IPK FF:Love,Lies and Two Weddings?TH2 *COMPLETED* - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats on thread 2... love the passion games the two play and the way they can neither stay away from each other nor keep their hands off each other... hope you have a happy ending planned for these two lovebirds, because those words on the Eiffel Tower by arnav are giving me the jitters! thank god my suspicion that it was anjali involved with nani and shyam in their machinations turned out to be true... loved how the sibling relationship evolved... now there is a new phase in arnav's and khushi's lives... eager for the concluding part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congrats on the second thread!
Loved the update as always!
But the best for me was comparing butter naans and Pizzas.
And Europe honeymoon is always romantic! Skiing, Long walks, Eiffel Tower, Gondola rides...the list goes on!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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about office romance..well two can play the game..
and poor vimla masi..why does it have to be her to get an almost coronary failure witnessing every public show of affection??
ah i guessed right about anjali...great that she's not the pathetic pea sized brained poojali in the serial...
what a honeymoon juhi ...awesome!!! and butter naans over pizza ...!!like seriously??
is khushi a preggy already??? or is it another surprise for us??or is it too early to guess??
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ps-congrats on the new thread !!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
Congratulations on new thread⭐️
I love anjali here...She is really a strong women😊
Then followed by the kiss...Vimla Maasi reminds me of Kantaben of Kal ho na ho 😆... Really if only the ffs had a visual effect...though it has in mind only...😛
Fantastic update...the office romance then the honey moon...excellently carved part...😉
Is she pregnant?? 😉...Waiting for the next part
Thanks for the pm...just loved the part😳


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Posted: 12 years ago
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I like the whole concept of leaving the newly weds alone...but at the same time...i was also feeling bad that everybody is leaving...mamiji..NK...anjali...shyam...nani...Dont you think it will get boring for the couple...and fun is always with family right...

And why was anjali and arnav's talk so mechanical..as if they are strangers saying good bye to each other...i mean when siblings who are so close...so dear to each other...are starting a new life...so i wanted some intensity in their convo...hmmm this might have happened because of your time constraint so i don't blame you...even in this short time you have written a beautiful story...

Why do i feel that you are just laying a trap and trying to make us believe that khushi is pregnant...I think they are not talking about a baby...

Please update soon😊


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice update. . Congos for new thread . . Thnx 4 pm ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: anuv123

I like the whole concept of leaving the newly weds alone...but at the same time...i was also feeling bad that everybody is leaving...mamiji..NK...anjali...shyam...nani...Dont you think it will get boring for the couple...and fun is always with family right...


And why was anjali and arnav's talk so mechanical..as if they are strangers saying good bye to each other...i mean when siblings who are so close...so dear to each other...are starting a new life...so i wanted some intensity in their convo...hmmm this might have happened because of your time constraint so i don't blame you...even in this short time you have written a beautiful story...

Why do i feel that you are just laying a trap and trying to make us believe that khushi is pregnant...I think they are not talking about a baby...

Please update soon😊





Thank you for your honesty!
About the first part of your comment, I can only say wait, and watch.
I still have two chapters coming up.
The second part, about Anjali and Arnav, the detachment in their talk was deliberate on my part. Arnav has learned that she lied to him, and he cannot fully trust her now. Whereas Anjali is now aware that he knows about her manipulation, and also that his priorities have changed.
Theses revelations have changed the equation between them, and they cannot ever go back to their earlier relationship.
I wanted to show that there is a certain distance between them now. They are still there whenever the other needs them, but the emotional dependence is no longer there.
Does that make sense now? Maybe I should have portrayed that change in a better way..
But thanks for letting me know what you thought!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: EXPELLIARMUS




Thank you for your honesty!
About the first part of your comment, I can only say wait, and watch.
I still have two chapters coming up.
The second part, about Anjali and Arnav, the detachment in their talk was deliberate on my part. Arnav has learned that she lied to him, and he cannot fully trust her now. Whereas Anjali is now aware that he knows about her manipulation, and also that his priorities have changed.
Theses revelations have changed the equation between them, and they cannot ever go back to their earlier relationship.
I wanted to show that there is a certain distance between them now. They are still there whenever the other needs them, but the emotional dependence is no longer there.
Does that make sense now? Maybe I should have portrayed that change in a better way..
But thanks for letting me know what you thought!


ya that makes sense now...Thanks for taking time out for reading my comment and explaining things to me...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
It's amazing how this is turning out to be the real IPK! I love how he takes care of her and is so attuned to her needs. Which is how ASR really is. The true ASR as we know him. (Not lover boy Arnie, happy go lucky college romeo who cannot understand his wife or sense how she feels!)
Pregnant? So quickly? And his words? Ominous? I hope not. I hope he's not in an accident when he is driving back to her! I love this story. I can feel the love they share. Isn't this how it's supposed to be?? At least in FF we an stick to the true essence of Arnav and Kushi and their love story! Thank-you for doing that.
Thanks for the PM.😃 Waiting for the next bit.

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