IPK FF:Love,Lies and Two Weddings?TH2 *COMPLETED* - Page 30

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Posted: 12 years ago
Part 3 was pure brilliance!!! I can't tell you how wonderful it felt to read about Arnav & Khushi's kids. Seeing them fall in love. And most importantly seeing Khushi & Arnav after 25 years of marriage still so in love! It really brought tears to my eyes & a lump in my throat. Thank you for such an awesome story.

Please do write something new soon!

Happy Holidays!
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Posted: 12 years ago
What a way to end this story!!! brilliant!

Loved how you weaved arnav and khushi into their kid's love stories!!! Arnav and khushi are still pretty cute!!!


You gave this story a very fitting ending! Thanks!
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Posted: 12 years ago
loved it
khushi and arnav just get cuter
kashish and viraf are cute too
and now aarav singh raizada and his girl
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Posted: 12 years ago
You gave an amazing ending!
Their children are in love and the parents, Arnav - Khushi are still very much in love.
It was so cute. And i really liked how they portrayed emotions.
From Kashish to Aarav.

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Posted: 12 years ago
I know sometimes, I comment too long, cause Im at a stage to express my opinion !

But here, you've left be surpised, amazed and awed at the epilgoue !
One of the biggest I ever read, and should I say, an absolutely lovely ending to the story of Love !

Loved every bit of it !
If I ever get out of this awe, Id make sure to tell you all in detail, but right now *bows down* You are an amazing writer
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Posted: 12 years ago
speechless!
wonderful ending to a epic love story...arnav khushi their small universe with kashish and aarav...one a child prodigy and other genius studying medical too good ha...i loved kashish and viraf's story and the ending with aarav was brilliant too...
i didn't expect a epilogue for this but from the day you started i felt restless to read to the end now that i have read the end i feel miserable to let it go:(
you weave the story so well...congratulations again for penning this one one outstandingly...
will try to catch with doing it right soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Its beautifulll. Loved every bit of it. Perfect ending.
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Posted: 12 years ago
😊
& so it ends. Where it all began.

I'll be honest and confess - I didn't quite get Kashish's line of reasoning for avoiding a relationship, though I guess the example of her illustrious parents would definitely have set the bar very high for her. Maybe she deserved a longer story. & we would have got ample opportunities to drool over THAT MAN (you know who...😳). Such a goody heart too. Knows when to shove that ego down where it should be. But...yeh dil maange more Expelli ji. Sigh. Some other time, maybe.

Arnav and Khushi, 25 years later, and still dhak-dhak-ing as strongly as ever. & other things. So Khushi is now the Nani-Anjali class manipulator, with Devi Maiya as the chief ally and ASR as the hidden facilitator/organiser. I loved that you finally closed that almost-kiss loop. We had missed that, hadn't we? & the coochie-cooing and innuendo-throwing on the phone. It's HOT! Abhi bhi. Proof of a job well-done by the writer.👏

Aarav singh Raizada, when will you be ready to tell us your own story? Soon? Say yes dammit.
*samajhdaaron ke liye ishaara hi kaafi hota hai*

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Posted: 12 years ago
hi thank you so much such a long update i mean it.Thanks for the Kashish meaning actually I was going to ask you the same.And you explained why you said before again and remember him yup she was horrified to see the resemblance of her father in him...I wish if you write on their kids Arav and Kahish story it will be very interestig to read...thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
should have known its their child their daughter
is it me or are their kids so like them too and yet not the same of course
no one and i mean no one can match the intensity of whats between arhi
there is only arhi who can do that theirs kids would have to take second place sorry folks but you cant beat the masters
haiyye this reminded me of their love story well i guess they were kinda inspired of her parents love story
well the intensity of arhi's love still hasnt diminished right even after 25 years of marriage
and how can it after all they are arhi
am glad kashish listened to her mothers advice and gave viraf the chance
they too will somehow make it together
as might aarav and the girl who fell in his arms just like his mother did in his fathers arma all those years ago
wow who would have believed it that the epilogue could be a mini sotry on its own right
but this goes and proves that you were worried unnecassrily that your this story would be appreciated much or not
well after the response you would have got for this am sure you are no longer worried about it
so you are the next writer for doing it right man i love that one even better than the show man
cheers for pm

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