#3 Guzarish [My version D3] Parts 12-18

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d3_rox

@d3_rox

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Posted: 12 years ago

#451

Wooow Khushi that was such an amazing update...

Loved the way Rey was remembering everything after he saw those things...

N the way sharon was confused n swayam was fearing to loose her...

The song was sooo apt 4 their situation...

U deacribed each n every emotion so well I cannot tell u...

Hats off to it!!!!!!

Plzzz update soon!!!

Thanx 4 the PM!!:):):)

-Tehmina!!!!:):)

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#452

beautiful & loved its...😭😭😭😭😭😭
update res of the chapter soon...

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shalini saroha

@shalini_arsha

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#453

ossoomm khushi...!!! Loved it..:) really an emotional one...:( swaron nd kriyaansh made me too cry...:( nd u really justified this song...:) perfect for their situation...:) but i didn't get one thing shivam party ki jackt thi kriya k paas toh i guess...chabilal nd ramaira act waali toh usne return kar di thi nxt day...if i m wrong plzzz correct mee... Fab. Update ...:) thanxx 4 pm

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Ameena

@Roxxy47

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#454

Superb part Khushi 😃...

Kria left 'Their' memories for Rey...

But Kria still has Rey's Black jacket the one he gave her on the way back from Shivam's party , right??

The song sequence was great, described very well...

Everyone in pain 😒...

Ah well hope everything comes back to normal..

Taani's entry , it sounds interesting cause as u said she is not the 'Immature' one in your FF...

Will be waiting for the next part...

N thanks for the pm 😊.

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Aanchal singh

@Artistic_Stroke

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#455

fabulous update

i wish kria comes back soon

song it was awesome and the way u potrayed it was amazing

thanks for pm

update soon

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#456

awesomeee update👏

loved itt😊

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Gayatri Jethani

@GayatriJethani

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#457

awesome update...
loved it
kriyansh nd swaron 😭 😭 feeling bad for them
song selection was good...
update soon
thnx for pm

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Nikki

@HR-DMG4life

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#458

Loved the update and thanks for the pm =)

Nikki <3

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shaani2209

@shaani2209

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#459

Short update...but i liked it...

the awkwardness between rey and vishakha was nicely put...for they had never spoken to each other as friends, its understandable...i liked the part where vishakha giving him privacy to open the parcel...

coming to the contents of the parcel...m sorry i dnt remember them and the moments attached to them...but m sure kriyansh fans will be having their memories attached to it...i liked the way u have penned that part, he remembering abt each and every memory behind those things she has given was nicely put...

the way u channelized their feelings with the song lyrics was beautifully done...

waiting to read about Sharon's decision and as u had said earlier that coming updates the gang will be having their parts to play, so yeah waiting for that too...

do update soon...

thanks for the pm...

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Yogini

@yogini64

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#460

Ye wale gifts kriya ke paas kaise they? 🤔
ye wali jacket to kriya ne show me vapas kar di thi . . . . . . . . Tere ff me nhi ki hogi 🤣
it seems ki usne sab hi de diya . . . . Apne paas kya rakha h fir? 😔
khushi tu bahot rulati hai . . . . . . Jaldi se kriya ko vapas la na 😭
swayam ne pehle toh bol diya josh me sharon ko decide karne k liye . . . . . . . . Now he's regretting 😆
poor sharon . . . . . Strict orders hai,, decision to kal hi dena h 😈
this song is so painful . . . . . Never wanted to see them going through this situation 😵
I don't have any problem wid taani if she don't have any crush or so on rey 😊
khushi,, u r going inactive na,,, but why did u locked all ur previous OS . . . . . .??
the 1 associated wid guzarish as well 😔

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