Every one in the gang became couples except Viha and rey was also in a relationship with taani.

After final year exam every one really very happy . now they all are gonna enter in new world ...
bharat soon going to London for his dream course .. nil , rinni , amar and simmi leave for canada ...for some future studies
other hand
swaron , rey , taani . viky and neha left in india
neha decided to shift in a house which situated out side of city it is a beautiful place all around covered with greenery
swayam : neha r u sure that u want to shift in that house . because wo bohat door hey yha sey or upar sey tum akeli ho tumhey agar kisi cheez

ki jroorat pari to .,, or vesey b tumhey shift honey ki kya jroorat hey ...
neha : swayam tum asey hi tension taking or neha mange very thing doosri baat neha want to b alone ...
taani : lekin kyu ...
neha : kyu ka koi ans nahi hota
swayam : matlab u sure u want to go ...
neha : ha ..
swayam : ok as u wish i'll help u
neha : nahi neha not want koi help ...
taani : per
neha : neha telling u no madad
at last .neha shift in that house

viky : to neha shift ho gyi wha use jroorat kya thi wha janey ki
rey ; or mujey tum logo ki samaz nahi ati ki tum log apni relation ship ko second chance kyu nahi detey
viky : kyu ki wo nahi chahti
swayam : tujey kesey pta
rey : viky she is girl samaz is baat ko
viky : i think u r right but i need some time
both : ok
taani : khana ready hey
rey ; coming ..chalo khana khatey hey ...

night time around 12.30 'o clock . neha sleeping in her room . when she heared some sound . so neha wake up nd look around no body wa

there . neha come out from bedroom start looking around she hear that some one crying very badly in pain . but where god knows she check whole house but in vain at last she come back in her room . but that painful groans increasing with every secong neha sweating very badely
neha hide her head under pillow but no use ...

neha : STOP !!!!1
neha felt some one standing near her bed ...but when she look up no body here
neha : kon hey
voice : bohat dard ho rha hey
neha : k ...K ... K kon hey wha ...
but again some one start crying
neha found bathroom door open neha enter in bathroom she found water tub full of blood
neha ; kon hey samney kyu nahi atey ...kon ho tum kya chahtey ho muj sey ...
then light start blinking nd music start playing very loud
neha : NO...!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
neha look around nd found her self in bed sweating very badely nd then doorbell riha
neha ; huh >>>(in fear)...then she cool down her self its just a dream
neha move out from her bed nd firstly check bathroom but everything is fine
then neha take a deep breath nd nd go down stair then open door
neha ; tum log
swayam ; kya hua itna time kyu lga diya door open karney mey ...
rey : r u ok ...
neha : ha ha main theek ho wo main so rhi thi to door bell suni to maney scoha itni morning my kon hoga bas
swayam : see kon aya hey
viky ; hi neha
neha : hi
taani : wow its beautiful house neha
neha : thankx... hey come inside bahar kyu kharey ho ...main coffe bnati ho
taani : main bnati ho app freash ho jao ...
neha : ok
rey ; house is beautiful guys ...
viky ; ha baat to sahi hey ...
rey standing backside of house rey heared some one laughing rey look aroung
rey : kon hy
but then that laugh change into painful cry ..then he saw a girl driving car very fast and car crash into a truck rey jump in shock then some one tap on his shoulder

viky ; kya hua tumhey itna passena kyu rha hey garmi to nahi hey tu theek to hey na
rey : ha ha main theek hoo
rey look around nd found himself sitting in hall
taani : kya hua apki coffe
swayam : kya hua rey tu theek hey ///
viky ; raat ko soya nahi kya
neha : enter
neha ; rey u ok tum sweating itna badely kyu ...
rey again look around
rey : main ata ho abhi freash ho k
rey leave
swayam : isey kya ho gya
viky ; jesey koi bhoot dekh liya ho
after listening bhoot word neha again start sweating
same time a cold wind pass like a electric shock ..windows start shaking
everyone dumb-struck
neha recover first
neha ; chill kuj nahi hey bas wo hawa hey na is liye
swayam : ya i think u r right vesey b bhoot bhoot kuj nahi hota ...
but everyone fell some one's presence ...

They felt some one close to their heart was some where around here.

So hows it??/

P.S for pms buddy me

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Edited by lovely7010 - 12 years ago

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Sonia

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Posted: 12 years ago

#38

INTERESTING CONCEPT👍🏼👍🏼

DO CONT SOON N PM ME...

loved d update...

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Blackheart

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Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Nyc intro kaun hai vo ye mat bolna ki kriya hai nahi to sab log tujhe mar dalenge

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Pihu.k11

@Pihu.k11

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Posted: 12 years ago

#40

This is gonna b fun !
M jus lovin it.. 😃
Great work Mannu.. Buh inne typo errors??? 😆 😆

2yrs leap..hmmm..
Gosh.. Viha still aint a couple !
Whts wrong wid dem??
Ummm.. Normal cheez h buh still wana ask y Neha wantd to shift to dat house only.. As in its at a distance from d city.. N Neha.. She has to liv alone thr.. Thn y??? May b,dis is called As FAIT DESTINY !!

M glad,Reyam r tryn to convince rathr tryn makin vicky undrstn abt d relationship thingy!!!

Omg.. neha's dream was horrible.. It actly gave me goosebumps.. 😲 😲
Laughs,cries,blood.. Hahhh.. Buh thn it came as Neha's dream.. N thn suddenly d door bell rang..
Mko toh lga tha ho gya kabada buh it was d Gang.. Hahhh!!

Addin to it.. Reyaansh saw an accident buh thn found him sittin in a hall.. Haila.. Kaise dreams dkhta h ye ladka

Bhoot ka nam lete e..cold wind started blowin :0
Evrybody flt some one close to thr heart is present thr..

Ermmm.. Was it Kriya?????
Reyaansh ne jo dream dkha..ws tht a reality fr kriya????
May b dis is y,Reyaansh only saw dat dream..
Bot dard ho rha h,blood all around.. Dat car,truck.. All dis is surely inter connected !

Waitin fr d story to unfold !
Lookin forward to d nxt part :)
Update soon :D

Dis one is gonna b btr thn true lv vs evil buh thn True love wud always remain special fr me :D 😳