IPK FF:Love,Lies and Two Weddings?TH2 *COMPLETED* - Page 41

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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 24-Iss Pyaar Ko Kya Naam Doon...no matter how many times I read it I fall in love with it every time It is one of the most beautifully written chalter ever...and Ofcourse not mention I also love the Epilogues too..!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
And I am done reading this awesome FF for the second time..btw wat are your plans after Dhadkanein ??? Are going you going to start something new soon...please do..??? ❤️ ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
Its really awsome dear
i think arshi becoming old 1st tim i saw only in ur ff
i just loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
BM...

just starting to read the FF.. will come back with comments 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Done reading the whole FF and epilogues. Your story was engaging that I read it on PC and phone (while in bathroom & bed) both to read quick😊

Thanks for making Arnav & Khushi the main characters.
Thanks for less focus on other characters.
Bada wala thanks for making Anjali move out of Shantivan!! 🤗🥳.. finally someone did it!!

Loved how Arnav redeemed himself by wiping off all the bad memories for Khushi..

I liked the twist about restaurant chain. I am sure lot of people like me thought that it was about Khushi's pregnancy. Also liked all their private celebrations..

I didn't like the name 'Aarav'. Wish you had changed it as you did for most of the things 😊

I really loved Kashish & Viraf's story too.. it was as good as Arnav & Khushi's even if it was much smaller.. The intensity of their relationship came through really well..


p.s. Why didn't you name any of your characters Barun? Just wondering.. I am not his fan 😛




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Posted: 12 years ago
hey i want u to do one thing ...send this story to the mills and boon India division
and i am sure they will accept it
u gotta publish man
command n the language is also good
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Posted: 12 years ago
Just found this one ,going to read..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Amazing story!!!!!
Just read t in one go.
I forgot who recommended this story to me but they were right this story is just too good
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Posted: 12 years ago
Ok, so I just finished the whole story and this is probably the most realistically portrayed fairytale/love story written for Arnav and Khushi.
It was passionate and fun with bouts of reality mixed in.
The thing that I liked the most about it was the fact that you gave us everything! A whirlwind romance, anger and redemption, proposal, marriage and even life after marriage!

Your character build up was amazing. Not only did we get a humane Arnav that can love and express emotions and a strong independent Khushi that can take care of herself, but we also got Nani, Shyam, Anjali and there conniving ways to meddle for a good cause!
That was just sheer brilliance!

The epilogues were just the icing on the cake. I knew that 'the girl' had to be Arnav and Khushi's daughter because her appearance matched Khushi's while her temper matched Arnav's. Viraf was an eye catching character. He seemed to be strong willed and powerful, just the right mix to tame a certain Raizada woman.
The very last part brought a huge smile on my face. Aarav Singh Raizada and Kashish Raizada were both getting the perfect love story that there parents were blessed with!
Simply perfect!

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Posted: 12 years ago
Juhi - this was such a glorious read. This was the first SS/FF i read by you (have read some of your os, but not the longer ones). I knew you were a good writer, but you blew me away with this one.

And - thank you for adding the epilogue. The Khushi (in the show and in your story) is a comparatively less layered and complex character than Arnav (easier to say simple - huh - got ASR on the brain i guess). But one thing that bothered me throughout the story was - at every step of the way, Arnav was helping her, encouraging her, building her up, at times to the extent of ignoring his own feelings and wants. And not once did Khushi really cotton on to it - or acknowledge it, if she did figure it out. But finally in the epilogue she does. Loved that bit of self realization and spouse-appreciation.

So history is all set to repeat itself with the twins and their to-be better-halves. Nice touch. Though to tell you the truth, i could not even see ASR and Khushi as having aged 25 years!

Thank you - for a tale very well told.

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