#3 Guzarish [My version D3] Parts 12-18

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Asma

@-FrozenRain-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#431

Originally posted by: ..first.rain..
Chalo. Me going for dinner now. Probably won't log back in till tomorrow. Hope to see many comments...

Have it peacefully :)

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

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Posted: 12 years ago

#432

Great update! Can't wait to read more! Thanks for the update :)

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Crazy4AshVik

@Crazy4AshVik

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Posted: 12 years ago

#433

Beautifully penned👏

And yeah..the song was so apt for the situation..it really blended well with the thoughts and ideologies of the four individuals.

Pls update soon😃

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Twinkle_d3

@Twinkle_d3

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Posted: 12 years ago

#434

Loved it..
U r a great writer
this story is far better thn d3..
Update soon :D

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annie mathias

@anniemathiaskr

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Posted: 12 years ago

#435

it was awesome loved it
brilliant

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pallavi.14

@pallavi.14

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Posted: 12 years ago

#436

loved it..
i'm speechless..
wonderfully described the pain and desire they all have for each other...

i just loved the way used lyrics of song...
it is just beautiful!!!
and the things which kriya gave to rey they have gr8 significance...

thanks for pm..
update soon...

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vaishali

@Vaish24

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Posted: 12 years ago

#437

i can read the first part as million times as possible especially the memories part and rey's reaction to it...

sau dard hai tera fav gaana hai?????

haan so it was beautifully described...

just loved it totally...

so pure it was...

but i do have a question... rey don't wanna think logically but i do...

so i wanted to ask... mask uske paas aaya kaisa????

did she climb up at his house???

shivam ki party ke baad ke samay jacket diya toh uska kya huya???

main subah se hi 10-15 baar padh chuki hun...

totally loved it...