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Posted: 12 years ago
#31
Oh.. Finally d concept !!
Its all abt ur love.. Movin on in ur life o abt forgettin someone o abt healing someone.. I guess!!
Honestly,m confused..
Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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guys sabar karo sabki confussion dhur ho jayegi keep trust and ha thanks for liking and comeneting
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesum cs n concept..update soon n all d best for u'r exams..sory for being late
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Posted: 12 years ago
#34
nyccc concept... intresting lagta hai...
update soon..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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chapter-1


Hi shhh silence we should not make any sounds because we are going to spy on someone to known what he feels uff sorry meine tho apni aapko apni introduction bhi nahi kiya na aapke saath mein hoo kria kria shikawat ha mai kaha thi ha hum aaj spy kerenge aap bhi mere saath haina chalo mere saath bina koi shor macheye hum ab uski room pohuchgayi wo nahi hai room mai kyun ki usko subah subah jogging pe jaane ki aadat hai meri tarah nahi wo uff mai tho uska naam bhi nahi pataya na aapko aur deko kitna baath kar rahi ab aapto confuse hi hogi na a hai kon soch kar tho mai batati hoo uska naam hai swayam mera bhai par maine usko bhai nahi kehti hoo bas sam bhulati hoo itna bada bhi nahi hai mujse sirf 2 minute se bada are mai introduce karte karte main kis kaam ke liye aaya wo nahi kiya chalo kria dhoondlo aaj tho usse dhoond nikal kar padh lete hai kaha hai kaha hai pata hai mai uska dairy dhoond raha hoon jisme wo saari emotions aur feelings bara deta hai taaki mai kamse kam uska love life settle kar sakti hoo na aur is ghar mei mera bhabi ayegi par kya karoon sab kuch ulta hi horaha hai idar a nahi mante hai kisike saath pyaar mai padna nahi chahta hai aur udar wo pyar ka shabd bhi liya ghar mei aagh lagegi aur poora ghar sar par utalegi ha wo tho bahut agressive hai mera bhai armaan acha docter hai acha insaan hai acha bhai hai phir bhi acha lover kab banega pata nahi pyaar kitni achi chaaz hai sab ki hot mai kushi laati hai par meri dono bro's ko kab samaj mai ayega UNIVERSE JI

armaan:kria kria

kria:uff mar gayi bahi bula raha hai chalo chalo baad mai baath karte hai pehle jakar ab kya hua dekh lete hai

she goes down to face the agressive armaan

Kria:ji bhai kya hua

armaan:a mai poochna chahiye kya hua tumhe a kya hai tum aisa kyun kiya

Kria:meine meine kya kiya bhai

armaan:tumhe pata nahi tumne kya kiya to akya hai

Kria(mind):uff mar gayi bhai ko pata chal gaya

armaan:kria mai tumse kuch pooch raha hoo

Kria:ji bhai wo mei...

armaan:tumne bataya nahi mumbai ki college se tumhare aur swayam ke liye admission letter ake do din hogayi aur tum dono ko tho 4 days mei
report karni hai na

Kria:bhai mujhe nahi jana hai

armaan :nahi jana matlab kya hai itni badi college hai aur tum bol rahi ho ki nahi jana hai

Kria:mei aapko nahi chod kar nahi jaungi

armaan:chup kar tu itna acha future mil rahi hai aur tho aur dance ke liye itna craze hai waha jiske liye tum kuch bhi kar sakti ho so tumhe aur
swayam ko jana chahiye aur jarahi hai samji tum

swayam:ha ha bro jaroor hum jayenge kria bhi mere saath chalegi

Kria:but sam

swayam:kria hum ja raha hai chalo sab breakfast karte hai chalo bhai

Kria:kya jaroorat thi jane ke liye maan liya

swayam:chup kar tu chalo kha lete hai

Kria:nahi mujhe bhook nahi hai

swayam:kria deko mumbai hum kyun jana chahte the bolo

Kria:dance ke liye

swayam:hai na tho tum kyun na keh rahi hai bolo

Kria:hum waha aur bhai yaha mujhe acha nahi lag raha hai

Swayam:hum permanently todi na rehna hai na studies complete karke yaha ajate hai

kria:teekh hai phir bhi mujhe bhai ko chod kar jane ka mann nahi kar raha hai sam

swayam:chalo mujhe bahut bhook lag raha hai

but she is kria she has her evil plan in her mind and now she will implement it on dining table we will see what happen
next

on dining table

Kria:teekh hai hum mumbai jayenge par ek condition par bhai

armaan:bolo

swayam:kria chup raho

Kria:nahi mujhe bolna hai

armaan:swayam tum rukho usse bol ne do

Kria:thanks bhai wo isse khol kar dekh lijiye

armaan:a kya hai

kria:pehle dekh lijiye phir bataungi

and finally he opens the cover and confused by seeing it

armaan:kria a photos kya hai

yes they are photos but whose photos just wait and see

Kria:obviously ladkiyon ki pictures hai usmei aapko kisi ek pasand kar lijiye

armaan :kria tumko maine kitni baar kaha is topic mere saamne mat lao

Kria:bhai please maan jao na is ghar humare liye ek baabhi chahiye hai na sam

swayam:ha na ha pata nai

uff this swayam is totally confused


bas guys aaj ke liye itni kaafi hai and no precaps ha and give your views

next update on page 20 yes its my demand







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Posted: 12 years ago
#36
Res
Unres

Yayyy!!!! Frst to comment...

Ye armaan aisa kyun hai... 😕

Do bahiyo ko pyaar se allergy...n kria pyaar mai viswas 😳 😳

Kria ladkis ki photo dikha rahiye 😆

Swayu n kria in st.louis...waitin
for d nxt part 😊
Edited by kreya_pearl - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37
nice chapter ... update res soon.,...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
awesome...arman aur swayum ko pyaar se allergy hai...that was funny...pls update next part soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
Awsome update ..!
Loved it ..!
Thanks 4 d pm..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#40
it was funny and amazing tooo..
update soon.

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