FF: I OWN YOU IN EVERY WAY THD 9 Part 70 - Pg 109

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deepika45

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Posted: 12 years ago

#551

daddi 😡 chi cheap woman.

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Shruti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#552

uh oh daadi is in for trouble😆

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Coffee

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Posted: 12 years ago

#553

I hate his Daadi so much ! She's horrible being. . somehow I actually pity her :|
I cant wait for the face-off :D

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Drama.Queen

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Posted: 12 years ago

#554

waiting for the last update ... Y this cliffhanger ?

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Sanj

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Posted: 12 years ago

#555

Awsome Update...love it...Good Arnav ko Dadi ke against Proof mil gaye...ab dadi nahi bachegi...Waiting for the next Update...

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Barun_Riti_LMH

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Posted: 12 years ago

#556

Ye dadi kavi nhi sudhregi...
Now am waiting for arnav's reaction when this wil be reveald wid proofs...
Amazing update.,

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Sanchita

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Posted: 12 years ago

#557

Awesum update!! Dis dadi needs to b taught a lesson by Arnav!!! Hope d police is at d door...nd dey arrest dadi..nd tk her away frm Arshi's lyf forevr 😉

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Cogito_Ergo_Sum

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Posted: 12 years ago

#558

Nicely written and very touching to see the concern and protectiveness Arnav has for Khushi...Madhu, Hats off once again for this story. The best part of your FFs is that you show a slow change in the character of the leads that is brought about by their very real and true love for each other. The transformation is gradual and believable...

One can really feel the depth of the emotion involved. In this FF for example, Arnav was really a jerk at the beginning, using all the underhand tricks in the book to force his will on Khushi. But when he had her in his grasp, you showed so well how he was unable to really complete the indignity, because unknown even to himself, he had started loving her and not merely desiring to possess her.

The Khushi in this story is truly admirable--with loads of self respect and maturity, apart from being a responsible daughter, thinking of her family's welfare. That inherent strength of character is what makes your stories and the leads shine.

As I've mentioned before, what I really loved in this story, was the fact that though you had in Dadi, a formidable villain, you showed the strength of Arnav--Khushi winning over her evil. Reassuring to have goodness and justice triumph at the end of the day!

In a sense, am sad this story is ending, but it was a truly enjoyable journey. So its a bittersweet emotion and anticipation for the last part!

Look forward to Dadi getting her just desserts and Arnav--Khushi off for their 2nd honeymoon!!

Cheers

Edited by RamnVij - 12 years ago