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Hira

@hira_arnie

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Wow a dark one
amezing job dude
and i u even think to leave this ff in middle seriously i wil kill u;<
plz plz continue soon;)

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Noni

@sweetnoni

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Interesting concept...loving it already:D
Omggg he just used the poor sool...bechari khushi whats gonna happen now?

Continue soon n keep it up!!

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J P

@TwilightStar_JP

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#73

Gals both of u rock! And my gawd frm wer do u get such thoughts eve1 dies in d family except her huh? N revenge ul torture khushi is it! Gawd poor soul n hes smitten by her at d very first meetin! Poor gal!
Cheers

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horizon123

@horizon123

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#74

Amazing story with amazing prologue. Pls cont soon.😃

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MissAsian

@MissAsian

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#75

Lol this Naveeb does sound like a arse - dw ur awesome so u'll obvs get someone better ;)

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sai

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#76

Hiii...Congrats on da new ff...Awesome start...loved it...sooo dark...poor khushi...Can't wait 4 more...Con soon...Thanks 4 da pm

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.Spring.

@.Spring.

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#77

oh
thats soo interesting
revenge and only revenge in arnav mind...
its gonna so emotioal seems like
truely heart wrenching
u written so nice
thanks for the pm ..

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fffan123

@fffan123

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Very Interesting. Looking forward to next part.

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Ni1234

@Ni1234

Dazzler

+ 8

Posted: 12 years ago

#79

Vani darling

as always awesome update...loving the concept...

It would be great if we work on it regularly so that u can write and update it asap...

I mean once in 2 days would be just awesome for the readers..

Muaahhh

Thanks for writing kind words about me...😆 I am in La La La Land...😆

Love,

Nisha

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Kurup

@Kurup

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#80

Hey vani...its been long that i read something from u...this is a new treat...

Waise this FF is reallly very fresh,,,new thoughts, new story, old writer...

I LOVED THE TITLE A LOT...for the firstime i think khushi is described as a dolll which i reallly love on her, the word dolll reallly suits her a lot...

Very interesting plot...reallly hting naveen...coz he just blindly toook khushi just coz she was present during anjali's death...

and how is khushi ugly then and after 12 years beuatiful that arnav was gazing at her...may be hormonal changes😉.

hating arnav also coz even he is also as bad as naveen, but since arnav and khushi are the hero and heroine they will end up being together at the end so hate for arnav is temporary as of now and naveeen kaaa ptha nahii how far will his rate of hate be...the story needs to b unfolded to rate my hatred for him...

goood going,,,,update soooner and thnx for the PM

Edited by Kurup - 12 years ago

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