#3 Guzarish [My version D3] Parts 12-18 - Page 67

Originally posted by: --Kinjal--

Nope i dnt hav others...
u suggest some names if u gt :D

Originally posted by: --Kinjal--

Amazing part khushi Thanks!

i know no Kria no Rey...bt still i enjoyed reading it...aww yay..


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oh its nice to see everyone is helping them to be back together...yeah.

Woww RDX sir is back...yaay

againg cliffy pe choda na waha pe...u u you wont change na...nt a bit...hamesha you hang me thinking what wil happen...now whats was his plan? haha nope. Me not gonna change 🤣
Ahh so not fair...

Chalo koi nai...
Next update me dekh lungi...

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And swayam...gosh...

i know you might be bored hearing this from me again and again bt i cant help it u see...

* I love this swayam*
the way you portray his character here is Exactly same what i want him to be... aww i never get tired of hearing

Luv u for that

Cont soon dear

Originally posted by: asmaju

Hmm Replying to comments..Me waiting for an Update hopefully but bina pressure ke..

Originally posted by: Pihu.k11

Khushi.. U agn nailed it.. Aww thanks!
U portrayin swaron so beautifully evn better thn dat palki.. Haha, that's great to know dear!!
Dat sharon simmi n Rinni part was jus amazin.. It showed dat they aint only d followers of sharon buh also bestfrns.. Sharon is right.. Nobody hs any right to tk ur happiness away from u.. Its always on u,hw to tackle wid d situation..!! True. I personally dislike when some are shown like that in shows. Here, again, I wanted a change that Im sure everyone wanted as well.

Sharon is runnin frm swayam.. Ufff !! Sharon *shakes head* hehe

I lovd d gang's part.. Whn nil said.. We aint his frns anymore na.. I ws lik.. Awwwieee..
Now evryone knows d truth.. N m glad dat they does !! aww thank you!!

N d bst was whn swaron togthr dripped d idea of findin some one elz fr Reyaansh coz they somewea know hw it feels.. Fr a change.. RDX is too involved dis time.. I miss seeing him.. He's right.. Gand always land demselvs into trouble :p buh wht plan he tokd dem abt??? Mumma.. I too wana kno ^_^ Hehe dekho voh khud kya karta hai 😛

I lovd d swaron's part..
Swayam's words must hv pricked sharon's heart bt its only coz she is nt lettin her feelings out..
Swayam has always placed sharon's comfort at first place widout takin care of his own.. Dats our Majnu :) always understandn his Laila :p :p n m more glad dat sharon unlik d3 understands dis fact.. Probably nw she wud opn herslf !! Hopefully 😳

Reyam ka lil part was too gud.. I'v always lovd thr bond n happy tht m gettin to c full of dem ovr here..!!!

Ermmm.. T___ is gonna enter soon.. Kriya ki entry mei time h..
Here,Reyaansh knows d truth.. Wonder wht turn wud d story tk???
T____ a positiv o negativ character??? That only time and me will decide ;) You'll see when I reveal.
Wht wud hpn n how?? Cnt wait to read it..
Update real soon..

Whneva I read guzarish na.. I only wish to c kriyaansh togthr some day n also dat os of urs instantly comes to my mind always !

I js lovd dis one.. All abt UR DIL UR DOSTI UR DANCE !!

Originally posted by: rubykriyansh

Awsome update ..!
Loved it ..!
Thanks 4 d pm ..!

Originally posted by: yogini64

Poor sharon . . . . . Akele time hi nhi milta 😆
rinni simmi . . . . Vo bhi early morning . . . . . Kya kismat hai . . . . . Aaj apni frnds ki sweet chit chat sunani padegi 🤪 hehehe
amar makes tasty pasteries . . . . mm' yummy . . . . Send it to me 😛 on its way ;)
swayam vahi roam kar raha tha kya ans ki wait me? 😉 swayam baba hai jee ;)
finally . . . . Sabko pata chal hi gya kriyaansh ke bare me 😳
yeah . . . . Frnds ki zarurat . . . . . I'm glad yahan sab show ki tarah budhu nhi hai aur swayam ki baat bhi mante hai haha show mai it was plain annoying!
loved swaron's part 😊
he's feeling sorry for his behaviour . . . . . . He's so calm n composed . . . . . But sharon's state is so confusing
taani ki entry . . . . . Kara hi de . . . . Aise likh likh ke dara mat 😆 ----- 😛 Iss update mai nai but in 18, uski entry ho jayegi..

Originally posted by: akanksha_arsha

eekkksss... I ws just abt to go to sleep... Thank god i saw ur PM at ryt tym.. 😆 ...us till abour 3 am? 😲 Ur update... As usual... Amazing... I really love d way u write... 😃 ... Thank you!! Sharon as usual confused..bt u knw wat..in ur dis story..i really like swaron a lot... Atleast d way how sharon feels... Though its d same as in d epi..bt still... 😊 ... haha, i do feel its the same. thanks though :D Okay now... Moving on... So... The gang also finally knows abt kriyaansh... N RDX having a plan... Wow... Me shocked... And haan plzzz kria ko jaldi se leke aao na... Ab bht hogya... Taani ko beech m laana bht zaruri hai kya..???? :/ ... Urggg... Jo bhi hai...atleast tumhare 4th thread pe kria to aa jaani cahiye... :/ ... I dunno if 4th thread mai aa jayegi ya nai.. but ya.. i'll try to bring her asap.. but beech mai jo hona hai voh toh hoga hi.. patience my friend ;) And u giving nxt update kal..??? :O ... Wwwooopppiiieee... Me waiting eagerlyyy... 😃

Originally posted by: asmaju

For part 16.
I like it dear. The way things turned around seem so realistic. Each one has their own way to address to things happening around. Simii kind of pulling Rinni's leg was cute. These small moments increase the feel while reading and help to imagine the story easily. Sharon's reaction is totally justified as she is herself in confusion about the things happening lately around her. true.. she herself is confused to make a decision.. RDX comments over there was suprising. Loved the way all understood that what Rey must be going through. Though swaron are the ones who undertand it the best.:) . The swaron conversation was beautifully expressed. The way in which swayam understands her and sharon being stunned at this way of accepting things when it comes to her.<3 glad to know you loved it asma :D :D With regard to note. Reading your works has always been a stress buster. So it goes with I must say that you updating Guzarish is great full admist your schedule. lov you 🤗